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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:25 pm
exclaim We'd like to thank all those who entered and thank Epine de Rose(Para) for helping out in the juding :3 The winner is Logue ^w^ Many great entries out there. We also have a second place winner (because there were just so many great entries out there =ooo) and this second place winner is xBlind-Darknessx. They will recieve 50k ^w^ Thank you Xylaina for the 50k second place prize!! I hope all you newbies continue to try out in future events!
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Huzzah!! Are you a soquili addict and you do not have a soquili? Well heres your chance. Xylaina and Chamaiin are looking for an active newbie to take in one of King and Tetyawna's (parents) beautiful baskets from their latest batch. We want someone who will not simply win the basket and end up running off with it. Someone who RPs please :3 How will we determine the lucky one? =o By RP contest! Please dont be afraid and take a chance, write as much as you and as creative as you want. 8] Xylaina and Para are the judges of this contest.
About the Parents. King, he is an elder. As well a caring father and more. He has strong love for Tetyawna and his family. He is wise and loving. Much more calmer than his mate. King as a three year old belonged to a herd outside of the soquili lands. One day he was captured by some of what his herd refurred to as 'two leggers' and was sold repeatedly from one hand to another until he turned 9. They broke him and degraded him but still he stayed proud, they could never knock the 'wild' he held on to. And his previous captures became sick of his attitude and abandoned him. He was tied tied to a tree for 2 days when a two legged came to be known as Isi, set him free. She gave him food,shelter and he hasn't left since. He is a strong stocky little fellow ( though since his elder stage has grown), fast as well. He does have high spirits and is usually not quick to anger, but certain soquili ask for it. He's intelligent enough to know better and what he should do and when. When it comes to his family he would do anything for them, and always worries about his youngest children.
Tetyawna, The hyper zoo animal. Tetyawna isnt kept in a cage or anything, so best ignore the 'zoo animal' part in her nickname. She is hyper however. Maybe not hyper but extreamly happy. Her past is a blurr and she has a horrible memory. Almost forgetting all her children's name. Her young love is King, and they are happily together ever since they first met. Having nine foals and fillies altogether isnt easy for her. However, being Tetyawna, she loves kids. Freindly and exciting to be with. However sometimes things she says or states can come off rude but shes just being happy and blunt. Some may find her fitable in the asylum but truly she isnt crazy or insane, shes just her happy self. Considered to be an old mare now. Not having anymore children. Anyone and everyone is a friend onless they hurt her. When a serious situation occurs, Tetyawna will snap out of her hyper mode and switch to mature mode. A kid at heart type of mare but is a full grown adult, so matureness is a developed trait over time. She does not take a big part in her children's history. A mare like her is too blind to realise such though.
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The beginning of this contest: Sept.7(today) at 4pm EST! Ending of this contest: Sept.14 (next Sunday) at 4pm EST! Approx. a week for all you newbies to enter your responses :3 Pretty one you are trying for. Rules. Must read or be eaten by me! DD< 1o Newbies ONLY (aka. those with no soquilis at all) 2o Only post prompt replies in here, please do not discuss. However, you are allowed to post questions. 3o Do not PM anyone discouraging them or in the thread. No guilt-tripping!! 4o Keep rp responses PG-13 5o Do not claim basket onless you have won it. 6o Only allowed one response for each person. 7o You may play as another soquili ( as long as you made him/her up) in your response so that it can interact with your foal. 8o You may NOT edit your entries 9o Follow other needed rules (xD I just put this here until I can think of more)
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1o Coming from a family of eleven you are the youngest foal of all nine kids. You and the rest of your family where going for a walk when a distraction appears. What distracted you? Why did it? In doing this you become lost, not really knowing which way your family has gone. What do you do about it? Do you find your family or stay lost? (if you are going to include any of the family members inresponse, only include the parents please)
2o You have finally crawled out of your basket. What is your reaction to it? Did it seem hard? Now that you are out in the world, you want to travel and see everything. What do you see first, what happens? Everything is so bright and colorful. Colors you've never seen, shapes you've never seen. Then, your world turns upside down. Your heart filled with hate at first, then slowly depression. You are like a grey soul that floats around aimlessly, with sadness all around you and in you. Depression is you. What happend in your early days to make this you? Why are you like this? (I mean you have turned into a rather unhappy foal, but what happend before made you like this?)
