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Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 8:59 am


65/75
459/500


[ Danger Woman ]
Here is what I would like to call "The lone strawberry". Oh boy! It's pixels look delicious, don't you think? ;3

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graycat: 5.6.7.5=23
i think you did a great job at really sculpting a fruit by using the guise, to hide the body, but because you used the guise i dont get what you needed the red and green body dye for sweatdrop i think you could have substituted something else for the impact of the vines though.

marwolfer: 6.5.5.5=21
I see where you were going, but I just don't like it. The green in the vines is totally unappealing and icky.

Dee - 6.5.5.5 = 21
PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 9:03 am


67/75
440/500


graycat- 5.6.7.5=23
thank you for not using the pineapple hat, but the top of you're avatar is what im rating you down on, Its obvious that you were someone who wanted to actually cosplay the fruit, and you did a great job of that all through out the torso and legs, with the texture and diffrent shades that kind of make a shadow type thing going on, but you're greens clash a bit. i think you should have been matching the hat, not the hair.

marwolfer- 6.7.5.5=23
I really like it, but like gray said, the greens on top don't match well. I think that either the hat or the hair would have been the home run.

Dee - 6.5.5.5 = 21

Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain


Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 6:48 pm


62/75
427/500


xXThe-PlumXx

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It's a Malay Roseapple
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gray- 6.6.6.4=22

i think you like most others were trying to get a high score on origanality, and not really with the avatar itself, this is an origanal entry and i've never heard of the fruit before, and you obviously cosplayed the fruit, and that was an option in the challange, but when cosplaying its important to try and match everything towards you're image, and i think you're reds kind of clash with each other but also, they arent as pink as they should be, i understand that shade of pink is hard to come by with tektek, but that means you probubly should have picked a diffrent fruit (i figured you would do plum)

marwolfer- 6.4.5.4=19
I like your originality, but the clashing of the reds made me physically cringe. I am glad that you didn't do a plum, because it's in your name. ^.^

Dee - 6. 5. 5. 5 = 21
PostPosted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 9:50 pm


64/75
432/500


Ms Sadie
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ref pic.

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gray- 6.7.6.5=24

the only thing i could recomend to make this avatar better would to have a few more specks of brown, but perhaps if you did that then it would be over done, so i guess its a good thing you did it, but it does apear to be missing some brown at first glance, meaning its a b+ but that theres no way to get to an A

marwolfer: 6.4.5.4=19
Nice idea, but the yellows are throwing me off. It's unappealing. You have to execute your concept or you won't get the idea across.

Dee - 6.5.5.5 = 21

Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain


Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 4:29 am


67/75
451/500


Sexy_Top_Model
Grapes...mixed green and purple
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gray- 6.5.6.5=22
i think this is great and quite origanal but its just not "wow" i can see that the layering is done well and the colors for the most part match well but your wow factor is unsually low! sad

marwolfer: 6.5.6.5=22
I like how you really thought about this week's challenge and tried to come up with something totally original. It shows a lot of thought and effort, but for all that's going on, it is a little "blah."

Dee - 6.6.6.5 = 23
PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 1:49 pm


49/75
389/500


misha 2567
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strawberry

hey you know i tried i tried


gray- 5.4.4.5=18
it looks like you were trying to do a cosplay, and though thats fine, you took a big risk, and it didint pay off, this avatar is quite hideous, top heavy and frankly you didint do a good job at all, im sorry for being harsh, but if you do make it past this round, i sugest trying to make you're avatars a little less average, and a little more WOW in this contest you are aloud to use the at, take their sugestions to heart!

marwolfer: 4.3.3.2=12
I hate this. This avatar is a disaster! The proportions are terrible and it doesn't match!

Dee - 6.4.4.5 = 19

Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain


Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 11:28 am


64/75
439/500


CaramelAngel
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Man, this challenge was difficult. Hope you like what I came up with. Very purple I know.. sweatdrop


marwolfer: 6.5.4.7=22
I luff the idea! It's like a sugar plum fairy! It's cute! But the colors don't match, which absolutely gives me fits.

graycat: 6.5.5.5=21
i think it really does have potential, purple is a pretty hard color to work with and this entry just proves that even more, its clashy and a bit sloppy though the style in itself is well done!

Dee - 6.5.5.5 = 21
PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 1:06 pm


61/75
421/500



ChiBi m0nkEy
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Is a tomato! Please note that anything that looks a little off or not matching is only to make it more red or more round. Which means that it has white feet to make it rounder. If not then it would look like it has an abnormal growth..


marwolfer: 6.4.3.7=20
I like your thinking and the fact that it's a tomato, but it still has to match. Sorry.
graycat: 6.5.5.5=21
i think its a good attempt and im glad you were so concerned about the shape, but since it doesnt have to be accesable on gaia, you didint need a base there for you didint need the legs, you could have just stacked items ontop of each other, and worried more about the color.

