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Tusia

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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 11:11 am

hi..I have a sketch, about which I am not completly sure is good drawn..>_> he part which is worrying me are legs.
any help will be appreciated heart

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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 5:08 am

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Xiaa

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Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 1:31 pm

Well, it's a chibi so there's not really anything wrong with it. Chibis can get away with a lot of exaggerated anatomy. Or no anatomy at all.

But this is my opinion:
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He just needs a bit of feet? I guess. I'm really bad with perspective, but his legs seemed kind of flat, so I just tried to make them look grounded (I guess that's the term?) And I thought the arms were too short, but that's just an opinion. It's pretty well done imo. I wouldn't worry about them. These are just my opinion.

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