Please try to respond back to ALL the questions we've put in our prompts. wahmbulance We have decided to stop letting people edit their posts DD: Sorry about this to future entries. We have reasons for why we decided on this, please PM Chamaiin if you do not understand.
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USE THIS. [b]Your Name:[/b] [b]Prompt you chose:[/b] [b]Temper you wish for your foal to have (doesnt have to reflect prompt just what would you like them to have if you win):[/b] [b]READ RULES, do not PM anyone _______ them or in the thread. What is the missing word?:[/b] [b]Prompt Response:[/b]
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:27 pm
Questions asked so far.
Q:What is the foal's gender? We have no idea. Pick any gender you wish to RP with. :3
exclaim Just a note: For prompt two, at one point your foal turns into a rather depressed soul (as in that is WHO YOU ARE, not for just a second), but WHY did the foal turn depressed? What event did he run into or what did he run into to make him that way? That is what we're looking for in prompt 2. ^w^
wahmbulance We have decided to stop letting people edit their posts DD: Sorry about this to future entries. We have reasons for why we decided on this, please PM Chamaiin if you do not understand.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 1:00 pm
Go right ahead and post 'em responses :3 GOOD LUCK 8DD
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 2:31 pm
Eeeeeeeeee! That basket is totally win<3. *wonders when she started using that phrase*
Post save<33.
*writeswriteswritescontemplateswrites*
Yay! *loves rule 7*
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 3:34 pm
Your Name: Zolis Prompt you chose: 2 Temper you wish for your foal to have (doesnt have to reflect prompt just what would you like them to have if you win): Quiet aronud her family but very outgoing with her friends. She desperatly wants her mother's attention because she never got it. But will jsut as easily shun her when her mother tries to give it. READ RULES, do not PM anyone _______ them or in the thread. What is the missing word?: discouraging Prompt Response:
The day was bright and wild as my family pranced around me. The largest of them……my father, danced happily at my mother’s side. Glancing back I see the basket that I was just pulled from, the same color as my coat is. I neigh happily into the wind and try to stand up, not succeeding at first but my father helps me up. I dance around with my parents then settle down and walk over to my mother that didn’t join us, I try to feed but she shuns me not caring what I do.
A feeling I don’t know sets in and I just want to crawl back into my basket. My mother walks off and starts grazing on fresh grass while I sit down in it, depression slowly setting in. My father looks at me and then back to his mate following her to graze. I look around and see nothing but darkness filling in the sunny grass. I don’t understand how she couldn’t care about me, what did I do wrong?
Standing up again I walk on uneasy hooves into a different part of the land, wandering aimlessly and trying to stay on my long but powerful legs. I just can’t seem to get a handle on it! No one looks my way as I stop and try to find something to eat, my rumbling stomach a constant reminder that I need nourishment.
An older female came over to me and nuzzled my cheek. “My my little one, Why so down on the dumps?” She asked licking my face a little. She was a soft white color with gray speckles and red striping half way up her front left leg. Also around her eyes was a black circle that contrasted with the pale white color.
I turned my face to the ground and sniffled “My mommy doesn’t want me, she turned away when I came out of my basket”. My words were soft and could barely be heard above the other noises around us.
“My sweet child, how could a mother shun a foul as beautiful as you?” The mare asked as I looked up at her. In that moment she looked like my guardian angel, with white feathery wings that shone sliver in the sun light. I smiled and nuzzled her back finding some comfort in her.
“I don’t know, but I would do anything to have her love me. I’m Seranade, what’s your name?” I asked smiffling back tears thinking of how my mother turned away from me.
