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 Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:07 pm
 gungirl.deviantart.comso it's been a good 2 months since I've posted something... The excuse is that I've been working on my portfolio but I've gotten good comments on it if anyone cares about that biggrin anyways I know the guy's legs look weird I'm still working on it but I thought I would just update you guys with my latest work to make ya happy
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:05 pm
this is so cute! what a sweet concept good job!
the only thing is that the girl's face seems too spread out or big nd she's missing eyebrows lol, unless you wanted her that way .. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 2:45 pm
it looks fantastic...how long did you work on it??
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:03 pm
xazn_pridex it looks fantastic...how long did you work on it?? with all the time put together maybe 2 hours, but it was spread out through 3-4 days and I just finished the sketch the way I wanted it yesterday and now I'm working on the line art
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 7:07 am
very very cute i must say :]
all im gonna have to say is to add eyebrows on the girl cause she has none and mayb u could make them blushing thats always cute 4laugh
u dont have to tho it looks perfect the way it is if u leave it
great job mrgreen
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:46 pm
oookay~!
so, there are some serious things you need to look at first before you start inking it
1) The dude's (guy's) right leg (our left) is seriously wonky around the knee. It gets too thin when mergeing into the knee from the thigh, and the knee itself is down a little too far, and should be brought back up along the thigh slightly, and should face more towards us so that the shin and foot don't seem out of place. For some reason, his odd knee also makes him look smaller than the girl. Most likely because she is more agressive with her knee facing forwards, and he is more reserved with her wonky knee tucked in closer to himself.
2) The dude's feet are a little small. They should be wider to match proportionally with his body and the girl's feet.
3) Okay, so, there's something odd going on with the chick's mouth, though it's mostly the shape and the position. To make it look more like a mouth (in my opinion), it should be a tinsey bit higher up with a fuller upper lip.
But it's still an amazing drawing, hun~!
I can't wait to see it when it's finnished
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