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 Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:00 pm
Round 5: 58/75
Overall: 384/425Sexy_Top_Model  Japanese Heroin
Thought of to just be a mere legend4.6.5.5 = 20 Ah. A set. D: Always try to avoid sets. It matches. But the layering is a bit odd. Great spreading out the colors, but they don't really uhm, blend? I think this tektek is beautiful, but because you used a set, you lost a bit. gray4.4.5.5=18 im quite disapointed, you used a set, and the layering is ridiculous its just disgusting in my own opinion, it doesnt look good and its sloppy Navenna5.5.5.5=20 Straight 5's from me. I really like the torso layering on this, but the waist area and skirts layering is bulky and looks gross. Overall it looks like an original character you might see someone cosplay at a convention... but not necessarily a hero. And I guess I should point out it's a set, but it didn't bother me for the most part.
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Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:02 pm
Round 5: 62/75
Overall: 373/425- S a r a L a n g -  so this is my avatar. He is a villian by the name of Humerus The Lightning Homers. (i just made it up ^^;; ) But as you can tell his lightning bolts are his main weapon ^^ and he is very powerful and the ultimate of all villians! His pendent is what gives him his strength, so if he loses if or a hero or another villian destroys it, it takes awhile to make another one. Few know that that is his weakness, cause nobody has destroyed it so far. Even tho some say he is an evil villian, that one day he will turn to the good side! ^^ sorry i would have written a novel, but its late now, so i hope you liek it!! 5.6.5.5 = 21 Nice job. I like this. A bit too plain and simple, but nice. (: gray4.6.5.5=20 it reminds me of dragon ball z, its pretty plain and expected not really outside the box. *yawn* Navenna-4.6.7.4= 21 My real problem with this was that I had no idea it was meant to be a villain until I read what you wrote about your avi. It looks so DBZ-ish that I just assumed it was a hero. And just that it looks DBZish bothers me on an originality factor. I really did like the layering of items, though.
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Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 7:53 pm
Round 5:59/75
Overall: 340/425misha 2567  Everyone calls her the dark angel because she was born was half demon and angel. People thought she was weird at times the made fun of her. She would be mostly quiet but she would not mention the helps she has done. So i shall tell you. Kummi is always confused she helps good and bad everyone is always wondering who did this. So she helps everyone as some people in her village says a ugly lier but she has her own way to defeat all who questions her and after defeats the curse she's free to choose who to be an angel or demon her dream is to be a angel :]. contestant,misha ps. i hope you like it :] 4.5.6.5 = 20 This is nice. But these colors are used too much. I know you can't really help that fact, but they are. And this could have been amazing, even if these colors are used a lot. You could have added one more color. You probably should have added some blue to the bottom seeing as you were also trying to spread colors out. But it's nice. It's a bit plain. But nice job. (: gray 4.5.6.5=20 one word. "cliche" Navenna-4.5.6.4=19 The balance of colors is pretty good, but the overall look is bland. There is nothing really too this avi layering wise and it's ambiguous about if it's a hero or villain, which bothers me some.
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Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 8:08 pm
Round 5: 68/75
Overall: 362/425DanJF  He's the evil flame king. He sends fireballs from hell down on the world! >;D 6.7.7.5 = 25 Wow. This tektek is beautiful. o_o Dan, you're brilliant. xD I really like the colors in this, and you're great at blending and spreading colors. Ah geez, this avatar is amazingg. eek Very orginal. Great colors. Catches my eye. Fits the theme. Great job. Gray 5.5.5.5=20 well i really did asume someone would do a fire avatar but thats okay this is a big step up from you're usual designs so good job! Navenna-5.6.7.5=23 Apart from being rather top heavy this looks great. The colors are well balanced, the theme is obvious at first glance. And it just looks nifty. Good job this round.
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Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 8:10 pm
Round 5: 65/75
Overall: 373/425Neverar Ultima 
~~Story~~
Abandoned, troubled, disturbed, Blood thirsty.