“Guardian Lecroff, named by my father” She said and smiled at me, her name fit her all too well. Guardian Lecroff was like a angel, at least to me she was, always trying to cause good when darkness was closing in. “Now would you like something to eat little one?” She asked and I jumped up my stomach giving one but lurch.
“Yes please Guardian Lecroff!” I hummed happily as she giggled and turned around, I could now see hat her tail was red and black also with one strip of white down the side. And she had wings! Just like I pictures her with. They were hidden against her sides when she was talking to me and now I could see that they did shine like sliver in the bright sun.
“Sera, please call me Lea. Guardian Lecroff sounds too formal for a little one like you to be calling me” With that’s she pulled a few different berries off a bush with some sweet smelling leaves, setting them down in front of me. “Eat up, this will make you very strong and healthy” She said and I didn’t argue, I ate greedily.
Soon my belly was full and I burped as Lea Giggled at him before finishing up her own meal. After that she showed me how to run and gallop better, I found out that my legs were incredibly strong. Before long I could run almost as fast as Lea.
“Ok Sera…you have to give this old mare a break every so often” She said breathless while I trotted back to her happy as can be.
“Sorry Lea, I’m just so happy” I said with a giant smile of my face. She laughed and nuzzled my face, she was still breathing hard as her muscles tensed and relaxed. Lea looked around and noticed that all the other families were going to rest for the night. “Well my sweet child its time for you to go back to your father and mother” Her words crashed into me and I looked at the ground, my smile fading away. Lea could tell that I didn’t want to go back but stay with her. “Seranade, you must stay with your family. No matter how bad they may treat you they will always be your family. Through love and life they are part of you”. Her words made me thing and I nodded not soon after.
“I understand Lea, but can I please come see you again? You are the only one who really cares about me” hoped she would say yes and not make my heart break into a million tiny pieces. When she smiled and nuzzled me I knew that thought was far from her mind. “Thank you Lea, I will come see you whenever I can”
With that she bid me good bye, I trotted off much happier than I had been those hours ago. Now I would always think of my Guardian Angel with the white and sliver wings. She was my true family……through love and life she was my true family.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 4:19 pm
I have a question. ^^ Are we supposed to choose the foal's gender for ourselves, or do you already have it decided? You'll have to forgive me if I'm asking an obvious question. I don't quite know how breeding works, yet, concerning the gender of the babies. Do the owners pick? I'm not sure... ^^; <3 Thanks so much.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 4:22 pm
to us the gender is unknown until it comes out. So Rp it as either Male or female. :3
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 4:25 pm
Oookay! <3 Thanks again. I'll get right on it.
[sets homework aside >>; and starts on this]
Um... post save, I suppose. ^^; So this isn't a wasted post.
EDIT: I, being the fool I am, went ahead and posted instead of editing this one. Ahhh, me. I'm sorry for wasting a post. >_<;
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 5:24 pm
Your Name: noxilicious Prompt you chose: 2 Temper you wish for your foal to have (doesnt have to reflect prompt just what would you like them to have if you win): Nomadic READ RULES, do not PM anyone _______ them or in the thread. What is the missing word?: discouraging Prompt Response: [I'll be rping the foal as a girl, named Mazol.]
Darkness. That was all she saw. All she felt. The space was confining, and Mazol had outgrown it. She shifted her body, a tiny hoof pressing a bulge into the side of the basket. Outside. Sudden silence. The whisper's from only moment's before had hushed at her movements. Mazol moved again, kicking out with a different leg this time. The woven wall gave way just a little bit and then... light. A sliver of light that came in from the outside world, invading upon the quiet darkness she had grown accustomed to. She opened her mouth, a minute bray of protest. And then she quieted again. The light was disrupted by frays of the basket weave that had come undone, and it intrigued her. In all her life, she had never imagined a world beyond her darkness. Never imagined that there could be something more.
