Uhh.. First, I need critiques for 2 of my drawings.. Thanks! =3

IMAGE 1:
well, it is colored with photoshop. (I can't seem to find the rough sketch)
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IMAGE 2:
Well, this is an avi art for a person I met before.. (It is an avi art of a kinsaki avatar, not a gaia avatar.. =3)
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Thanks for the critique!