He's not the dude that fell into toxic waste, neither is he the lifelong friend of any hero. He's the abandoned orphan, the boy who lived his life on the streets, stealing, fighting, but most of all, learning. From very small his lust for knowledge was insatiable, reading everything he could find, and when his parents left him, nothing changed...He would seek wisdom from the wisest, and then kill them. It was this lust that corrupted him, the want to know everything, to do everything, and by himself. He would seek the dirtiest of hearts, the gang lords, the leagues of undercover Villains, all fell to one boy....His heart turned to stone, as he killed without remorse, every person who ever taught him anything. Even when he learned to fight properly, he killed his sensei and every single one of his students. Eventually, he was able to secretly gain control of one of the world's top organizations. This funded his many "projects" and learnings....Always a do-it-yourself guy, it was exactly what he did....every crime, every negotiation, By himself, and anyone who tried to make it too his side, was used, and then disposed of......
6.6.6.5 = 23 At first, when I looked like this, I didn't really like it. But after I read the thingy you typed about him [wow. sorry. i very much dislike using the word "thingy" cause it makes me feel stupid. T___T], it fit. Your description fits the avatar nicely. Great job. (: Someone who was abandoned, I don't think, when you looked at them, would they be all happy and colorful and stuff. So great job. xD Gray 6.4.5.5=20 no comment Navenna-6.5.6.5=22 I'm with Dee on this. The avatar alone wasn't overly impressive until I read the bio you wrote for it. It brought the avi alive and really gave it some added spice.
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Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 8:11 pm
Round 5: 60/75
Overall: 344/425ivy the pixie can you really define hero? Lucy is the hero of the underworld, She had terrifying powers, simply by looking you in the eye she can back your blood boil over and your eyeballs ooze from their sockets. She's the queen of the demon spawn  6.4.6.5 = 21 This is nice. But, it doesn't really, amaze me. It's a bit plain. And when I look at this, I dont' really think "queen of the demons" but more, "a demon"? I hope you get what I'm saying. I'll try again. I mean. If it's the queen of the demons, I think it should look a bit more, demonishh., because. She's teh queen, not just like, some demon in like demon land or whatever. Yeah? Gray 5.5.6.5=21 i think you played a bit safe, its not the best and its not the worst its definatley a big cliche but alot of it looks good and the colors are spread well, its layered pretty well but the card shark bands bug the hell out of me since one veers to the left off her arm completely. Navenna-5.4.5.4=18 I'm not a fan of this one. The colors aren't well enough distributed, the imp feet look weird (you could have covered them with shoes on tektek since it doesn't have to be possible on gaia), it doesn't seem to fit the description you gave. It's too cute and she's smiling.
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:56 pm
Round 5: 61/75
Overall: 369/425
Makoto_Gin  The Blue Blaze5.5.6.5 = 21 I like your color spreading. But I don't really like this avatar. It doesn't appeal to me [ i hope i used this word correctly, i probably didn't? i hope yo understood though ]. It's a bit messy, and I think you could have done better. Gray6.4.4.5=19 it seams like you just decided "black goes on this side, blue goes on this side" they arent blended very well its plain and boring. its not just safe but pretty icky as well, in my opinion you've been starting to slope down in this competition Navenna-6.5.6.4=21 This avi seems out of balance to me and just shy of the mark. I can picture it easily enough doing brooding superhero things like hanging out on the tops of buildings in a city that don't have roof access in the middle of the night... but I think the name is what really threw me. There may be blue here... but nothing that seems to blaze about said blue. The shades are all a little funky and I keep wishing it had a better hair style.
