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Kaosujin Ryu

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 10:58 am


This is a fanfic I working on. It uses the characters of Naruto with a few other reated characters thrown in.

Main Characters- Ricochet Seishou, Raijeen Arcaeus (my character), and the Naruto cast.
Villians- You'll see in time...

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Location: A mountain home in the Andes Mountains..
Time: the near future..

Raijeen Arcaeus staggered at the blow from the scarred street fighter across his jaw. His light green eyes narrowed. Time to quit playing with these idiots and start having a little bloodshed, he thought grimly as a bloodstained smile flickered on his face. He stood, seeming to be dazed. He distantly sensed the other fighters, two of them advancing at his back.
The betting flew as his twisted uncle screamed to him to fight back. He flicked the bird at his uncle as the betting increased. He flexed his fingerless gloves and relished the blood that would soon flow. He reared back as the fighter to his right and behind whipped a length of chain foward, wrapping it around his forearm. Perfect, Raijeen thought.
He pulled hard, pulling the man in at a half run. His fist crushed with a loud crack into the man's throat as he passed by, then the man collided with the man in front of Raijeen, taking them both down. Raijeen's feral gaze caused the man still on his feet to charge blindly, flailing his fists. Raijeen sighed, bored, then landed a kick to the man's groin and snapped his neck with a backhanded blow.
The weighted gloves and clothes he wore were quite heavy for a normal person, but he was unique. Stronger and faster than many other people, his talents hadn't helped him when he'd been kidnapped by his uncle's men and transported here. He much preferred Japan, his homeland, to the shithole he was stuck in now. The man with the crushed larynx finally spent his death struggles, having strangled and drowned on his own blood.
The last remaining opponent stepped warily, having relieved the other man of his chain. Raijeen smiled, watching closely and warily at the man. He was swinging the chain in large arcs, smirking. "Are you so eager to die, dumbass?" Raijeen said dryly, his soft voice cold and amused.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:40 pm


HERE'S PART TWO OF CHAPTER ONE!!!

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Raijeen smirked as the man swung the chain, narrowly missing him. The man's heart was no longer in the fight, so Raijeen was beginning to grow bored. Raijeen advanced, his arms loose at his sides. His spiky deep blond, almost orange, hair bobbed slightly in his stride. The man gritted his teeth and swung the chain at Raijeen's throat, aiming to choke him out. It wrapped around his throat, but since he was moving, slack rapidly grew in the chain. He headbutted the man, then relieved him of the chain. He wrapped the chain twice around the man's throat after unwrapping it from his own. He gripped the ends and slingshotted him into the side of the cage with tremendous force. He unsheathed the knives, each of which were eight inches in length on the blades, from his hips. With twin quick slashes, the man's head rolled, detached from the torso. The man's body, which had been just rising from the knees with the chain loosely held, slumped over as blood poured from the stump of his neck.
Raijeen yawned, unimpressed. "If that's the best China's underworld can offer, then I need a real challenge," he sighed. He crossed his arms, resheathing the knives. His forearms began to tingle, a sign that something wasn't right. The dragon tattoos on his forearms had almost always warned him when things were about to go wrong. A faint crimson glow came from the Chinese style dragons that curled like a corkscrew up his forearms. Both were black and silver, identical. He suddenly felt a sensation that he'd been shoved. His body hadn't moved an inch. He felt himself turn towards his uncle, a broad shouldered balding man, whose pale gray gaze was fixed on him. He tried to say something was wrong, but no words came from his mouth. He felt himself charge, slamming a brutal punch into his uncle's mouth as the cage door swung open. The man who ran nearly the entire Colombian cocaine cartel staggered, his teeth sent down his throat. Blood poured from his mouth as he hit the floor. Raijeen tried to slow, to stop, but his body didn't even slow; if anything, it accelerated. He charged down the hall, which had oriental paintings on the walls to his left, windows overlooking a steep cliff to his right. He realized that the passageway he was speeding down had a massive plate glass barrier. It was a dead end. A faint panting sounded inside his mind. Who are you? he thought.
A feral growl sounded as a reply. It suddenly felt as if his veins were frozen and burning at the same time. I am Houkou no Ikucho, a deep voice answered after a few minutes.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:30 pm


