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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 8:48 am

I wanted to make something serene and pretty but most of all I wanted to create a finished picture entirely on the computer. (Normally I would scan the lineart and work on it from there.)

Just thought I'd post it up for crit here because the guilds were down when I did it and the most I've ever gotten from PP was "cute" or "her b00bz shud be bigger"

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Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 10:18 am

Bah, I hate getting those kind of comments. This is pretty.

The coloring is kind of sloppy and the bottom half of her left leg is rather long. I like her face, you really caught the moment there. Props on creating a finished picture, I can never get myself to do that.

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Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 10:41 am

Chax

Bah, I hate getting those kind of comments. This is pretty.

The coloring is kind of sloppy and the bottom half of her left leg is rather long. I like her face, you really caught the moment there. Props on creating a finished picture, I can never get myself to do that.

The colouring on the tights isn't too hot, no. For some reason it seemed a good idea at the time, you know?
Yeah, I see that the knee should actually stop somewhere around the second stripe line from where the knee is now- do-lee noted, as I would say If I were in an Amercian hospital drama.

Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 11:16 am

I can dig it, although there seems to be a strange relationship between her shoulderline and where I imagine her hips to be.

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Posted: Thu Oct 06, 2005 1:15 pm

Dr. Valentine

I can dig it, although there seems to be a strange relationship between her shoulderline and where I imagine her hips to be.

Hmm, I'm wondering if that is again an effect of the overly long left leg?

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