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|[WIP]| KandiiLand : KandiiKing & Chocco, Count d'Chocolatte

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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 12:44 pm

*Also posted in the Artists Corner > Picture Post > Works In Progress Forum.

Critics, Comments, Redlines, Advice, etc. are always welcome, ne!
Please read on...

M'kay.
So I have this WIP here
Unfortunately. I am having the usual anatomy troubles...

Here is the picture:

-Sorry, if it is too large here, please tell me!
or link...

http://i337.photobucket.com/albums/n362/xcampii/kandiiland.jpg

Tell me what you think,
but if possible, please give me good critics!
C'mon, I can take harshness O w=;;
If you have an idea on color scheme to share, that would be nice too!

NOTES:

-KandiiKing is a YOUNG BOY.
-I made note of the more problematic areas that I see...
it's them circles and arrows there...mhmm.
-I had to edit in the bottom of KandiiKings shoes
-stupid scanner- so, sorry it looks funneh! : -x

*Will eventually be colored once I get enough help
and new markers and such....

Thank you .
<3

EDIT: Eep! I just noticed one of KandiiKing's is too low! O_____O;
damn. I'll fix that in a bit...
after I get out of he shower *______* ; eheh.

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:17 pm

for the color scheme i say look at candyland nd willy wonka for inspiration .. 3nodding

i tihnk your style is awesome!
i say for the elbows just try to round them out -make 'em less pointy
the guy on the left's right foot doesn't seem to be facing the right way it should be angled more towards "the viewer" .. i guess lol nd the other things you circled don't look so bad or maybe i just don't see it sweatdrop
you could also add more definition to the guy's chest unless, you wre planning on doing that with the coloring ..

well i can't wait to see this finished biggrin

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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:55 am

.wow, i really like it, i've been trying to get this style, but havn't been able to. probably because i don't use anatomy when i draw.

.well anyways, like Campii said, i can't wait to see it finished.

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