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 Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 8:03 pm
hey guys havnt been on in a long time. ive been improving tho. i still cant do those darn feet tho mrgreen o well ill get it eventually.
well heres one of my new characters for a comic im making. its like a fan comic thing for this comic on diviantart called salad days. its like so amazing so yea heres my character:
http://oxellebellxo.deviantart.com/art/SD-c-c-100474824
and heres the link to that person's comic if u wanna check it out:
http://tyshea.deviantart.com/
another thing u guys. guess wat?!?! i figured out how to use my scanner xd took me long enough. well all my pictures will b looking semi normal now by the way it looks on the screen. well i have to go but feel free to comment and critisize all u like.
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 2:23 am
OK, first I gotta say this, I've looked over three of your drawings and they look extremely similar. =/ You have to try drawing something else and take some time to look at anatomy lessons or something.
Anyway, her head is much to big. =/ It will not look cute forever, trust me. THE MOUTH DOESN'T GO THERE.  Try drawing less freakishly huge eyes in different situations too. You really need to check out some of the guilds tutorials. =]
(P.S. You should work on your writing too, when I was reading the 'background' and came across to you talking about her powers I was like
"Wtf?! D: *re-reads*" Don't just bring in something like powers out of nowhere, at least put in the description she has some kind of powers so you don't confuse the reader, after all we don't all know what you mean by an "ink baby" right off the bat. Then where did the bringing to life part come from?? D:
Gurl you need to have a serious talk with your English teacher! >:U *snap snap*)
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 11:13 am
The above comment plus to have cleavage, you need boobs.
And that dress MUST be tight on her because I don't see any boobs.
And she must be anorexic because that dress is just falling off of her.
Strange if it's squeezing her boobs. >_>
And all of your human drawings like, have their hands behind their back.
That's obviously a sign that you won't even attempt to do hands. D:
And the SD's before their name must stand for Super Deformed right?
Well, with the style you're doing and how tall they are, it's NOT Super Deformed.
(sorry if it doesn't mean Super Deformed)
But yeah, you're getting better from the older drawings you did. biggrin
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 7:34 pm
i know i suck at english :/ just ask my english teacher lol. ill rewrite it when i get to it :]
and for the SD its for the comic name salad days even though my people do look super deformed lol :] so yea i know i have to work on all the anatomy and stuff so yea ill look at some more drawings and try some more drawings.
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 10:10 pm
As everyone else was saying, you'll want to work on anatomy. First off, you might want to practice with curves, to give your characters a more feminine bodies; there are lots of tutorials for that. After that, just fine-tuning and getting proportion in check will help you. Good luck!
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:01 pm
You have your own sense of style. I like that.
It seems to me like almost everyone who replied are telling you to draw like an expert.
yes, they said look at tutorials.
But from the looks of it, I like how they are.
I do see that you draw in an angle. / This might be how you tilt your head.
Hands are difficult but what you did in your comics are wonderful; it matches the feet. Meaning, they don't have to be difficult, they can be like mitten hands.
Your characters mouth.. that is cute how they are on the side, but in some scenes like page 1 where she and that guy are in the same panel... seems weird. It looks like they are looking at each other but not talking to each other.
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 7:02 am
thanks u guys for the help. i gotta look up ALOT of tutorials for body form thats for sure :]
and i have issues w. drawing at a slant. dont know y tho. i have to fix that too. thanks u guys so much for the help!
ill totally keep that in mind mrgreen
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