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Tomatoes and Radiowire Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:19 am
Perfect little buttercup icey fingers when you turn it up
mooney eyes when you shut them up traveling arms when you hit it up.
Spary paint lips and candle light hair buttercup buttercup must you be so unaware.
pull that trick again pull that one again
try it all again get away again
again again again again again....
Where have I seen you before, I swear I've done this before.
I'm all shattered on my feet and scrambled in my head
was it you really my only way out, that means you've done it again
I know you must've again must have left us again,
sugarpop again has done it once again.
again again again again again....
wave goodbye to your friends now, we're moving out.
wanderlust in the bad way tell me you're just moving out.
thank you again thank you thank you
thank you again thank you thank you
again again again again again
again again again again again
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if you read anything imagining a winey b***h singing it it sounds emo-ish, but I'm not winey I'm just a b***h motheroeoeoe... it's ******** late.
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:08 pm
Looks good, I don't know how it shall sound but only like one problem....
'Again' repeated flows.
'Thank you' does not flow when repeated, at least how I imagined it would be sung.
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Tomatoes and Radiowire Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:23 am
yeah that sort of thing is more open to how the music carrys it though.
I was thinking it would work like that Stooges song 'Down on the Street'
No wall! No wall! No wall!
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:05 pm
I like this - I can hear the rhythm without having the music, which is always nice. And it's not too obvious what it's about. Keep on.
The descriptive phrases are wonderful.
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