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The Spiral Song

Once there was a villaged cursed.
One year it twisted to the worst.
The pattern was the people's foe.
It led them to the pond below.

The Spiral winding leads the way,
The curse reveals our bond.
So let's go walking, you and me
Down to Dragonfly Pond

We'll creep along, slow as snails
While we recount the deadly tales
Of boys who died, deep inside
and in the grave, they hop and hide.

The Spiral winding leads the way,
terror sealed our bond.
So let's go walking, you and me
Down to Dragonfly Pond

Obsession hates an indifferent face,
It works 'til nothing's left in place.
A simple storm, a tiny scar,
They twist for you, go far and far

The Spiral winding leads the way,
Oh, did we have a bond?
So let's go walking, you and me
Down to Dragonfly Pond

Art is twisted (nothing's safe)
In doctor's words, there is no faith.
We're tied together, hand by hand
There's no way to leave this land.

The Spiral winding leads the way,
What's right and what is wrong?
So let's go walking, you and me
Down to Dragonfly Pond

The curls in your hair are everywhere.
If people saw you, they would stare.
There's no more room (we're truly doomed)
So we will walk down to our tomb.

The Spiral winding leads the way,
Our doom it was our bond
So let's go walking, you and me
Down to Dragonfly Pond

Makes me wanna read and watch the Uzumaki now. I've never heard of it but I love horror movies.

I give you props for rhyming and at first the poem seemed redundant but I liked it. Each line seemed almost to short but they made the poem seem to be quick and unsure - in a good way. I liked it.

YAAAY sistersan! Well done! ^.^