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This idea suddenly came to me as I was looking through the role plays. I really would like some input from you guys to make this a decent rp since this is the first time I've actually made one. PLEASE SUGGEST ANYTHING!



Years into the future, the military (Any suggestion on the country?) started a secret project to make ordinary humans into weapons. The volenteers (Yes, they willingly volenteered, though there will probably be a couple of kids that were 'adopted' and ended up here) have been altered so they are now perfect for stealth, assinations, or as a ballista weapon (many variations). For their first test drive, they are sent out to blend in with society to test their ability to control themselves and not give away their secret. Where better to do that in a normal college?

Rpers can be the experiments posing as students/staff, or normal students and staff.

What do you think? I really need someone to bounce my ideas off of since this is my first time actually planning an rp. A little help please?

I rather like this idea; I think it at least has potential. It's a lot more unique than the first RP I ever started. XP I would suggest putting the profile skeleton in a code box so everyone has the items in bold when they post. Also, you might want to mention a bit more about the school they're going to/working at. As you have it written right now it's more of a side note, but that's where the RP will be taking place, right?

If you want to talk about ideas feel free to send me a PM


Name: Brycen "Bee" Riley
Age: 19
Appearance: Brycen has naturally golden-blond hair, into which he has dyed several black streaks. His favorite colors are, in fact, black and yellow, and he often wears the two at the same time. His yellow and black appearance has lead to his being given the nickname "Bee". He stands merely 5'7"; small and thin, but flexible and good at getting into smaller spaces without being noticed.
Background: Brycen is an orphan, abandoned on the steps of the military base when he was an infant. No one is quite sure why his mother chose to leave him there, unless his father was a soldier. No one ever claimed him, so he was given to the scientists to use in their experiments. He grew up under their care, and that of the other military personnel. As such, he is rather knowledgeable about military protocol and how certain operations should be run.
Ability: Stealth/Gymnastics
Student/Staff: Student
Misc:

I have made a map, a very rough map, but a map none the less!

Here's a rough map of the geographic area:


Here's a rough map of the town:


Here's what the campus looks like (from far away):


And the hallways:


Here's the dorms:



These aren't the best and I know I need to add more, but I'm tired so I'll work more on this tomorrow. I'll add descriptions and sketch buildings in more detail (though scenery is not my strong point...).