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Elda-Chan

PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 7:57 am


CHAPTER I

. . . Dr. Richard Calgori's Amazing Dancing Doll . . .

introduction

"Gentlemen, this fallen angel is the illegitimate daughter of art and science.
A modern marvel of engineering, clockworks elevated to the very natural process
which even now is in your blood, racing, your eyes flashing at such irreproachable beauty.
Here is Gaia, here is Eve, here is Lilith, and I stand before you as her father.
Sprung fully-formed from my brow, dewy and sweet; she can be yours and yours again,
for her flesh is the incorruptible pale to be excused from the wages of sin."

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Desired Artist: Glampanda
Price: 800k + ???
PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:20 pm


CHAPTER II

. . . Our Story Begins . . .

contents



    CHAPTER I
    xxxxintroduction
    CHAPTER II
    xxxxcontents
    CHAPTER III
    xxxxisabella
    CHAPTER IV
    xxxxfather
    CHAPTER V
    xxxxstory
    CHAPTER VI
    xxxxworld
    CHAPTER VII
    xxxxmusic
    CHAPTER VIII
    xxxxcritques/notes
    CHAPTER IX
    xxxxresrved
    CHAPTER X
    xxxxcredits

Elda-Chan


Elda-Chan

PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:21 pm


CHAPTER III

. . . Twinkles as She Jerks and Swoons . . .

isabella


    User Image
    General:
    xxxxName: Isabella Calgori
    xxxxNickname: Bella
    xxxxGender: Female
    xxxxSpecies: Wind-up doll
    xxxxOccupation: Ballerina
    xxxxConcept: Herr Drosselmyers Doll (From The Nutcracker)/Abney Park Music
    xxxxImage Song: Sleep Isabella -- Abney Park


    Features:
    xxxxLikes: Ballet, dancing, pretty costumes, sweets
    xxxxDislikes: Cold, snow, age
    xxxxHobbies: Dancing
    xxxxFears: Being alone


    Apperance:
    xxxxSkin tone: Pale
    xxxxHair: White blond, medium length
    xxxxEyes: Pale Blue
    xxxxHeight: Short
    xxxxBuild: Skinny, athletic
    xxxxClothing: Frilly, pretty, girly clothes, dancer’s clothes, ideas
    xxxxOther: She has a small keyhole in her back between she shoulder blades where she is wound. The key is golden and hangs around her neck on a chain.

    Abilities:
    xxxxResolve: When Bella puts her mind to something she gets the job done, weather it be a new ballet technique or a difficult problem, she won't rest until she's satisfied with the results.
    xxxxRapport: A type of natural charm, people want to be around her and find her interesting and enjoyable company.

    Personality: Bella is a quiet, inquisitive child. She's dedicated to her ballet, and wants to be a prima ballerina when she grows up. It's the single-minded dedication that allows her to focus all her energies. People who've only met her find her cold and standoffish, but she's actually just
    uncertain about expressing emotions, as her only role model in this area is her father.


PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:22 pm


CHAPTER IV

. . . The Secret Life of Dr. Calgori . . .

father

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    General:
    xxxxName: Dr. Richard Calgori
    xxxxNickname: None
    xxxxGender: Male
    xxxxSpecies: Human
    xxxxOccupation: Mad Scientist/Inventor/Wannabe Alchemist
    xxxxImage Song: The Secret Life of Dr. Calgori -- Abney Park


    Features:
    xxxxLikes: Science, competition, pretty things, new discoveries
    xxxxDislikes: Smiling, interacting with people
    xxxxHobbies: Writing
    xxxxFears: Aging


    Apperance:
    xxxxSkin tone: Lightly tan
    xxxxHair: Black, cut short, graying at the temples
    xxxxEyes: Dark Blue
    xxxxHeight: Medium
    xxxxBuild: Average
    xxxxClothing: Slacks, tailored shirts, vests, lab coat
    xxxxOther: Older man, wrinkles are starting to appear

    Abilities:
    xxxxLanguages: While English by birth, Dr. Calgori hales from a time when being fluent in multiple languages was common place. Speaks fluent French and Italian, understands basic Mandarin and can read and write Latin.
    xxxxInventiveness: Need a car made of chewing gum and tape? Richard's your man. He has a Miguiver-like tendency to create a solution from anything.

