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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:01 pm
I am writing a Fan fic for after Breaking Dawn and I was wondering what you people think about it. I dont know if I should continue and i am kinda brain dead at the moment, So help please!
You can also chatter with me and other Twilight lovers. you can post your fan fics too, i love reading them. =]
Have fun!
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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:02 pm
Here it is so far:
Breakign Dawn Fan fic. (I do not own these characters, or claim to own them. They Are Stephenie Meyer’s Creations.)
Three Years later:
[Bella]
I sighed as I watched our daughter skip in front of us. She bent down to pick up a flower and ran back to us. Edward held his arms open for her as she gracefully jumped into his grasp. He held her on his left arm and took my hand with his right.
“Looky, Momma!” Renesmee said smiling. “Its beautiful.” I said looking at the daisy in her fingers. “I’m gonna give it to Jake in the morning.” She announced proud of herself. “I bet he will love it.” Edward said in his velvet voice. Renesmee reached over to place her hand on my cheek. I instantly saw what she was thinking, her giving Jake the flower and then him smiling at her. I smiled in response as she took her hand away to place it on Edward’s face. He lowered her down to the ground, and she immediately took off skipping ahead of us again.
I sighed and leaned against Edward, my head on his shoulder. I felt his cheek brush against the top of my head. I thought back to just earlier today, Carlisle was measuring Renesmee. She was almost growing at a normal, human rate now. Even though she was still only three years old, she looked like a 5 year old. I sighed once more and Edward looked down at me questioningly. I just shook my head, smiling.
I could see the cottage in the distance now, and Renesmee running back to us. I let go of Edward’s hand to hold hers, and Edward took her other one. We swung her lightly between us, Renesmee giggling in pleasure. I was still amazed at how beautiful she was. I didn’t know how she could just keep getting more amazing. I bent down and swiped her up into my arms. Another round of giggles began. I smothered her face in kisses, and she pushed my head away playfully. At that I started to laugh too. Then Edward chimed in.
We arrived at our home all laughing as a family. Edward opened the door for me as I walked in with Renesmee still in my arms. She put her hand to my cheek once more and I saw that she wanted to put the flower in a vase for safe keeping. Edward, not needing her to touch his face ran to a cabinet and found a vase. He filled it with water and came back. He held it down at Renesmee’s level and she plopped the flower into it. Edward placed the vase in her hands and carefully pushed her into her bedroom. He then picked her up to the height of her dresser, so that she could place it on top. She clapped and then yawned. “Alright, time for bed, sleepy-head.” Edward whispered, a smile playing on his lips, as he walked her over to her bed. “No, no! Read me a story!” Renesmee almost cried in her sweet voice. “Fine, but only one short one.” Edward agreed, pulling a random book from the shelf. I went to sit on the other side of the bed across from him. He held the book out in front of Renesmee and started to read one of Shakespeare’s wonderful pieces of literature. After only a few minutes, Renesmee slowly dazed off into dreamland. I kissed her forehead, “Goodnight, Nessie.” I slowly, trying not to wake her, stood up and went to stand in the doorway. I gazed at Edward looking lovingly at our daughter and sighed. This was more than I ever hoped for. This was magic. I started walking off to get changed into something more comfortable for tonight’s agenda. I smiled sheepishly at the thought. I walked, with deliberate slowness, to the closet the size of a house, and started going through all the skimpy lingerie Alice had stored in here. All too soon Edward was behind me, wrapping his hard hands around my waist. I sighed and let my head roll back to rest on his shoulder. “What do you think you are doing, love?” He asked with a bit of humor in his voice, “Starting the party without me? I hope not.” With that tone in his voice I knew he had his amazing crooked smile on, that I loved. I turned my head to kiss his neck. “Of course not,” I said almost giggling. “I was just preparing before the party.” I kissed his neck again a little higher than before. “Why don’t I help you with that?” He asked, moving his head to kiss my forehead. “Hmm, maybe,” I smiled, then suddenly my back was on our bed and he was crushing my lips with his. I moved my hands to the sides of his face and then to tangle them in his hair. A weird sound came from the back of his throat as he moved his lips down my neck. I moved my hands to the bottom of his shirt and tore it off. I felt him smile against my collarbone.