Another kick, another sliver of light that intruded upon her solitude. But it was comforting. Right, somehow. And Mazol wanted more of it. A whisper of wind brushed against the tiny tear in the basket, a soft whistling melody filled her ears. It was inviting her. Drawing her out, out of her comfort, out of her darkness. She wanted to please the sound, only to please. The small filly arched her neck, and pushed out with all four hooves. Applying more pressure when the back cracked and splintered. A soft whinny of happiness erupted from her, as she pressed ever harder. And then, she was thrown into a world of light. And her darkness was no more.
Mazol was dazzled by the light. It came from every direction, overpowering her raw senses. Her eyes snapped shut and she covered her velvet muzzle with her hooves. Her back rested again the tattered remains of her basket, soft worn strands caressing her, comforting the sudden sense of being lost she felt. Curiosity won over her fear of the light, and she cracked open her eyes. Ever so slightly. It didn't hurt so bad now. And there were colors here. Objects she had no name for jumped out, shaded in a variety of hues. A gurgle of pleasure broke through the silence, and for the first time, she realized that it was she who was making the noise. Trying out her new voice, she whinnied happily. Muted voices speaking murmured words suddenly jumped out at her, from all sides. And Mazol peered up warily.
Again, the light dazzled her, but outlined against the light, she saw something at least familiar. Darkness. A shadow from a creature larger than herself. She untangled her longs legs, enjoying how it felt to stretch outside the confining walls she had been bound in. Situating herself instinctively, Mazol tried to push herself up. She managed tog et half way off the ground before she realized her rump wasn't following. Her concentration broke, and she fell. Her brow wrinkled slightly, unamused. She had to get to the darkness. She wanted to go back. And she was the only thing keeping herself from getting there. She tried again, rump first this time, but fell again moments later. It took her a good deal of tries to successfully stand and make a few wobbly steps of progress towards the comfort of the shadow.
"That's right, baby. Come to Mama." A soft voice cried out in front of her. Mazol stopped in her tracks. Since when did the darkness have a voice? Named Mama? Her small body trembled. A new word. Through the light, she could the see darkness coming towards her, becoming more defined and shaped. Mazol took a stumbling step back. This wasn't her darkness. This was something else entirely. It frightened her. She tried to turn and run, but she fell once more, her thin legs splayed out in front of her.. She could feel the confusion coming off the being in waves. ”No!” Mazol’s small voice cried out as she threw herself to her feet and jumped back as the being tried to come closer. What had happened to the darkness? The warm, quiet protection. The softness of the woven walls against her. Where had that gone?
All interest and curiosity she had felt previously had fled, leaving her small body defenseless. The wind that had beckoned her out only moments ago now whipped against her mane. She shivered uncontrollably as the biting wind chilled her to the core. ”Honey, what’s the matter?” Again the soft voice of the non-darkness called out to her. ”N-n-no!” She cried again, though this time through chattering teeth. When she tried to run again, she tripped into a big bay stallion. He gazed down at her warmly but she didn’t see the love that shone in his eyes. All she saw was a stranger. All she wanted was her darkness.