Dee - 6.4.5.5 = 20

Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain


Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:37 pm


69/75
442/500


Neverar Ultima
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I give you.....
Rotten BANANA!
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...sorry, i did a normal one, but i left it out too long....i think that it grew a head...... 0.o

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marwolfer: 6.6.4.7=23
I luff this! Great originality! I like how you're peeled open and oozing. ^.^

Dee - 6.7.6.5 = 24

graycat: 6.7.4.5=22
i think this is hilarious and very creative, the only thing that stops this from being a perfect score would be, the lunar thing in the back? i dont get what that symbolises or is trying to look like.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:39 pm


72/75
465/500


-Le Chien Chat-
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.User ImageStar Fruits
Star fruits, also known as carambola, are oval, up to 5 inches (12.5 centimeters) long, with five prominent ribs or wings running their length. A cross-section cut is shaped like a star. The edible skin is a waxy orange-yellow; it covers a dry, paler yellow flesh. Its flavor is similar to plums, sweet but bland. Star fruits do not need to he peeled or seeded. They are most often sliced and added to fruit salad or used as a garnish. Unripe fruits can be cooked in stews or chutneys.


Color and aroma are the best indicators of ripeness. The fruits should be a deep golden-yellow and there should be brown along the edge of the ribs. The aroma should he full and floral. Green fruits can be kept at room temperature to ripen, then refrigerated for up to two weeks. Star fruits are cultivated in Hawaii, Florida and California, though some are still imported from the Caribbean. Fresh fruits are available from August to February.


Dee - 6.6.6.5 = 23

marwolfer: 6.7.7.5=25
Utter perfection. Matching, shape, originality. A+
graycat: 6.7.6.5=24
this is fantastic, you really did look at the fruit and decide around it what would look good, what would match and what would have the same essence. good job (:

Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain


Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:12 am


66/75
430/500


Makoto_Gin
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Outfit is based around a pitaya a.k.a. dragonfruit.Here's a dictionary link to the fruit with pictures.


marwolfer: 6.6.5.5=22
It doesn't match... I'm sorry for being the matching Nazi, but it can't be helped! I do like the little butterfly pollinating, though. Cute.
graycat: 6.6.5.5=22
i think that its a very origanal idea but you could have done a better job at matching, its really very cute, and stylish, but theres just a bit of it thats clashy and doesnt match that's bringing you're points down.

Dee - 6.6.5.5 = 22
PostPosted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 2:39 pm


68/75
412/500



ivy the pixie
im doing pomagranate
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what do u think?


marwolfer: 6.7.5.4=22
This one made me laugh! The Chyaku makes it a little bulky though.
graycat:6.6.6.5=23
i think you could have used a guppy helm instead of the scarf, or something else to take away the excess wait
Dee- 6.6.6.5 = 23

Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain


Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 8:57 pm


71/75
433/500


DanJF
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Its based off of the blood orange:
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marwolfer: 6.7.5.7=25
Normally I am totally against sets, but it looks good for the theme. I've never heard of the fruit, but its colors are quite inspiring!

graycat: 6.5.7.5=23
it looks nice but the wow factor isint very big, it matches very well and the layers are average but like alot of you're designs its missing something big

Dee- 6.5.7.5 = 23
PostPosted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 6:29 pm


60/75
425/500



Tenshi654
the fruit is a cherry ... and for the judges, tell them i want them to forget the bottom half and judge just the top.

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Dee - 6.5.5.5 = 21
Ah. I liked this. Until you said it's a cherry. I thoguht it was a realyl cute little strawberry mushroom person thinng. o_o And I agree with Gray, what you turn in, is what we judge.

marwolfer: 6.5.5.4=20
It's boring... There's nothing to say except *yawn*

gray: 4.5.5.5=19

1, The little note you put in with the entry kind of sparked a fuse with me. i dont like people telling me what i can and can not judge, this is an avatar competition im going to rate your ENTIRE avatar weather or not you think the bottom half fits the theme or not! if you want us to only judge the top how about you make it so all there is is a top! if you dont do that then you've made the avatar and you cant tell us to not judge a certaint part of it!
however, this is not why you've gotten a bad rate from me, What is it two items? rain coat and the squid arm? thats not creative it had no layers and nothing to risk matching with its a safe and boring attempt that is quite disapointing. i expected something better from you.

Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain


Here Comes the Muffin Man
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 9:11 am


68/75
419/500


crazyanimefan
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Sorry if you get this PM twice, but I wasnt sure if I sent in the right entry. This one is still based on cherries, but after I modified it a little bit, I accidentally clicked send and wasnt sure I had already replaced the links. This is the one I want to enter.


marwolfer: 6.6.6.5=23
I like how you used the antennae in to make it look like she had cherries in her hair. Kawaii desu~ But the nonmatching of the reds really gives me fits.

graycat:6.6.6.5=23
i agree with mar for the most part, creative but it clashes a bit.

DEe - 6.5.6.5 = 22
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