Welcome to Gaia! ::

Hi! This is my first commission in a long time. I'm not particularly strong in drawing males, but figured practice makes perfect. I'd like a critique on this please, though I'm sure that's a given. xD Red lines would be really amazing of you!

Here's what I know looks off:
Hands (need more practice)
Forearms (I can never seem to make them look just right?)
Shading
Folds

the latter two I know next to nothing about. I seem to improve when I'm actually shown how to do it rather than hearing about it, though. Not sure why that is-- it's just my learning quirk. sweatdrop

Here's my image, and a thank you in advance for taking the time to help me improve. ^_^; heart

Thanks for your input <3
Yeah, lineart is not a strength of mine. I've been concentrating a lot on making it less shaky, so I haven't gotten to width and different thicknesses yet. I do it all with the same sized brush.

Thanks. I see what you're saying. It looks like I didn't 3/4 the shoulders. Now that I look at it again (after some sleep xD) it looks odd because I made the ipod arm thicker. I'll have to keep that in mind.

Good suggestions. ^^