PART THREE OF CHAPTER ONE!!! (final part of this chapter...lol)

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Raijeen now realized nothing he could do would slow the entity that controlled his body for the moment. He heard Houkou no Ikucho chuckle in his head. Demon's right, boy, his deep bass voice said dryly. Oh, s**t, he thought. The demon's chuckle echoed in his head, making it throb painfully. Plate glass shattered loudly as his body shot through it, barely slowed by the glass. He saw a lo-o-o-ng drop below him into a deep, mist shrouded gorge. He managed to get out a short yell before the wind ripped it away. He closed his eyes; he was able to do that much, at least. His teeth clenched as he felt the burning in his body increase quickly. Rage surged through him as he dropped. You can't do this!! he shouted in his mind. A dark chuckle replied. Try and stop me, cub, the demon retorted.
He felt the wind whipping past his body as he dropped, helpless for the time being. He never saw the flare of energy that enveloped him. Next thing he saw for a split second was a lake from a great height, surrounded by forests. He saw tiny forms of people moving around the lake as he dropped. He could feel the heat around him, his clothes slowly burning away into cinders. He slammed hard into the water, knocking him unconscious. Steam and smoke rose from where he hit the water with stunning force.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 2:39 pm


PART ONE OF CHAPTER TWO...

TenTen jogged fluidly around the lake under the eye of Might Lee and Hayate Kakashi. The teams had teamed up for this A-Rated mission and were doing a little training to warm up. A flicker of light on the surface of the water caught her attention. She stopped in surprise, her deep brown eyes widening. Her black hair whipped around her neck for a second, then settled. She noticed that Sakura and Naruto had stopped as well. Her eyes narrowed as she focused on the glint.
Sakura Haruno noticed the glint out of the corner of her eye and slowed. She paused as Naruto dashed out, skimming the surface of the water. She grabbed his jacket's neck and the shirt collar underneath, stopping him cold. His feet shot out from under him and he dropped, landing in two feet of water with a splash. Kakashi stood under a tree, reading, as usual. Maito Gai had a hand over his eyes, watching them.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 2:07 pm


PART TWO OF CHAPTER TWO!!!
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TenTen glanced around where the fireball had impacted the water's surface and gasped. Bits of burnt fabric were floating on the surface. She and Shikamaru skimmed out onto the lake surface, moving quickly. A hand broke the surface of the water as a young man splintered the surface into droplets. His curly blond hair surprised her. He struggled to stay afloat as Shikamaru and herself reached him. His gasps worried her.
Raijeen's body convulsed as his muscles and entire body tightened. His gasps for air relaxed slowly as Shikamaru lifted him out of the water. His saturated and singed clothes looked as if somebody had tried to burn him alive.
TenTen glanced back to shore as Kakashi vanished, then reappeared next to her. She heaved on the strange young man's arm and helped Shikamaru balance the weight. Dragon tattoos poked out of the half burnt sleeves, TenTen noticed out of the corner of her eye. Her attention went to his back as she noticed old scars from what she was sure was a whip. There were over three dozen of the scars criss-crossing his shoulder blades and back. She gritted her teeth as Shikamaru used the Shunshin no Jutsu to teleport them to shore. They carefully laid him on the ground.
Faint grunts of pain still came from his gritted jaws as something assailed him. His body relaxed after a few minutes, then his eyes slowly opened.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 12:01 pm