She launched herself on unsteady legs out of the circle, her eyes shut tightly. She ran blindly for many minutes before stopping. Off to her right stood a grand tree, its gnarled branches reaching out towards the sky. It’s bark was charred from a fire that had balzed through many years ago, but still, it lived on. Mazol teetered towards it, her limbs feeling like jelly. She saw a great crevasse had been burned into the tree, smoky black-charred wood lined the inside with only a small opening. Struggling, she pulled herself through and nestled down. Very little light showed through the entrance, and Mazol felt safe. She tucked her legs against her body, and laid her head down on the smoldered ground. Tears brimmed in her large eyes, spilling over into rivers down her cheeks. She wanted her darkness back. This wasn’t the same, but it was better than the light. She despised the light for stealing her away, despised those beings for trying to imitate it. She just wanted to go home. But she knew that that wasn’t going to happen any time soon. And so the tears came again. And again. And they did not cease until at last Mazol had drifted into a deep, troubled sleep.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 5:47 pm
=smiles= I'm glad to see some newbies ;D
exclaim Just a note: For prompt two, at one point your foal turns into a rather depressed soul (as in that is WHO YOU ARE, not for just a second), but WHY did the foal turn depressed? What event did he run into or what did he run into to make him that way? That is what we're looking for in prompt 2. ^w^
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 5:52 pm
Hoshiz, I totally misread the second prompt >.< Is it ok if I go back and re-word some of my entry? XD
Edit ; I rewrote the last half-ish of it. I'm such an idiot for only reading the few few lines of the prompt -sigh-
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 6:26 pm
Yes, you may edit your entries until the day of judging :3
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 8:33 pm
Your Name: ShtrDrNGry Prompt you chose: 1 Temper you wish for your foal to have (doesnt have to reflect prompt just what would you like them to have if you win): Confident READ RULES, do not PM anyone _______ them or in the thread. What is the missing word?: discouraging Prompt Response:
It had been a long morning walk, and what started out as an exciting adventure was turning into dreadful repetition. Clop, clop, clop...Tarin was starting to fall asleep as he followed along with his parents and siblings. A shake of his head was the best he could think to do to wake himself better, and as he started to yawn he caught sight of something fluttering in the trees above.
"Oooh..." The foal's interest was ignited with this flicker of light, and without thought he turned to follow after it. "Where're you going, flutterbug?" The words were more to himself than after the small white butterfly. "Come back!"
With surprising grace for such a young foal, Tarin skipped along the same path the butterfly took, his hooves landing almost silently against the grass as he kept under the flutter, something that likely would have made him seem intoxicated of sorts from a distance.
"Where are you going?" he repeated, his rich brown eyes following the flutter without blinking. "Are you going to find food?" The butterfly continued to ignore Tarin, but he followed after it anyways. The sound of hooves caught the foal's attention, and his eyes broke contact with the butterfly.
"Hello?" he called out, unsure whether or not he should prepare to flee. As he peered around, Tarin caught sight of a beautiful white mare, her mane and tail adorned with pink and purple flowers, her white and lavender form quite elegant and awe-inspiring.
"I apologize for distracting you from your exploration," she offered, a soft smile offered towards the foal. "My apple rolled away and I was trying to collect it again."
Tarin glanced over the surroundings, and as he realized he had no idea where he was or who this other Soquili was, he brought his hooves together in a blend of a formal and defensive stance, keeping silent as he and the mare looked over one another.
"Are you lost?"
"No, I wandered away from my herd on purpose."
"I see. I'll let you be, then." The mare offered another smile and bowed her head politely, and turned back to make her way off to find more apples.
"Wait!"
The mare paused and looked back to the foal, her eyes widened in surprise. "Yes?"
Tarin galloped closer, and offered the mare a smile. "I'm hungry, too. Can you show me where you found your lunch?"
"Certainly" she offered with a nod. "Your family won't worry for your safety?"
"I'll be fine. I remember where we sleep." Tarin assured the mare as he kept close to her side.
"Well then, you must stray quite often." The foal's attitude seemed to amuse the mare, but she decided not to comment any and discourage him from joining her for lunch.
Tarin didn't respond verbally to the mare, but his silence was enough to ensure this to be true. She smiled, and guided the foal to a large apple tree, which she backed up to.
"Watch your head, now." she warned, and kicked at the base of the tree, sending shockwaves up it and prompting it to release a few leaves, and a few apples, which plunked to the ground. "And lunch is served!"
"Wow, that was a neat trick!" Tarin mused, his head tipping back so that he could look up the large tree. "I wanna try." Mimicking the mares movements, Tarin kicked at the base of the tree, though it had little reaction, which quite obviously disappointed him, and he sent a glare towards the tree.
"Are you alright?"
"The tree wouldn't give me apples...But you watch. I'll get it to cooperate!" Tarin pouted as he nudged an apple with his hoof. "When I'm a big, strong stallion, I won't even have to nudge it. It'll see me coming and give me apples."
