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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 2:59 pm
I'm writing my own story based on the world of Vana'diel ( I'm not sure if I put that apostrophe in the right spot x.x;; ). Here's an overview of what I'm planning:
Three Seraphim from Hell descend upon Vana'diel, wanting to kill every last creature in existance. They decide to start by destroying Bastok. However, they don't predict that one, very strong White Mage would be able to cast Shell enough to save his sorry a** and two of his friends--A Red Mage and a Paladin.
The Seraphim assume that they have killed every Bastokan, and thus they begin to make their way to Windhurst and discuss the deed they have just done. Luckily, the Seraphim that destroyed Bastok would have to wait a while before being able to devastate Windhurst.
The three overhear this and make their way across the continent, trying to prevent the destruction of Windhurst, San'doria and Jeuno.
Since I'm a bit new to the game, I'd like all of your tips and suggestions to the story. I already have up to the Konschtat Highlands planned-out, since that's about as far as I travelled from Bastok so far.
Here is what I have in mind for a cast:
Red Mage -- Hume (Female): Kinikki White Mage -- Tarutaru (Male) Paladin -- Galka: Iron Eyes Warrior -- Hume (Female) Bard -- Hume (Male): Aeschylus Black Mage -- Tarutaru (Male) Beastmaster -- Galka Summoner -- Tarutaru (Female) Dragoon -- Hume (Male) Thief -- Mithra: Maruko Ninja -- Elvaan (Female) Samurai -- Elvaan (Male) Monk -- Galka Ranger -- Elvaan (Male) Dark Knight -- Galka
NOTE: None of these characters have names yet. Please PM or post here if you would like one of these characters to be named after you or just to suggest a name.
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:20 pm
Dark Knight should be Galka if anything ^^. Zeid, the legendary Dark Knight, and the one who offers you the quest, is Galkan. But, I am biased toward Hume M of course.
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:25 pm
Dakinn Dark Knight should be Galka if anything ^^. Zeid, the legendary Dark Knight, and the one who offers you the quest, is Galkan. But, I am biased toward Hume M of course. Alright. I made Monk a Mithra and Dark Knight a Galka. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 4:25 pm
i'd be willing to give advice on Bard if you need it.
i've been exceling in that job lately smile
i can also help with: War, Paladin, Ninja, and a -little- of Thief (it's only 25 mad )
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 8:09 pm
That galak should be a MNk, the thf would work better as a mithra and the rdm a hume...bha
And make it so sandy is blow off the face of vana'diel...
But otherwise this is a good idea
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2005 11:31 am
Okay, it's all been edited... Please, no more edits like that suggested.
Suggest things like plot points and character names!! stressed
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Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2005 9:42 am
Does anyone want to have any of the above characters named after themselves?
Or would someone lay out the areas you would need to go through WITHOUT using Chocobos or Airships when I list this...
Bastok to Windurst
Windurst to San'Doria
San'Doria to Jeuno
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Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2005 3:56 pm
My brain cells...dieing.
Mabye you should leave the storyline to S-E, this one isn't very good. sad
(Not that I could do better.)
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 6:47 am
I'm a Hume Female Red Mage o____O My character's name is Kinikki if you wanna' use that n.n;
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 10:37 pm
my ninja is only level 8 but i have a main of a level 31 black mage taru (it deleveled ><)
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 7:48 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 3:58 pm
u can use my name as the bard
Aeschylus
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 2:32 pm
Okay... so we have a name for the Bard 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 7:45 pm
I have an important question!
I've never been to Windurst, so how big is Heaven's Tower? And how "grand" is it? Does it look anything special?
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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 10:04 am
Seitekifu I have an important question! I've never been to Windurst, so how big is Heaven's Tower? And how "grand" is it? Does it look anything special? It's like... A large tree in the middle of Windurst Walls. Very big. Dead centre. Very pretty inside. When I next go on I'll get some pictures inside, I'm in Windy now.
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