PART THREE OF CHAPTER TWO!!
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Raijeen's eyes opened slowly. His whole body felt like it'd been put through a oven, then a washer. He groaned as he sat up. "Who are you?" the pink haired girl beside him asked. He glanced at her twice to be sure; her hair was indeed bright pink. "Raijeen," he growled.
Sakura blinked at his wary tone. "You don't look very comfortable, or dry," she observed calmly. TenTen chuckled under her breath, then narrowed her eyes as Raijeen glared at her. "Nobody laughs at me," he said shortly. Pale blue chakra gathered around him as he slowly stood. His visible wounds slowly closed as he stretched. The dragon tattoos on his forearms flickered slightly in the sunlight as his arms lowered. TenTen realized she was staring open-mouthed. She closed it as he glanced back at everyone.
Raijeen let a flicker of cool interest flicker in his eyes for a second, then his gaze was flat, unamused. "We'll take you to Konoha with us," Kakashi said quietly. He stood a few yards from Raijeen, his one visible dark blue eye on the otherworlder. A pair of daggerlike kunais shot at his back, a test from Kakashi's clone. Raijeen spun, knocking both kunais out of the air with a airborne heel kick, then snagged one out of midair and tossed it at the clone, who dodged it with a backflip. The young man smirked, which, under his circumstances, interested Kakashi. He vanished out of sight an instant later, then reappeared, landing a uppercut blow that upended the clone several feet straight up. Raijeen then grabbed the clone by the thighs and powerbombed him into the ground with enough force to crack the ground underneath.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 12:25 pm


Raijeen smirked, turning towards the other Konoha-nins. "Anyone else?" were the only words that came from his mouth. "What taijutsu style was that?" a new voice interrupted. A young woman with lava colored eyes and dark brownish black hair stood near Might Lee. "Ricochet," Kakashi said cooly. "What style was it?" she said more forcefully. He smiled slightly. "No particular style, just custom techniques," he shot back dryly. His fists clenched tightly. Her eyes swirled, the irises themselves rotating like a pinwheel.
Raijeen looked away, his gaze moving towards the water. He knelt awkwardly from the sensation of compression that wracked his body. He was so focused he was barely aware of the discomfort. Amusing, cub, that you would find a way to keep going through the pain of the transfer, Houkou growled in his head. A explosion of dirt and earth shot up into his face. He backflipped backwards, hearing Houkou's snarling chuckles in his head. Funny, very funny, he thought back sarcastically. He fell to his knees as pain exploded through his body. He could feel his entire body changing, altering. The pain enveloped the bubble of calm in his head as his body convulsed violently. He could sense the pair that had gotten him out of the water and the pink haired girl trying to hold him still.
Pain is part of life, he thought. It only ends in death's embrace, he thought. A bass growl rumbled through the haze of pain in his head. This body, while strong, is being remade and improved, Houkou said cooly, the sound of a relaxed dog. Smart cub, the demon said, amused now.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 12:32 pm


Sakura Haruno's eyes widened. His body under her hands had begun to bleed from unknown sources, soaking the fabric as a extremely faint but visible blue-violet enshrouded him. "We have to get him to Konoha as quickly as possible!!" she said urgently to Kakashi and Maito Gai, who nodded. To her shock, Raijeen managed to rise to his knees, his face and body trembling violently. His gaze, though, was calm even in so much pain. The glow faded as the muscles and bones settled. The glow intensified as he passed out, unconscious. TenTen managed to catch him before he hit the ground, but his weight took her to her knees.The rapidly muted glow around his body turned a earthy green as healing chakra surged around him. He opened his eyes and jumped straight up, vanishing in midair. "Slow-mo," his voice said as he materialized behind Kakashi. Sakura blinked. He'd moved so fast, she hadn't sensed his surge of energy.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 12:55 pm


Raijeen stretched his shoulders, letting the pain fade as Houkou's demonic prescence in his mind faded. His eyes narrowed as he noticed a trio of shurikens shooting at Sakura and Tenten. He lashed out with his mind, focusing on the shurikens. They froze in midair several yards from the pair of Konohagakure kunoichi. Kakashi's gaze shifted to him for a second, then he vanished into the trees. The girl, Ricochet, looked slightly amused. "Let's see them dodge this," Raijeen spat out. His hand twitched, sending the shurikens straight back where they came from, moving so fast they were nothing more than a flicker of discoloration in the sunlight.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 10:11 am


