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 Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 6:36 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 8:20 pm
Hola Kaiser,
I read the first chapter of your story and you've got great diction! Anyway, I think you may have opened your story too quickly. Also, you do not need to spend too much time using phrases like "said the blue haired boy". People who watch Shaman King will know Horo Horo, so you can jump into using his name or just do a short intro to his character. : D That's my advice...though I stopped writing fanfiction a long time ago. ^^;; I think I still have some fanfics on fanfiction myself, unless they took my account off. : D Anyway, you have fun with that story, and I'll check out more of your chapters later. ^^ Good Luck!!
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 9:56 pm
Thanks! I had tried to write it several times before but finally I resorted to going along with the manga. It may not be perfect but I think it's okay. Better than what I had before. rolleyes I'm adding chapters all the time, at least one everyday. I'm glad someone is actually reading it. My friends and family support what I do but it seems that they're too lazy to go and read my work. Oh well. 4laugh
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:27 pm
^^;; A part of me can't blame them because I can be quite busy *caughLAZYcough* too.
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 7:10 am
Well they're not busy, they just don't care. But yeah I can understand that.
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Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 6:42 pm
= D Read chapter two...go Ryu!
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Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 6:44 pm
I've finally come to the climax! Yes! xd Now for the falling action and resolution. ( Haha, I listen in Literary Analysis class )
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 4:40 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 4:34 pm
okay first off i love your avatar, it's amazing. second of all, i checked out your account. i'm sorry, i'm not much of an Original Character/Mary Sue reader, so i didn't get too far into the stories. you should try real pairings, you'd go far. and that Jesus fanfic thing is amazing.
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 7:32 pm
Quote: okay first off i love your avatar, it's amazing. second of all, i checked out your account. i'm sorry, i'm not much of an Original Character/Mary Sue reader, so i didn't get too far into the stories. you should try real pairings, you'd go far. and that Jesus fanfic thing is amazing. Thanks! I love my avatar too. I understand, Trial By Fire isn't for everybody. People have their tastes. The only SK pairing I would probably be able to do is TurbineXPeyote. I love that Jesus fic, the concept is epic and the author is amazing!
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Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:28 am
I read a few and their pretty neat
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Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 5:31 pm
Quote: I read a few and their pretty neat Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
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