[Renesmee]
I was running through the forest at my fastest pace, seeing the trees fly by me. Even though I was fast, Jacob was still faster. He caught up easily, even though he was in his human form, and picked me up from behind. I giggled, and he smothered rubbed his nose against mine. “Eww, Jake stop that!” I said playfully slapping his head away. “Ahh, but I got you!” He said smiling. “Its not fair that you are faster than me! Wait till I’m older! Then we will see who wins!” I said jumping out of his hands. I poked him in the leg and started off running again. I ended up in the baseball clearing. I sat cross-legged on the ground waiting for Jake to appear out of the forest. I heard a rustling of bushes behind me and I stared straight ahead, knowing it was only Jacob. I heard someone creeping up behind me. Patience wasn’t a talent of mine, so I turned quickly around, waiting to see Jacob’s face. Instead I saw a clouded black figure stalking foreword. I started to crawl backwards in fright but it was too late. The vampire crouched and sprang at me, face angled toward my neck. I screamed.
I sat up straight, covered in sweat. It was only a dream, only a dream. “Only a dream,” I said quietly to myself. I sighed and leaned back on my pillow once more. I closed my eyes and saw the black cloaked figure flying at me. I gasped awake. Thinking of only one thing to do, I whispered, “Momma?” knowing that they could hear me. After about thirty seconds I decided to go to them. I slipped my self out of bed and tip toed to their bedroom. The door was closed, so I turned the knob slowly and pushed the door. I peeked around the space wide enough for my head to see Daddy with his shirt off and hugging Momma. Then I saw Daddy reach for Momma’s shirt and I closed the door. “I’d better not bother them.” I whispered to myself. “They seem to be doing something that shouldn’t be interrupted.” I turned and started to walk to the front door. I needed to talk to someone about my dream. Maybe Alice or Rosalie. I opened the door and walked out onto the cold stones. I silently closed the door behind me and ran towards the big house. ] After about five minutes I arrived at the river. I never crossed it before. Usually Momma or Daddy held me. I sighed and looked up and down the river for something to go across on. I spotted someone pacing on the far side. I could only hear mumbled words but knew it was Emmett. “How could he beat me like that? He cheated, yes that’s it.” I heard Emmett sigh and then turn around to pace back. His face jotted up and he saw me. “What are you doing out here, Nessie?” He asked shocked. “I had a bad dream.” I said quietly. “Oh, I see.” He launched himself over the river in one graceful move and was at my side in a millisecond. “Why aren’t you with your Mom and Dad?” He asked sitting down by my side. I lifted my hand up to the side of his face and placed it there. After a few seconds I took it away, placing it on my lap. “Oh, I see.” Emmett said, hiding a laugh. He picked me up in his arms and jumped back over the river. He ran to the house and we were walking through the backdoor in about four seconds. He set me on my feet and I ran to Rosalie, who was sitting on the couch watching TV. She picked me up and sat me on her lap. “What’s wrong?” She asked eyeing Emmett suspiciously. I once again placed my hand on her face and then took it away. “Oh, great,” She said grimacing. Then she mumbled, “I am not the one giving her the talk about the birds and the bees.” Emmett roared up in laughter and Rosalie threw the remote at his head. “Alright, honey. Would you like to go sleep upstairs?” She asked me. I nodded and held onto her shirt tightly. She got up gracefully and sailed up the stairs and into her room. She laid me down on the couch there and found a blanket to lay on me. “There, now go to sleep and have beautiful dreams.” She said in a soothing voice, kissing me on the forehead. I yawned and said, “Ok,” and then drifted into sleep.