The shurikens hit the tree with a thud, as Neji and Kakashi dropped out of the tree. "Good reaction time," Kakashi remarked, his right eye on Raijeen. Raijeen smirked, then collapsed. Maito Gai lifted him from the ground. "We should be getting back," he said. Tenten nodded. It'll be good to get back, she thought.
Raijeen's eyes slowly opened blearily. s**t, he thought. I feel like somebody ran me over a few times with a semi, he thought. Houkou snickered in his head. This is only the beginning, cub, he remarked. This is gonna be very unpleasant for you, since you'll have to let out unneeded things, while your body adjusts, the demon continued. Bring it on, b***h, Raijeen replied. Houkou's deep chuckle shivered through his body, making him shiver slightly.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:39 pm


Sakura Haruno stepped into the hospital a half mile from the Hokage's tower in Konohagakure to see the stranger sitting up in the bed. He seemed uncomfortable and tense. "How are you feeling?" she asked cheerfully. She had a tray of medicines and tests she needed to run on him.
Raijeen frowned at the young woman. The tray she had held injections and medicines on it from the sounds coming from it. She looked him full in the face and her eyes widened slightly. "Your eyes weren't like that before, were they?" she asked. He tilted his head slightly. "What the ******** are you talking about? I feel like hell and you're asking about my eyes?" he spat coldly. Houkou felt like he was stretching out in his mind, then the sensation faded. His fingertips twitched, making the tray rattle in the girl's hands. A smirk crossed his features, then faded at her pointed look. "Don't start playing games in your condition, Raijeen," she said cooly. "Here," she said, handing him a mirror. He looked in it as his gaze widened. His eyes were a deep hunter green, with what appeared to be a shuriken shape in midnight blue as a ring of gold that was barely visible sparked around his pupils. "Hmmm," was all he grunted.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 12:50 pm


Raijeen glanced at the girl for a moment before putting the mirror aside. She injected him with an innoculation as he held his arm up. "I'm Haruno Sakura," she said quietly. "A kunoichi," he muttered. She nodded slightly. "Medic-nin, obviously," he continued. She nodded again. "I have an ability that is unusual," he revealed. Her head tilted slightly to the right as a slight smile crossed her lips. "What kind of ability is that?" she asked. The door opened, revealing a tall black haired woman with dark brown eyes. "Shizune-chan, he's awake and seems to be okay," Sakura said, making Raijeen chuckle slightly. Faint blue flickers of energy began to play around his hands, appearing to be blue flames. Shizune looked surprised. "Impressive chakra control," she remarked. Sakura looked at his hands. "It isn't chakra, which I'm pretty sure is within the body. This is aura, or outer energy which engulfs the body. I learned I could manipulate it when I was ten, four years ago, now," he revealed as the energy condensed into a small orb in his right hand. He was just a few days older than his fourteenth birthday, which made his skills interesting.
Shizune was surprised that the energy the young man was controlling wasn't chakra, but some energy called Aura. Her eyes widened slightly while Sakura's went wide as the orb turned a deep gold and tripled in size to the diameter of a large kunai. "Mixing Aura and chakra does this," the young man said. She looked at the chart, reading the situation. She was surprised he was even consious, given the amount of blood loss he sustained. Maito Gai and Sakura both had said he'd been bleeding the entire way from the location of the lake a few dozen miles southeast of Konohagakure. She was curious about this young man, who could manipulate chakra so well. He snuffed the sphere of energy out by clenching his fist. He then swung his legs out of the bed and went to stand, until Sakura shoved him back onto the bed. "You're in no condition to be on your feet," she said.
Raijeen smirked, then his form faded. "Astral clone," he said, leaning against the wall. "Always expect the unexpected when I'm around," he said softly. Shizune looked amused, while Sakura looked annoyed.

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