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ilovegrape

PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 8:04 pm


so yes, this is an older version of my oc toby :]
he was like 10 or so when i made him
and now he's 20 or so in this pic
i've been drawing him wayyy too often, the last four deviantations i've submitted are of him or include him :[
durrrrr.

but yeah, i've been trying out a new coloring style so critique on that would be mucho loved
and i'm pretty positive that his upper arms are too short :[
also! i such at drawing nipples. sorry D]
but yeah, redlines, text critiques, on anything are adored <3

thank you so much : D

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this picture isn't too big, is it D: ?
PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 8:21 pm


bfhsks I think I'm falling in love with your character ;w;

First, I adore your colouring style, keep going with it *_*

The onyl thing that really stands out to me is his right (our left) breastical. It seems to be curving in a bit too much?
Other than that, it's pretty damn swanky as is.

He seriously is something lovely *w*

Zucci__zookeenee


ilovegrape

PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 8:31 pm


HOMG I KNOW YOUUU D:
hi :]

ah i think i see what you mean with the boob
grr, drawing the half of the body that is farther away is not fun D]

thank you very much for your critique and kind words! :3

ooo.. swanky? thats a rather nice adjective.
i think i shall incorporate it in my daily vocabulary biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 8:36 pm


Yo ^^/

Hey, why does he have that scar there? I don't recall seeing him with a scar in the last drawing I saw...? (then again, I have a poor memory)


Swanky is one of my favourite words xD

Zucci__zookeenee


ilovegrape

PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 9:06 pm


well he didn't have it when he was a kiddd D:
some weird ***** prolly gave it to him =/

*hasn't decided why he has it quite yet... [/SHOT AT FROM ALL DIRECTIONSSSSS]*
PostPosted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 10:57 pm


It's not a bad picture at all.
One thing that really stands out to me, however, is his right (our left) shoulder. It seems really out of place, and might be jutting out too far.
I hope I don't discourage you. I adore your colouring style and am glad you didn't forsake his nipples like some do.
This character's hair is nicely done, it really stands out and catches your eye.

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ilovegrape

PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:56 am


oh, thank you so much :]
i am thinking i'm needing to do a mini-sudy on the body in 3/4s! : D
that far shoulder is always giving me problems, ya know?
once again, thanks for the critique, and i'm glad you like it!
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