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 11:19 pm
Your Name: Logue Prompt you chose: Prompt number 2 Temper you wish for your foal to have (doesnt have to reflect prompt just what would you like them to have if you win): Hurt READ RULES, do not PM anyone _______ them or in the thread. What is the missing word?: Discouraging Prompt Response:
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Name I used for foal: Gavyn [meaning: white hawk of battle] --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Stillness. Quiet. Warmth. Comfort.
It won't be long, now, right? I never know how these things work.
... voices? No, sounds... he knew not what voices were, or words, or how to speak. All he knew was the black. The black thing that enveloped him and kept him safe. Folded into himself, enclosed into something soft, something warm, on every side. He appreciated it for whatever it was. It was something he could feel, in this impenetrable darkness. He wasn't afraid of the black thing; something told him it was there to protect him. His only friend in a strange and small world.
Shut up for a second. Don't want to scare it, do you?
Despite the feeling of security he shared with the thing, it was his desire to know what was beyond the darkness. An inherent need to discover where the sounds came from, which were so loud in his world, despite being spoken in whispers. I want... He felt his mind speak to him as something akin to panic rose in his chest. I want away... from the thing. Just for a little while...
Hey, look at that! It's starting to come out already! Convenient, eh?
Crack! Crack! Crack...
Spindly legs fought with the warm thing, boasting strength he did not possess as he tried to break free of the suddenly frightening cage. He had only just gotten done asking permission to see what was beyond the darkness, and now he was desperately trying to get past it, to what seemed safer, albeit full of uncertainty.
Abruptly, without warning, the dark thing was pierced by his own appendage. Startled, his mouth opened but no noise came out. Why did he feel that something was supposed to come out? Some kind of sound, or...
Confused and afraid, the colt began to kick hurriedly at the thing that continued to hold him. No more! It would hold him no more... the more he moved, the more it felt like it was constricting him, binding him to the darkness...
Splinters flew and what had once been a haven now lay in ruin around him, the victim of a hard-fought battle with one clear goal: to be out. Now that that had been realized, the colt lay curled on the ground, breathing heavily, his chest rising in quick, short gasps. It was cold, suddenly. Cold outside, cold and blind. He was blind. Why had he come out of his safe place, only to be brought into more darkness?
Blinking rapidly, because, for another strange reason, he felt it would do some good, the world steadily came into focus as his reward. It wasn't too different from what he had encountered before; it was dark, but a strange light seemed to drape itself over things. Where did it come from, and why was it here, and not inside the warm thing?
Dragging a leg up, he managed to bring his head to its side and gaze upward, at the vast expanse of the sky. Dark... it was dark, but filled with tiny, bright dots, and something larger. A strange shape stood out amongst the others, illuminating the ground and him. It was terribly bright, compared to the darkness he was used to, and he squinted against it, afraid to take his eyes from it. Would it keep him safe?
Remembering the sounds he had heard earlier, his ears snapped up, but it took all of his effort to move his head to look around. No one. He saw nothing that seemed to speak, or move, aside from the gently-swaying grass. Was that what had spoken to him? He had to know. Know he wasn't alone in this world... so much bigger than his last one...
Please... he begged himself, for lack of anything else to call upon, Please, someone... don't let me be alone...
Limbs shaking, thin, weak, he tried to stand. He fell, hit the dirt. It hurt, and he bit his tongue, wincing back what might have been a cry of pain, if it would even come. Several tries, more pain and failure. When it seemed he would never move from that spot, something inside him gave him the strength to stand:
He'd heard a sound.
As if by magic, he was tugged from his lying position and brought to his feet, a shaky breath raking his rib cage for all it was worth. If his ears had not been lying, then the sound had come from the tall, swaying grass just a few feet ahead. Hope sparked in the colt's eyes, and hesitantly, picking up each leg with careful precision, he was poking his way over to the grass, leaning his neck as far forward as he could to sniff at the air. He could ignore the cold if it meant finding someone else to see, to feel...