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Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 6:21 pm
Round 5: 62/75
Overall: 360/425
ChiBi m0nkEy  its a kitty! its a manwhore! NO!!! its Teh Sexycat!!!! this is actually based off my real cat Oliver who my sister and i have renamed Sexycat. he answer to it. any way that pretty much looks exactly like him except for the clothing.. which is why his eyes are blue 6.5.6.4 = 21 ohmuhgaw. xD A SEXYCATT. : D I like it. It's sexy. o_o xDD I could just imagine. xD <- wth? Gray6.5.6.4=21 in all fairness chibi im pretty sure any avatar with that body, those ears and that tail, without clothes will look like your cat. stare but i do think this is funny, i just dont see the super hero in it, its just as you put it a sexy cat. Navenna-5.5.6.4=20 Is this what Puss in Boots would look like in a gay bar? I have trouble thinking of any super powers other than things that disturb me for sexy cat.
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 8:00 pm
Round 5: 67/75
Overall: 393/425-Le Chien Chat-  One day your watching your favorite cartoon... And another dreadful commerical comes on one after another... Just great! Now what does a televison-lover such as yourself do in this situtation? Just press a secret button on your remote and Miss TV comes to your aid in your televison-watching needs! 6.6.6.5 = 24 Ahh. I'm in love. You're brilliant. Thank you for using that TV thing. o_o I haven't seen that thing in a while. I forgot about it! : D This is great. (: Your avatars are always amazing. (: gray6.5.5.5=21 this is a really origanal idea and its pretty hilarious, all of your entrys are quite unique this one has the best idea around it, i love you're story and the layering around the body is fantastic but a few things i dont like are the head layering, and the yellow shirt. i know you need something to match the antena base but that shirt was not the way to go, its bright and disteracting. The main and head case item are also poorly layered behind the tv screen if you could have like a hat on top of the tv using dream free that would have been a bit better, or if you got rid of the main and just used headcase even that would have been an improvement. Navenna-6.6.5.5=22 Ahh, a super hero with a power that is actually super! I really like how creative this entry is. The overall look is very bizarre, but in a good way.
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Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 1:34 pm
Round 5: 75/75
Overall: 394/425
[ Danger Woman ] I give you, the Winged Crusader! Gifted with the ability to fly, the wing emblems on his helm are merely for show. With glass eye protection, he can zoom past civilians without nasty creatures buzzing into his optics. x3
His weapon is a legendary staff which was a gift to him from his super duper parents.
xD The description is lame, I know. But I need to leave soon to pick up a friend from the airport so I can't concentrate.
 6.7.7.5 = 25 Ah. Danjah, you're brilliant. : D This is amazingg. I want to meet that superhero. Give him a high five. A pat on the back. o__o Uhm. And I like red and yelloww together. Greatgreatgreat. : D gray 6.7.7.5=25 super hero's really are you're specialty arent they? they layering is great my only concern would be that some of the reds dont match like the armour and long jhons but since the armour matchs the staff and the long jhons match parts of the hat it works out for the best. good job using a male avatar Navenna-6.7.7.5=25 I love that this entry actually looks like a super hero's costume. It's simple, stream lined, confined to a few colors, hides their identity, and is skin tight enough to made out of sculpted plastic and spandex at Halloween for all those pudgy children who should never wear be allowed within ten feet of spandex.
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Here Comes the Muffin Man Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:32 pm
Round 5: 60/75
Overall: 365/425Tenshi654  description: my super hero's name is Tundra and her polar bear companion is snuffles(without him she cant use her powers) ... She is from a secluded city in the north pole, she freezes the bad guys and used her wip to defeat them... Snuffles can transform into a big polor bear if she needs more help, her arch enemy is Dr. Shmezzle who constantly tries to capture snuffles to harness his powers and defeat Tundra... 5.5.5.5 = 20 This isn't the greatest I've seen. I don't like the overusage of blues. Too many blues. Cluttered in a not so great way. Not super appealing. I like the little guy in the top left. I dno't nkow what it is. D: But I like it. This is a bit messy, though. Gray5.5.6.5=21 SNUFFLES!! thats such an adorabible name! i love snuffles i shall steal him from her. lolz, but in all serousness (sp) i kinda knew someone would do an ice related avatar, just like someone would do a fire related avatar, its just what you would expect. Navenna-5.5.4.5=19 This uses a lot of items that are very theme fitting but blend together to make it look lumpy and weird, especially the bottom half. I do love that you gave your super hero a side kick, though. And the head/face is perfect for the theme.
