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 Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 9:52 am
ok so i just wanted to know wat everyone thought of breaking dawn. me i think it was ok a lil tooo perfect but still really good. some parts better than others but still good. soo yeaa! lol
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 6:38 pm
I think it was the perfect ending to the most perfect story. I was highly upset that it looked like Jacob was going to be alone and that Bella was going to die but when Jacob imprinted on Renesme I had to put the book down and I actually went around my house screaming "He imprinted on the baby!!!". It was I didn't even need to read anymore, I was completely satisfied that he found someone. It made it all the more better that it was Bella and Edward's daughter. whee whee whee
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 7:45 pm
I would think this goes in the Breaking Dawn Sub Forum.
That's just me, I've only been here a week-ish or less than that though.
Anyway, as for Breaking Dawn. It was okay, a little too much shoved into one book -- she could've lengthened it out to a fifth book and it would've made things a hell of a lot easier to comprehend and digest then you know be like.
Bella Married, Bella/Edward have schmex, Bella preggers, Bella almost dies and goes nutso cause of baby inside her, Wolves create sort of an alliance with vamps, baby born (horrid name ;n; it has), jacob imprints on baby, baby is half human/vamp and is creepy as fudge, Vultori find baby a threat and come to destroy it and cullens, lotsa vampie tribes come together, they throw off the vultori. . . yada yada.
You see what I mean? There's a lot of "Important" things. I think that it should have cut off at some point. Basically it's like writing a short story about one event in your life and putting everything in it and making a novel instead -- it doesn't work like that.
Also I think she should make another book on Nessie and Jacob. ;(
Just my opinion. She leaves a lot unanswered and a lot open for another book, I don't think Breaking Dawn comes to a close. Also why I said it's bad to cram a lot of events into one book.
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:13 pm
i loved everything about the book, except for the fact that Jacob imprinted on Renesmee... He started to get on my nerves in Eclipse. Dx
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:15 pm
i no but every thing eles was good
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Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 9:59 am
I thought it was the perfect way to end Bells POV I loved it the oly thing I though might have made it better was a small fight of some sort at the end something but my favorite was the last couple of pages so cool
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Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:01 pm
sesswolfgirl14 I think it was the perfect ending to the most perfect story. I was highly upset that it looked like Jacob was going to be alone and that Bella was going to die but when Jacob imprinted on Renesme I had to put the book down and I actually went around my house screaming "He imprinted on the baby!!!". It was I didn't even need to read anymore, I was completely satisfied that he found someone. It made it all the more better that it was Bella and Edward's daughter. whee whee whee lol yeaa same heree! i was happy jacob found someone =D
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Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:03 pm
Koneko Midoria I would think this goes in the Breaking Dawn Sub Forum.
That's just me, I've only been here a week-ish or less than that though.
Anyway, as for Breaking Dawn. It was okay, a little too much shoved into one book -- she could've lengthened it out to a fifth book and it would've made things a hell of a lot easier to comprehend and digest then you know be like.
Bella Married, Bella/Edward have schmex, Bella preggers, Bella almost dies and goes nutso cause of baby inside her, Wolves create sort of an alliance with vamps, baby born (horrid name ;n; it has), jacob imprints on baby, baby is half human/vamp and is creepy as fudge, Vultori find baby a threat and come to destroy it and cullens, lotsa vampie tribes come together, they throw off the vultori. . . yada yada.
You see what I mean? There's a lot of "Important" things. I think that it should have cut off at some point. Basically it's like writing a short story about one event in your life and putting everything in it and making a novel instead -- it doesn't work like that.
Also I think she should make another book on Nessie and Jacob. ;(
Just my opinion. She leaves a lot unanswered and a lot open for another book, I don't think Breaking Dawn comes to a close. Also why I said it's bad to cram a lot of events into one book. agree! there is a lot and that would be cool to have another book cuz breaking dawn had a good ending for bella and edward but not for nessie and jacob
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 10:38 am
XCougarJenny11X sesswolfgirl14 I think it was the perfect ending to the most perfect story. I was highly upset that it looked like Jacob was going to be alone and that Bella was going to die but when Jacob imprinted on Renesme I had to put the book down and I actually went around my house screaming "He imprinted on the baby!!!". It was I didn't even need to read anymore, I was completely satisfied that he found someone. It made it all the more better that it was Bella and Edward's daughter. whee whee whee lol yeaa same heree! i was happy jacob found someone =D squee! me too!
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:29 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2008 4:50 pm
thought it was good, except for freaking Jacob! (I'm sorry team jacob fans but hear me out) Jacob is very . . . strange to imprint on a baby! Why can't he just fall in love with Rosalie insteed!? Okay bad mental picture, need to go scream now eek . . .
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Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 10:45 am
lol personally i think jacob shouldve fell in love w/ leah but they cant imprint on each other... =(
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Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 1:32 pm
ok here's what I have to say.
#1 in Eclips Bella said she loved Jacob. don't you think she'd have a whole conflict thing going on with marring Edward and Jacob's imprint Renesmee?
2. what the ******** happend to Renee? she just kinda dissapered. no phone calls, no e-mails, Notta!
3. we need a book in Renesmee's Pov. that way we got to know what she thought in Braking Dawn and maybe find out more about what happend after.
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Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 5:15 pm
lol yeaa i agree
the end doesnt really explain wat happens after
and renee doesnt come up anymore at the end
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:57 pm
I didn't like the part of when The Volturi appeared.
It was kind of boring for me.
And I didn't like the idea of Jacob imprinting on Renesmee..
But overall, the story is nice ^o^
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