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mimi-imi

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 1:57 am


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Please critisize*

Please and thank you~

~Mi

Edit: The first time I had Http:// twice, so I had to fix that up, and ended up deleting the "Please crit" So, I fixed it.

But really, Even if it's something like "resize it" (with alot more information) It'd be really helpful.

Plus any colour suggestions!
PostPosted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 7:11 pm


Here are some ideas for how to make her arm to look less awkward
I did them as picture edits instead of descriptions this time around
I hope that's ok with you...

thought one:
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thought two:
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:32 am


It's okay, I'd rather have picture edits than descriptions, because half the time, I don't understand.
And I see what you mean, since it looks like someone's bending her arm backwards.

But personally, I think the second one is closer, since it makes more sense to me. What I sort of don't understand about the edit, is the lines near her throat, if you could go into details about that, it'd be much appreciated.

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~Mi

P.S: I'm having some trouble with my tablet pen, so my replies/re-edits will take a little longer than usual.

Thanks for reading!

Edit: I made her hand behind her tail because at the moment, I really can't be bothered to fix it with my dodgy tablet. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:54 pm


wow! This edit of yours looks much better!
I'd just say that with the hand behind her butt the position still looks extremely awkward, but not as odd as before
also, the hand looks to me a little wide, and I know that drawing small hands is tricky, so I suggest circling as wide as you want the hand to be, and then zooming in to draw it
for example:

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then

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getting

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(roughly, the hand I drew was rather smalland funny looking, but hopefully you get the point)

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:57 pm


also, the red lines on the neck and body were just reference for me
not anything you needed to fix
sorry if that confused you
I just forgot to erase them before saving sweatdrop
PostPosted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:47 am


How about we just totally make her armless? biggrin Yes? Okay, no,
But anyway, here's the third edit, since I don't want her arms too down (because for me, it makes her butt look too big. redface )

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Also, as for the hands, I can safely blame that on the thick brush I was using and the lack of sensitivity. (Large brushes are some things I like to stick to, when etching so I can erase whatever I don't need and my lineart looks smaller)

If it's not too much trouble, I don't mind suggestions for her hands, because I have the most trouble with them.

~Mi

P.S: I added extra just to entertain! ninja

Edit: I made her hand (near her face) a little smaller, but I'd probably fiddle around with it till I'm happy with the fingers.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 3:23 pm


lawl, no, the fingers look great
and I love the face and boob tape XD
well, since she's bent at the waist, her arm should be that long
but if you bend the arm, it can be as short as you want it
and
what is she holding?
a flashlight? XD
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