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Twilight_Darling

PostPosted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 9:11 pm


Well I know were supposed to write poems here but I wrote a song, which is basically a poem... anyways here's the song.

Charms For Cowards

He said I was his life
He said I was his all,
He said that without me
He'd tumble and fall,
He said I was his rock
He said I was queen,
He said without me
He'd loose just about everything.

But I guess he was wrong
Because he's moving along,
And without me
His so called queen.
But it doesn't matter what he said
Because I'm done I'm through,
Doesn't matter what he said
When you have me and I have you.

He said I was this
He said I was that,
But in the end
Was I just a party hat,
Something you just
Take and use,
Until you find something better
Like girls and booze.

But I guess he was wrong
Because he's moving along,
And without me
His so called queen.
But it doesn't matter what he said
Because I'm done I'm through,
Doesn't matter what he said
When you have me and I have you.

I guess that this is over
Nothing left to loose or gain
Because this is over
Nothing more and no more pain.

But I guess he was wrong
Because he's moving along,
And without me
His so called queen.
But it doesn't matter what he said
Because I'm done I'm through,
Doesn't matter what he said
When you have me and I have you.

Cause it doesn't matter what he said,
When you have me... you have me...
And I... I have you.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 7:20 pm


I like it a lot Twilight. One suggestion though, change Christmas to "party" perhaps? Christmas hat just didn't sound right and party hat would work just as well. Now all you need is a tune to set it too.

Shanra the Dragon Bard
Vice Captain

Devout Worshipper


Twilight_Darling

PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 10:28 pm


Thanks I just thought randomly then. And I'm trying to have this cute guy I like to teach me. Bonus for both, but I don't know if he will. But I want to make that song big.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 9:32 pm


I totally agree with Shanra--it's very good. I want to hear it!!!

luvs2wolf_is_a_dragon


Twilight_Darling

PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:48 pm


Will do, the minute I find a guitarist biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:56 pm


Beautiful song. Can't wait to hear it. Lol A guitarist shouldn't be that hard to find xD.

Vincent SN
Crew

Loyal Gatekeeper

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