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 Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 4:36 pm
Hello, I participated in the first pass around the story and thought (still think) it was awesome. so I decided to make one with a different story.
For those of you who don't know pass around the story in where a hole lot of people sit and have a few minutes each to add a bit of writting to a story. you are only supposed to be given a few minutes, so if you join, be sure not to write for to long.
I hope you enjoy creating a new story!
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Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 4:52 pm
Vivian watched from the air as the beasts toor at the carcass of some poor animal they had caught. Vermin, she thought, It's desgusting. She nocked an arrow and shot one of them as it looked up at her. All the others roured as they realized she had just killed their comrad. "The flying one has kill one of us! Get her!" They all grabbed a nearby rock and made an attempt to nock her out of the sky, there aim was terribly poor. She shot another and another until there were only two left standing. What's the point of caring about such stupid vile beasts? she thought, and loosing one more arrow, she took of toward her village. They needed the supplies she carried.
She landed in the center of town and folded her wings behind her. "Vivian's back! Vivian's back!" screamed a child running toward her. Others came out of their homes to welcome her as she hugged the little girl, her sister, who had run up to her.
One man came up to her. "Were you able to find any?"
"Yes Doctor," she sighed, detaching the bundle from her back, "Here."
"Thank you Vivian, you have saved us."
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 11:58 am
((I had no idea my old thread actually survived. xD But, yay another story to pass around! ^^))
"Vivian," the little girl whispered, her head buried in her older sister's arms. "You killed more of them for the doctor, didn't you?" Her eyes saddened. "You know it isn't right to kill them. The doctor knows too, but he doesn't care."
"It's okay, Ilsa," Vivian replied, comforting the girl with a light pat on the shoulder. "The doctor is a good man. You have to try to understand his situation. Our people are dying and we depend on him."
"But he's not helping us!" Ilsa hissed. "He's faking! I swear, it's true!"
Vivian grasped her sister firmly, holding her at a distance. "Don't ever say that!" she said sharply. "The doctor has done nothing but work day and night to save people's lives!"
"Well, if you weren't so busy hunting for ingredients for his medicine, maybe you would notice what he really does with those ingredients," Ilsa mumbled.
"What was that?" Vivian asked, her head already cocked in another direction, distracted by the screeching cry of a distant creature.
"Nothing," Ilsa replied, shrugging out of her sister's grasp. "I should get back to the cottage. I'm sure the doctor will have you back on the hunt soon enough anyway."
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