It was still dark. Anyone would have missed the figure standing in the grass, waiting, shoulders tensed... matching the silence of a night creature, it stepped forward.
He stopped, and so did his breath, catching in his chest and staying there. His heart pounded in his head. Was this the one he had been looking for...? The one he'd heard, when he was contained in the warm thing? Naïveness brought him to trust the first thing he saw. Trust it unconditionally.
A greater mistake had never been made, he would soon find. Teeth clattering with each uprise of wind, the colt beheld the stallion with wide eyes, met by the other's impersonal, cold stare. He did not recognize that look; he did not recognize anything, and so, anything perceived was not truly being seen, or understood. This thing stood before him and - he could feel it - gave off warmth. He was close enough to tell, and it breathed, and it had moved. All it had to do was...
"Speak," the stallion commanded, eyeing the foal listlessly as he began to pace around him. The stallion was strange; anything was strange to the colt, granted, but even he felt something was... different. While he had not had the chance to get a good look at himself, he knew he did not have the thing on his back that this one did, or the hood of teeth. And somehow... the look in his eyes... it was colder than the air around them. He began to back away from the creature, fear biting at the back of his mind.
His retreat was halted by the contact of something warm. Without realizing it, he had backed into another thing, and when he wheeled around, he saw that it looked like the other one. An empty feeling sank into his heart. Oh... he thought, eyes trying painfully not to close. How easy it would be to block out all that he saw...
"I told you to speak," a low voice drawled, and the skin-walker's tail flicked at the colt, causing him to jump, but again, no sound to be heard. His lip curling, the stallion asked, "What? Can't you speak?" It was a stupid thing to say. If he could speak, he would have said something a long time ago... if he could make sounds like this one did, then he would... but he did not understand what they were saying. He didn't understand why they circled him, or why they gave him such cold stares. His knees wanted to buckle underneath him.
The other one, another stallion, spoke abruptly, causing the colt to jump again. His voice was noticeably higher, but still held the deep timbre of a mature male. "I don't think he can, brother," he said, turning in and craning his neck to eye the colt, then his brother. The two seemed to share a look that the colt could not read, and again they were circling him, creating another cage from which he could not escape. This time, he did not feel safe.
The trust was gone. These two were strange. They did not want to help him, or show him kindness. They were warm, and alive, and he could touch them, but... no, no, no...
"How unfortunate," the first stallion spoke, sneering at him coldly. "Brought into this world with no family, and no voice. How are you going to find your way? Come, let us help you..."
Ears flattening against his head, the foal shook it once, legs shaking. They were lying. They wouldn't help him. No one would. He had to run... could he run? No, he could not break free from them like he could the unresponsive warm thing.
"That is pretty sad," the other piped up, raising his head and looking bored. "I'd sooner eat him than help him. You know reverse-psychology won't work on such a timid little fellow, so why are we playing games?" At the hiss of his brother, the stallion rolled his eyes and continued, "Honestly. Let's just eat him and be on our way. We waited all night for it to come out." His eyes became dark, but did not withhold affection for his brother, which surprised the colt. "You know how I hate waiting."
A thousand things ran through the colt's head. They were making sounds, just as he'd heard in the warm thing, so they must have been the ones who had unknowingly beckoned him out. The longer he heard them speak, the more it became clear: These ones did not want his safety. Yes, he was certain now. There was only one thing to do.
He ran.
The brothers had been expecting it, and quickly cut him off in a spray of dirt. Quickly, quickly, his heart pounded, his nerves shot, the colt tried to move away, but was met with a row of teeth and an intimidating noise from either side. Opening his mouth and trying to release a terrified cry, a bellow, anything to alert something to save him, a hoof cut across his nose and stopped his attempt. Pain flooded his face, and blood trickled down his lip and onto the ground.
Drip, drip.
What was it? Something was coming out of the painful thing on his face, and it was hot. His nose was hot. Tears welled in his eyes, and everything became a blur; raising his hooves, he caught one of the males off guard, and his hooves bit into its nose, but not enough to do much of anything. Still, the skin-walker growled and withdrew a step, muttering something he could still not understand, and when the other halted in his pursuit to check on his brother, the colt ran.
