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misuyume

PostPosted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:13 pm


" Me "

My hope always changes,
Like a set of strings.
Whenever I pull too hard,
It always seems to sting.
My eyes are like a rainbow,
Shinning with a different light.
Capturing the essence,
That I deem as life.
My voice is a ray of sound,
With different things you may hear.
Happiness flying high,
Sadness running clear.
My mind is like a jungle,
Different things you might seek.
Rainbow colored monkeys,
The natural beauty of a stream.
I am Me,
That's what I say.
I look for the beauty,
In each and everyday.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 1:01 pm


I like it, you choose a vary creative way to describe yourself.

Requiem of the Exodus


Scazarith
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 6:10 pm


misuyume, as always you deliver a top notch performance! ^.^ This really is a great poem with wonderful imagery and sense description. I had to laugh at the rainbow monkeys, lol. The only thing about the entire poem that bothers me is the lack of rhyme between "...might seek" and "...of a stream". Like I said though, overall I loved it! heart
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