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:42 pm
Round 5: 57/75
Overall: 351/425crazyanimefan  Name: Kenneth Connely aka "Blazing Overlord" Powers: Fire, flight Category: Supervillain Summary/Story: Overlord has a deep grudge against the government. As an international spy, Kenneth Connely was intelligent, quick, and sneaky, but his skills were too great to be controlled. So, in an act to destroy the rising threat of his power, he was first dumped in a vat of toxic, radioactive waste and then burned. Assumed dead, Kenneth's body was given to Evan Daniels, his good friend and underling, who saved Kenneth from the brink of death. Evan hid Kenneth away from the world, where he vowed to grow stronger and pay back the favor done to him. He strives to take down each and every person involved with his incident with a fiery vengeance. 5.5.5.5 = 20 I can 't say this tektek is horrible, because it isn't. But it's not the greatest. And the chyaku, though it's a great item, probably wasn't the best for this avatar. It's not bad. I kind of like it. But I think you could have done better. Navenna-5.4.5.5=19 The story and avi match each other rather well but I dislike the avi all the same. It's bulky and looks funky. Especially where the cape and body blend together. It just seems to have a simplicity to it that doesn't catch my eye all that much, I guess. gray 4.4.5.5=18 i like some parts to this like the eyes and the fact that the tattoo's glow, but i agree with nav, its bulky and doesnt look very good.
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:08 pm
Round 5: 68/75
Overall: 365/425Ms Sadie  From the core of the galaxy, where stars cluster so close together that nightfall is unknown, comes our heroic protector. The radiation and intense gravity waves found at the center of the galaxy have imbued her with the ability to shape light into solid matter. Using the stars themselves to fuel her increasing power, she has sworn to protect those that live in the Milky Way from the evil forces that caused the extinction of her people. 6.5.6.5 = 22 This is a nice tektek. (: I like it! But for some reason, it looks like there is something missing. Or it just looks a bit odd. Perhaps its the layering, maybe? The torso looks a bit heavy compared to the top and the bottom. Navenna-6.6.6.5=23 I like how astrological this looks. Very themed, fitting to what you wrote (which was cool) I like the touches of gold with the gloves and at the ankles. The thing that I didn't like was the emptiness of the face. My eyes are drawn to it every time I look at the avi. It's just a touch too much black there. gray 6.6.6.5=23 the torso is very cluttered and the face is very empty other then that i think this is a very origanal idea and it fits the theme well
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:56 pm
Round 5: 69/75
Overall: 374/425CaramelAngel  Here's my SUPER-HERO! NYX...She was found and raised on Earth. No recollection of her past. Not very social. Doesn't fully understand powers. Powers: No one knows exactly where she gets her powers from. Powers are stronger at night. Has acute form of telekinesis. Uses war-hammer made from strange, other world material (very durable), for main attacks. Other attacks include Night Storm and Black Hole. Night Storm is rarely used, summons small meteors from above, crushing/knocking out enemies. Black Hole has only been used once before. Summoning a mysterious force from within, NYX can open up a small black hole that sucks up everything in its path. Very dangerous! Passes out afterward. Spends most of time searching for answers about her past and saving people from bad guys! There you go! Hope I didn't type too much! LOL. biggrin 6.6.6.5 = 23 Ahh. This is beautiful. But I think you could have added more colors to the bottom, because it doesn't look complete. Navenna-6.6.5.5=22 I really dislike the bottom and how much white is there... and the extreme lack of blue down there. This is a stellar look otherwise, though. Her story sounds a lot like Superman's in the beginning. gray6.7.6.5=24 this is my favorite of you'res but its very top heavy and theres lack of color down below i think it needs more black and even blue to make it a bit bolder, maybe socks would have helped it, and a diffrent shoe then white
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