[Bella]
I gasped and asked, “Do you hear that?” “Hear what?” Edward asked staring into my eyes, leaning his head closer to kiss me. “Exactly,” I said staring straight ahead. I couldn’t hear any heartbeat. “Nessie!” Edward roared and was out of the bed and into the closet in half a second. He ran out of our room dressed and into Nessie’s. I couldn’t move, I was frozen in shock. Edward was back in our room, “She’s not here.” I quickly got up and ran to the closet throwing the first thing I saw on. I was out of there before Edward could move an inch. I grabbed his hand and pulled him out of the house. We sprinted through the forest and in one slight movement we were over the river. I ran through the back door first and into the front room. “Nessie is gone!” I half screeched. “Don’t worry Be-” Alice began. “Don’t worry?!?! My baby is gone!! Are you a maniac?!” I screamed at her. Alice sighed and grabbed my elbow. She pulled me up the stairs and into Rosalie and Emmett’s room. There sleeping on the wide burgundy couch was Nessie. “Wh-what. Ho-how?” I stuttered. I heard on the first story Emmett resting his arm over Edward’s shoulder and saying, “You might not break your house, but you have scarred your daughter’s life forever.” Emmett then broke into a roar of laughter that ended with the breaking of glass. I ran to the window and saw Emmett flying through the trees, leaving all but stumps. I heard a small yawn and looked back at Nessie who had awoken. I ran to her side and pulled her into my arms. “Its ok, I’m here, momma’s here.” I whispered to her while rocking back and forth. Nessie yawned once more and rubbed her eyes. She then placed her hand on my cheek. I saw in vivid her dream and then seeing us in the bedroom, her running with Emmett and then Rosalie leaving her to sleep up here. I gasped and held onto her tight. I ran down the stairs and into the front room, ignoring the shatter glass of the back wall and Edward glaring out at it. I ran over to Edward and he lapsed back into reality. He hugged both of us, his head in our hair. “You almost gave me a heart attack.” He grumbled at Nessie, “That is a very hard thing to do, ya know.” He continued. I remembered when he had said that line to me. Of course it was a fuzzy memory, but still one I wouldn’t forget. Nessie placed her hand once more to my face. I saw what she wanted. She wanted us to forgive her and love her once again. “We will always love you no matter what.” I said kissing her forehead. “No matter what you do. And we forgive you.” I was vaguely aware of Emmett being back in the house. I couldn’t help but notice Rosalie hit him in the head with the TV guide. Instead of Emmett flinching he took that hand and brought it behind his neck and then kissed her full on the lips. She pushed away from him, but he didn’t let go. She glared him down until he retreated his arms. I had to laugh at that. Edward was laughing too. I sighed and looked down at Nessie. We were going to have to explain to her about what we were doing. As if Edward could read my mind he whispered in my ear, “I hate the birds and the bees.” He grumbled and then looked down at Nessie with only love in his eyes. I leaned towards his ear and whispered, “Maybe we should wait a few years and ask Jacob to do it.” I almost giggled at the thought, though it was a good idea. “I think we need to take a walk.” Edward said to both of us. He took Nessie from my hands and held her in his. She wrapped her arms around his neck and he took my hand with his spare hand. I followed him out of the house and across the river. I hoped that he had any idea how to start and finish this, because I sure didn’t. I was expecting a little bit more time to discuss this with her. Edward sighed when he saw my face staring completely at nothing. I knew why. He was some-what mad that he couldn’t read my mind. “Ok, Nessie. Your mother and I love each other a lot. And when two people love each other the way we do, they begin to do something.” He took a deep breath and was about to start again but Nessie’s thoughts interrupted him. Nessie explained in words for me. “I know what sex is. I wasn’t born yesterday. Just because I am supposed to be three and barely even able to talk fluently, doesn’t mean I am. I suppose you can say I am very well read. I know what you two were doing in there when I walked in on you. You don’t have to explain it to me. I know it is an awkward subject.” She said exhaling. Then she smiled sheepishly, “I am very interested in the human anatomy. I found Grandpa Carlisle’s books.” She looked at me smiling. “Carlisle,” Edward and I both muttered at the same time. “Alrighty, then. I guess that’s over with.” Edward said with much enthusiasm. He turned and headed back to the house quicker than before. We walked back into the house, using the hole left behind from Emmett in the window. “That was fast.” Rosalie said eyeing us up and down. “Every night is fast for them.” Emmett muttered. Alice appeared