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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:13 pm
" Me "
My hope always changes, Like a set of strings. Whenever I pull too hard, It always seems to sting. My eyes are like a rainbow, Shinning with a different light. Capturing the essence, That I deem as life. My voice is a ray of sound, With different things you may hear. Happiness flying high, Sadness running clear. My mind is like a jungle, Different things you might seek. Rainbow colored monkeys, The natural beauty of a stream. I am Me, That's what I say. I look for the beauty, In each and everyday.
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 1:01 pm
I like it, you choose a vary creative way to describe yourself.
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 6:10 pm
misuyume, as always you deliver a top notch performance! ^.^ This really is a great poem with wonderful imagery and sense description. I had to laugh at the rainbow monkeys, lol. The only thing about the entire poem that bothers me is the lack of rhyme between "...might seek" and "...of a stream". Like I said though, overall I loved it! heart
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