He ran blindly, fearfully. Everything was difficult to see, of a sudden, and tears were flying out of the corners of his eyes as he ran against the wind. Why?! Everything had been so promising... he had come out of the warm thing willingly, on his own, only to be met with something so terrible...
Resentment filled his heart, clouding his senses. Resentment for what he had wanted to trust. He ran as far and long as he could, until his heart was ready to burst and his lungs were aflame; and then still, he ran. He would have run forever, he decided, if he hadn't tripped over an uprooted tree, tumbling down through brush and fern, down to the cold bank alongside a river. He fell in an awkward heap, legs splayed, and did not get up. His body wouldn't allow it. Everything was in pain.
Eyes hot with angry tears, he remained there until morning. He did not know when he drifted to sleep.
The bright rays of sunlight peeking through breaks in the canopy of trees overhead brought him back to the world. Shaking his face and trying to stand, he found it took much more effort than he'd anticipated, this time not from inexperience but from soreness. Mouth opening in what would be a pained howl, he brought himself to his knees and crawled to the river. His mouth was just dipping into the river when he caught a glimpse of himself.
Staring back at him were sullen eyes, a face dirty and streaked with tears and dried blood. A soulless creature. Was that truly him? The image in the water did not frighten him, nor did it surprise him. He was dead inside... his first experience in this world had been enough to convince anyone to return to the black thing, which now was shattered to pieces and too far away to approach without danger. Bowing his head, trails of hair covering his eyes, he took a long drink. It was cold, and went down his throat with some difficulty, but soothed him a little when nothing else had.
His ears pricked forward, then back. Something made a sound. He heard them again; voices. He still did not know what they were saying, but they were drawing nearer, as was a crashing noise similar to the kind he'd made while he tumbled down through the brush just the night before. And, although fear gripped his very being, he did not move. It wasn't... it wasn't worth it to run. He had nowhere to go, and nothing to do. He remained where he was.
The noises grew closer, as did the voices, now more frantic and excited. When they came upon him, he merely turned his head, eyes that had lost all hope for life coming upon a pair that held quite the opposite.
A tall stallion. When he came upon his child, he cried softly, "There... there you are," and took a few steps over, only stopping when he recognized the look in the colt's eye. It shook him, and his mate, who was not far behind. Eyes flooded with something the colt could not understand, she looked upon her baby, who had already gone through so much. It was reflected on his body, as well as in his eyes, and when he did not respond to King's comment, she began to take a step forward, and did not stop.
She nuzzled up to her son, eyes closed, sorrow bringing tears to gently slide down her cheeks. King was soon with Tetyawna, bringing his head down over his son's protectively. At the sign of another cage, the colt visibly shuddered, but lacked the will to move. He would not trust them and their.. their "kindness." What was the point? He would only waste away... if he ran again, he would waste away...
He was broken out of his thoughts by a soft voice, belonging to the one he would later discover was his mother. "Oh, my poor child..." she murmured, eyes closing against the colt's neck. "Oh, Gavyn... you... we tried to find you, we did... we looked everywhere..." Silent, his father became a wall for Gavyn to lean upon. To lean upon and weep silently in the face of kindness. True kindness. He would not acknowledge it as so, but in his heart, he knew he was weakened by them and the sound of their voices.
The mare was still talking. "When we found out you had been taken, we... we were frantic... oh... Gavyn, Gavyn.... my poor Gavyn... I'm so sorry for all of this..." Her voice broke, and she regained her composure as much as was appropriate. It wasn't right for her to break down in front of her son, who needed them as pillars now. The raising process wasn't going to be easy at all...
He wouldn't realize that 'Gavyn' was his name until much later, when he was able to understand the speech of those around him. Brought home broken, he did not speak, and every day his parents prayed for him to smile, and utter a word to them.
He did neither.
Was it too late for the world? For him?
Only time would tell.
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