I am planning on writing a Fanfic for twilight, the first book, and I just want an opinion on how the first few paragraphs are. Is it worth finishing it?

A Game of Chance
Twilight Fanfic by Sachisai


I look around. I see them. Filthy, their auras pollute the world with a stench that never fails to let me wrinkle my nose in disgust. I am an Aura-Seer, a curse more than a gift. Especially when the world is filled to the brim with scum. Humans. Grubby, no good humans. Just when I think that a bad day is yet to come again, I stop. I see him, that face, that sombre half-hearted smile, that lush shining hair, that strong yet skinny figure. It is the one whose heart I long for. Edward. Edward Cullen.
Things would have, no, should have, worked out for us, me and Edward. I am his type, after all. No saying what that girl did to gain his attention. Out of all the humans in the world, she must be the one I despise most. Bella, she took him away from me. Isabella Swan, how touching. Edward may be blinded by her scent, but I know better. Her aura tells all. She will betray him. She will fall for another. I will not betray you Edward. If you would give me an opportunity. I love you. Remember me, Juliet Chance.

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