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 Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:20 pm
Under the stars this dream proclaims
A love so fearfull, so unplain.
Years of worry, nights of misery,
Convince this heart to love in a hurry.
Who would know it was all a lie?
Months it took for my arms to untie.
So how can I be the one to express
What it feels like to catch my breath?
One year becomes captivating
As time mends, finally enchanting;
Who knew I could rest
And finally catch my breath?
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:31 pm
very nice... a little short for my taste but ver good none the less...
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 11:33 pm
I'm still sad from reading your other poem crying
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