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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 2:44 am
Theme:
Make a costume, make it candy themed, make it black and orange... whatever you want so long as it is Halloween themed.
Judging Rubric:
6 - Orginality 7 - General Appeal 7 - color Usage & layering 5 - How well it works with the round's Theme 25 - Total Score
People who still need to submit:
- - S a r a L a n g -
- xXThe-PlumXx
- -Le Chien Chat-
- Sexy_Top_Model
- DanJF
- [ Danger Woman ]
- Ms Sadie
- crazyanimefan
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 9:42 pm
63/75 768/875 Navi- 6.6.5.5=22 The face of this avi is terrifying and as such I don't like to look at it for long. But what I've noticed about the rest of the avi while avoiding the face is that the gold is a bit too heavy at the bottom and almost nonexistent at the top. I think it would've been better if you had used just the striped tattoo or the anklets rather than both. gray 6.4.5.5=20 this is my second favorite out of the entrys this week The face is so sinister, but the rest of it is far from it. i liked the morbid face but it all faded from there, the white looks like it doesnt fit in and its quite clumped. the socks distract me, as do the shoes. i think the gold anklets take a bit from it, and i agree with nav about the gold. i think that the black legs with the gold tattoo would look quite unique and add to the avatar with a few other tricks, but how it is, is a tad disapointing. i love the head of the avatar though! Xin - 6.5.5.5 = 21 It's cute, but I think it needs more gold at the top, or just no gold at all. Also, there's like a hint of blue that kinda bothers me
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:34 am
71/75 772/875 Navi- 6.6.7.5=24 I adore this avi. It's one of my favorites this round. Even though it looks simple there are still some things you did with the layering that I really like. The shirt layering, the skirts, and the pumpkin with the sacred leaf, for example. It's just terribly cute. gray 6.7.6.5=24 this is my favorite out of this entire round. its simply adorable the only thing i dont like about it is that the striped shirt and boots are a set, and match too well. sets are frowned upon sad Xin - 6.6.6.5 = 23 I like it, but I think more green is needed at the torso, and it looks just a bit set-ish
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:36 am
67/75 764/875 Ms Sadie My only regret is that this avatar is impossible in Gaia. sad  Navi- 6.6.6.5=23 This is a really busy avi, but the colors are really well distributed and make for an awesome color scheme. The only things that really bother me about it is the lack of actual white above the neck line and the zodiac mask. That shade of gray and how flat it makes the face irks me. gray 5.6.6.5=22 the white seams inconsistant and blotchy, the theme of a witch on halloween isint to origanal. the layering is nicely done and it is a very well done avatar, you guys have proven you work well with this type of a theme, but its still not the best Xin - 6.6.5.5 = 22 I really am quite liking this one. It's really uh... busy, so naturally, there are some stray colors, but most are accounted for. And... the layering is... :/
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 1:51 pm
66/75 766/875 DanJF  I love it, I hope you do too! =D Navi- 6.5.6.5=22 This really reminds me of one of the people I grew up with. She could never afford to buy a costume or anything so she always made hers from stuff she had laying around the house. The stripes on the cape remind me of a dish towel... and just saying that makes me feel respectful to what the cape was meant to be. xD What I don't like about this avi is how much the brown and orange run together to look like the same color or just a blob sometimes. gray 6.4.6.5=21 Xin - 6.6.6.5 = 23 COOL! I like it. It's really original, but it's also pretty traditional. And I liked how the items kinda blended into each other. I would've tried to get rid of the red though.
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:50 am
55/75 729/875 Navi- 5.5.4.5=19 I'm far from in love with this avi. It looks like you started in the right direction and then somehow got sidetracked into adding too much black. The orange needs to be worked into the outfit more. And you really could have toned down the black. It's overkill with layering and makes the entire thing looked cluttered in a bad way. gray - 5.4.4.5=18 i dont get the theme if you expect to win, i would sugest to step up your game! Xin - 5.5.4.4 =18 It's too dark, Halloween isn't actually that dark. Many great red and black avis can be made, but that doesn't mean they're Halloween related... More orange would've uh... helped
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 4:05 pm
62/75 785/875 Navi- 6.5.6.5= 22 Oh no. Your avi is victim to too much fog machine smoke! (That stuff burns if you breathe it for too long... that'll wipe the smile off her face) The fog annoys me some... it blocks the layering on some of the outfit, like the tail... and it mutes the colors of the avi, which otherwise look great. gray 6.3.5.5=19 it seams like without the smoke your avatar was to plain for you so you needed something to wow us.... the best you could do was the smoke? The smoke downgrades this avatar and distracts me while trying to focus on layering, and the avatar itself. its like a bad mask. and not the scary kind used for halloween! Xin - 6.5.5.5 = 21 Not amazing, not that bad. I agree, the smoke was a negative touch. The red is detracting, but it looks pretty Halloween-y
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 6:11 pm
61/75 794/875 [ Danger Woman ] I give you... "Girl out on a dark night trick or treating as a murderous cheerleader"  Navi- 6.5.4.5=20 I really love the theme of this avi. The simplicity of the avi's outfit (which I'm pleased to see you still went out of your way to match even though it's a themed avi) really works and I'm surprised that I actually like the use of the backdrop. Usually I hate those things... mostly for the reason that the tote proves- items blend into them too much. gray 5.5.5.5=20 minus all accesories. you have 3 items on, that being the dress, shoes and socks. the layering on the avatar itself is terrible, the layering around the avatar is amaturish, this isint the best of your work danja. i have favorited alot of your designs but i feel you could have done more. hate to sound harsh. crying Xin - 6.5.5.5 = 21 It's an interesting concept, and it works. I love the eyes! Yeah, it is a bit simplistic, but it's a cheerleader... :/ *gigglegiggle*
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 7:20 pm
47/75 739/875 xXThe-PlumXx Here you go  Navi- 5.3.4.5=17 I'm sorry you had to rush so much this week because it really showed in this avi. The colors are all over the place in shades and distribution. It just... doesn't look good. gray 5.2.3.4=14 a couple rounds ago you said "ftw!" but this entry doesnt look like your going for the win. i love you plum, and you have been great throughout this competition, im sure you can do ten times this avatar though. theres no effort and i doubt any possibility of you being here for the next round :'( i hate to be cruel! crying i've grown attached to you guys :'( Xin - 5.4.3.4 = 16 Uh.. well. Yeah, the shades of yellow really bug me, and it doesn't really look Halloween to me. And, a bit like... head heavy
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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 4:35 pm
Results:
Winner: - S a r a L a n g - Loser: xXThe-PlumXx
Round Scores:
71 - - S a r a L a n g - --- 772
67 - Ms Sadie --- 764
66 - DanJF --- 766
63 - Sexy_Top_Model --- 768
62 - -Le Chien Chat- --- 785
61 - [ Danger Woman ] --- 794
55 - crazyanimefan --- 729
47 - xXThe-PlumXx --- 739
Overall:
1. [ Danger Woman ] --- 794
2. -Le Chien Chat- ---785
3. - S a r a L a n g - --- 772
4. Sexy_Top_Model --- 768
5. DanJF --- 766
6. Ms Sadie --- 764
xXThe-PlumXx --- 739
7. crazyanimefan --- 729
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