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 Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 7:28 pm
Ok so this thread is dedicated to poetry. Post whatever type you want. People can comment on the poems if they want and there is no limit to how much you can post poems.... You can't stop someone from expressing themsevles.
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 7:32 pm
Deep crimson red lakes,
Drip down the valley of my mind.
Etching its soul into the ground,
And crying tears of pain.
Your twisted smile shatters,
The very light I look towards.
The threads of my life,
Are carefully played by the musican.
As each note is struck,
I die a little....
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 8:18 pm
Awesome, Theres a song in there somewhere, I feel it
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 8:38 pm
Arch Angel of the Abyss Awesome, Theres a song in there somewhere, I feel it I think that was the most random poem I've ever written, yet it works.
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Lynn-The Killer Beauty Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 3:01 pm
All I ever hear...
Be a good girl,
Just behave,
Stay in school,
Make the grade,
Never fail,
Never fade.
Be a hero,
Be a star,
Be EVERYTHING!!
.....But what you are.....
(I heard it somewhere, I like it...Kinda reminds me of my life.)
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 5:18 pm
The smile you gave me,
Will haunt me forever.
I turn to a dark corner,
Light fadding fast.
The last thing I see,
Is that smile you gave me.
Cold to the touch,
Blood leaving my soul.
The smile you gave me,
Will haunt me forever.
Eyes glazing over,
A glassy stare.
The last thing I see,
Is the smile you gave me.
Foot steps walking away,
Echoing in the cold.
The smile you gave me,
Will haunt me forever.
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Lynn-The Killer Beauty Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 5:26 pm
Chaos_Mage The smile you gave me, Will haunt me forever. I turn to a dark corner, Light fadding fast. The last thing I see, Is that smile you gave me. Cold to the touch, Blood leaving my soul. The smile you gave me, Will haunt me forever. Eyes glazing over, A glassy stare. The last thing I see, Is the smile you gave me. Foot steps walking away, Echoing in the cold. The smile you gave me, Will haunt me forever. That was deep....It touched me in a way I don't like to be touched....
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 5:37 pm
Darkness
Here I lie in my bed,
Thinking, dreaming, wondering...
Why am I cursed with Darkness?
Then I fall...
Fall into what seems like an eternity...
I fall into the very pits of Hell its self....
Then I stop...
Just stop...
I am suspended in mid air....
A voice speaks to me...
"Cursed?! You think you are cursed?!
HA! Such a jest! You know not of true darkness..."
Within a blink of my eyes back in my room I lay.
These words speak the truth...
-Lynn
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Lynn-The Killer Beauty Captain
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Lynn-The Killer Beauty Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 5:46 pm
Why?
Why do you hate me?
Why do you call me names?
Why do you torment me with nothing but pain?
Did I do something wrong?
Did I cause you pain?
Why am I the cause of all your blame?
You treat me as though I am nothing but shame...
Can I ask you why?
Even when all I say is "Hi"
Well sooner or later no one will take your blame...
Sooner or later I will no longer be shamed....
You'll need me some day....
I am counting on your pain...
-Lynn
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 5:50 pm
Lynn-TheKillerBeauty Why? Why do you hate me? Why do you call me names? Why do you torment me with nothing but pain? Did I do something wrong? Did I cause you pain? Why am I the cause of all your blame? You treat me as though I am nothing but shame... Can I ask you why? Even when all I say is "Hi" Well sooner or later no one will take your blame... Sooner or later I will no longer be shamed.... You'll need me some day.... I am counting on your pain... -Lynn nice
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Bobby-RainbowsandGasoline Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 9:57 pm
Dancing in the moonlight,
Swaying softly to the music.
Never coming home,
Never going home.
Holding you tight,
As the lake of blood devours us.
We glide through the water,
Like Mermaids in the ocean.
The moon softly dips its head in,
Turning red with pain.
As your head comes up,
Tears of cold drip off.
Smiling whickedly you laugh,
Before you fall to your death.
At the edge of the bank,
I rock back and worth.
Still having the image of us,
Engraved in my mind.
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 7:03 pm
Heres one i did in HS, it was Homework one day:
To Diablo
Fair Diablo, we fear to see
You haste to come so soon.
As yet, to terrorize. Thee
Has not attained true noon.
Fray, Fray,
Until the day
Has come
But until your even song;
And, having seen the torment, we
Will goto end the terror.
We have short time to slay, as you;
We have a short sword to spring;
As quick as you came, only to decay,
As you, or anything,
We die,
As we fight, some try
Away.
Like to hell's gates reighn;
Or as the rubies of your brothers soulstones,
Never to be found again.
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Lynn-The Killer Beauty Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 01, 2005 3:56 pm
J-Blade Heres one i did in HS, it was Homework one day: To Diablo Fair Diablo, we fear to see You haste to come so soon. As yet, to terrorize. Thee Has not attained true noon. Fray, Fray, Until the day Has come But until your even song; And, having seen the torment, we Will goto end the terror. We have short time to slay, as you; We have a short sword to spring; As quick as you came, only to decay, As you, or anything, We die, As we fight, some try Away. Like to hell's gates reighn; Or as the rubies of your brothers soulstones, Never to be found again. Whoa....That is awesome....
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2005 9:16 am
This poem does not rymth(sp) this is me venting about something that happened, wait no it does rymth(sp) a little but not a lot. UH....dont hurt me if it sucks a**!
you said
You said you'd never hurt me
You said you'd never leave me.
I can't believe that all you said was just a bunch of lies.
I wish i could just die right here.
You said you loved me.
You said you cared about me.
It was bull s**t, all bull s**t.
You hurt me, i hope the deed is repaid to you by your next love.
You Lied to me, hurt me, scared me.
I gave you my heart for those six wonderful months, than you left me with nothing but pain.
What did i do to deserve this from you? The one guy i needed so badly.
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 4:16 pm
Lynn-TheKillerBeauty J-Blade Heres one i did in HS, it was Homework one day: To Diablo Fair Diablo, we fear to see You haste to come so soon. As yet, to terrorize. Thee Has not attained true noon. Fray, Fray, Until the day Has come But until your even song; And, having seen the torment, we Will goto end the terror. We have short time to slay, as you; We have a short sword to spring; As quick as you came, only to decay, As you, or anything, We die, As we fight, some try Away. Like to hell's gates reighn; Or as the rubies of your brothers soulstones, Never to be found again. Whoa....That is awesome.... not really i just copied it, the original was called To Dafodile or something i cant remember. i was gonna do a Necromancer one but i got kicked from the class
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