out of the kitchen at that moment with a frying pan in her hand. She smacked Emmett in the back of his head and continued walking. “What? Is it ‘Smack Emmett in the Head Day?’” He mumbled. “Isn’t it always?” Jasper said as he appeared in the hallway above us. He flew down the stairway and caught Alice in his arms. She laughed delicately and kissed his forehead. We all heard it before we saw it, Jake’s tires on the gravel path up to the house. I looked nervously at Edward. What were we going to tell him? Should he know? Then again, Nessie will probably tell him anyways. Jake jumped up the steps and opened the front door. He looked around and he spotted the frying pan with a round Emmett’s head-shaped indent in it. He raised an eyebrow. Nessie reached toward him squealing and Edward placed her on the ground. She ran to him and grabbed a hold of his leg. “Jake!” She squealed. “Hello, little munchkin.” Jake said laughing as he pulled her up into his arms. She placed a hand on his cheek and then removed it after a few seconds. Jake just stared out the window. When she removed her hand he whispered in a squeaky voice, “Ok...” He paused for a moment eyeing Edward and me. “I never want to see Edward with his shirt off again.” He continued in the same squeaky voice. Emmett cracked up laughing, but immediately stopped when we all glared at him. If I could blush, I would be immensely. I looked down at my hands and then Edward wound his arms around my waist. “You have nothing to be ashamed of.” He whispered into my ear. Jake snorted and then said changing the subject, “I was wondering if you all want to come down to the beach with me. It is supposed to be warm but not sunny.” He said looking down at Nessie. She clapped her hands in delight. “Can we, Momma?” She asked me. “Sure.” Edward and I said at the same time, and then we laughed. “Ok, so lets all get changed and we will be back before ya know it!” Alice said rushing up to her bedroom, with Jasper trailing behind. Edward walked over to Jacob and took Nessie, “Lets go get changed then.” He said placing her on top of his shoulders. Nessie hit his head with her small hands happily. “I’ll just use the, uhh, bathroom to change.” Jake said awkwardly. I heard him go out the front door and into his car to get his things. Edward took my hand and we walked out the backdoor, “I know Alice has been dying to see what the bathing suit she bought Nessie looks on her.” He said smiling. “Yep,” I responded. We ran to the house and Edward gave Nessie to me while he went to get changed. I placed Nessie on her bed while I went through her dresser for her bathing suit. “What is the beach like, Momma?” She asked while I changed her. “It is full of sand and then the water laps around it. On sunny days the sand gets really hot and the sunlight glitters off the water.” I said removing her shirt and then strapping her bikini top on. It was a dark blue with bright pink stripes. I reached for the bottoms and put them on her too. “Sounds beautiful.” She said as she watched me. “It is.” I said smiling. I remembered walking up and down the beach with Jacob back when everything wasn’t so complicated. Edward appeared then, picking Nessie up in his arms. “Let’s go find some towels, while mom gets dressed.” He said walking out into the front room. I hurried into our closet and then put on a white bikini with red checkers on it. I walked out and spotted Edward throwing Nessie up into the air and then catching her. Nessie was giggling in delight and so was Edward. I had to laugh too. I ran out and caught Nessie in my arms before Edward could. I started tickling her, “Gotcha.” When we arrived at the house everyone was ready. We once again walked through the shattered window. This seemed to trigger Edward’s memory. “Oh, sorry about that, Rosalie.” He said as he remembered that morning’s events. “No worries. I would have done it myself if you didn’t get to him first.” Rosalie said glaring at Emmett. Emmett grumbled something along the lines of, “So I see the day’s theme has continued,” and walked out the door and towards the garage. Rosalie laughed and followed him out. “So, umm, Jake you want to ride with us?” I asked Jacob who was just walking out of the bathroom in swim trunks. “Yea sure, if we can take your Ferrari!” he said with a gleam in his eye. “Sure.” I said smiling and giving Renesmee to him. He placed her on his shoulders and ran out to the garage. “The bathing suit looks great on her!” Alice said clapping her hands. She was dressed in a one piece with geometric shapes cut out of it. I smiled, “Everything you buy her looks great on her.” I saw that that made her day as she grabbed Jasper’s hands and made her way to the garage. I pulled Edward along with me to the garage; he was smiling hugely the whole way. He got into the drivers side while I settled into the passenger’s seat. Nessie was bouncing with joy on Jacob’s lap in the back seat.
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