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 Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 10:37 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 3:17 am
I only took a cursory look, but you seem to have a decent mix of subjects, though I'd always recommend a perspective drawing if you have the time, and possibly more figure drawing. If it doesn't break the rules of that particular project, the crayfish could use some more detail on him. But I'm really only picking him out because I like him.
It would help immensely if you mention what kind of program or degree you're pursuing.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 12:13 pm
i guess i'll go in and put more detail in the tail and arms i never got around to finishing (he's still frozen in my freezer hehe)
i added 3 more figure drawings and i wanna do fine arts???
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 8:10 pm
i think you have very good foundations and skills but that your portfolio in some parts seem very i guess commonplace, like i could easily picture some of these in someone elses portfolio so they might not make you stand out from the crowd
maybe pieces with more dynamic subject matter would help since a lot of your work seems to be still-life or otherwise immobile things
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