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Now my name is on em(open)

Drowningwaters

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Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 8:13 pm

Lots of stuff bugs me about this....just can't place my fingers on what it is though.

Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 11:06 pm

Oh.... you changed the image. >.<

Here's what I think.

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But you'll probably need a second red line.

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Bashful Strawberry

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