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Elda-Chan


Elda-Chan

PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:25 pm


CHAPTER V

. . . Come My Love I'll Tell You a Tale . . .

story


xxxxOnce there was a young man who thirsted for knowledge. He wanted to learn everything he could about the world around him and how it functioned, so he devoted himself to the study of sciences, and he learned much.

Time passed, and the man’s love grew to include a beautiful woman; thus, he made her his wife. But his passion for knowledge burned brightly still and he devoted all the time that he was not with her to his work. He created many strange and marvelous things, countless small trinkets to impress and amuse his new bride, and the bride was pleased with her husband, and proud of his work.

Years pasted and the happy couple lived well on the profits of the man’s inventions. They were happy and in good health, but they longed for a child. One evening the wife came to her husband and told him she was with child. The man danced with his wife, and they were happy.

But as her pregnancy progressed the woman grew frail and sickly. No longer could she rise in the mornings to visit her husband in this laboratory, so her husband brought his inventions to her.

Her favorite was a wind-up doll; a tiny ballerina who danced in the palm of her hand. The wife loved to watch the tiny doll dance, and kept her by the bed in her sick-room.

Near the end of the pregnancy the woman’s health took a drastic turn for the worse. Late one stormy night she delivered a stillborn baby girl, sick with grief and shock and weakened by her struggle the wife died.

Brokenhearted the scientist buried his wife and child.

Desperate to regain some of what he had lost, he man began to study the forbidden science of alchemy, wishing to learn the secrets of life and death. He took the wind-up ballerina, intent on creating a homunculus of his young daughter.

His attempt failed, and the doctor nearly lost his life with the explosion of his laboratory. He spent almost a year recovering from the accident, and when he was well again he rebuilt his lab and threw himself into his original work.

But he could not put the idea of creating an imitation child out of his mind. When he heard of a place called the Cabbage Patch, where using such children were supposedly born every day the scientist knew he could not pass up the chance to let someone else succeed where he himself had failed. . .
PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:27 pm


CHAPTER VI

. . . The World at Her Fingertips . . .

world



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    People:
    xxxx Emma
    xxxxxxxx Dr. Calgori’s housekeeper. She’s a jaded young lady with a no-nonsense attitude.
    She disapproves of the doctor’s experiments, and of the rather large messes he tends to make,
    but holds her tongue because he pays very well. She cooks all the meals in the household, as well
    as does all the cleaning tasks.

    xxxx William
    xxxxxxxx This clumsy young man is Calgori’s assistant and apprentice. The doctor took him in after
    the explosion. He’s a border in the household and is awed by young Isabella. William is eager to learn,
    but tends to trip over everything in the lab.

    xxxx Mrs. Calgori
    xxxxxxxx The late wife of the good doctor. She was a beautiful woman, and Richard worshiped the
    ground she walked upon. She died after a long sickness. Her death is the reason behind Calgori's
    obession with the secrets of life.


Elda-Chan


Elda-Chan

PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 5:39 pm


CHAPTER VII

. . . If I Believe What I Say I Believe . . .

music

Isabella's concept is based very heavily on inspiration drawn from music, specifically the group Abney Park.
This is a break down of songs related to Isabella and her world. Enjoy!


    Isabella
    xxxx Herr Drosselmyers Doll by: Abney Park
    xxxxxxxx This song is literally the inspiration for the Isabella's design. Although the song itself has a very sexual undertone, and is very different from what I have in store for Bella. Still, the idea of a wind-up doll created by a strange man is ever-present.

    Lyrics | Youtube

    xxxx Sleep Isabella by: Abney Park
    xxxxxxxx Isabella's theme song. A beautiful, bitter-sweet lullaby. Honestly, this song brought me to tears the first time I ever heard it.

    Lyrics | Youtube

    Dr. Calgori
    xxxx The Secret Life of Dr. Calgori by: Abney Park
    xxxxxxxx This song is where the idea of the good doctor came from. A beautiful witty song about a poor lonely scientist trying to hold onto his youth.

    Lyrics | Youtube

PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 7:30 pm


CHAPTER VIII

. . . Whispers of an Untold Truth . . .

critques/notes

Elda-Chan


Elda-Chan

PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 7:31 pm


CHAPTER IX

. . . Waiting for a Reason to Come Alive . . .

reserved
PostPosted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 7:32 pm


CHAPTER X

. . . I'd Like to Thank the Academy . . .

credits

Elda-Chan

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