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 Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:59 pm
Main Character:
Marcus Aralias. Race: Werewolf
Main enemy character:
Shalkonon Danon Race: Demon
World:
Xamento
Time of the world:
2000
Main Problem:
Genocide
Main storyline:
In the world of Xamento in the year 2000 a hunt for all those of magical blood are to be killed. Any race that is unexplained anomalies. All vampires, werewolves, elves, dwarves, ogres, orcs, goblins, and animals with human intelligence are hunted. The leader of this hunt or more of a massive genocide is Shalkonon Danon. He is the king of the world now and he is a demon. The only races not being hunted down and slain are humans, angels, and demons. The demons and angels finally have stopped conflict agreeing that they are kinsmen. Humans turn into angels or demons after death depending on how they acted in life. Sadly humans have also started the hunt for these unwanted people: which is what Shalkonon now calls all unexplained anomalies. Shalkonon is a murderous monster. He is said to be the strongest being in the world. Shalkonon used to be allies with Marcus Aralias. Marcus turned into a werewolf from a human instead of a demon. Marcus was the first to be hunted and slowly Shalkonon used paranoia from Marcus to say that all of his kind should be killed. The angels, humans, and demons agreed because it meant more room for them and for every one of these unwanted people killed by them means more money for them. Now all of the unwanted men and women run. Their children were taken first and sent to an execution camp. They were told that they were being sent to a safe camp. Shalkonon fears the people he hunts so he keeps himself locked inside of his castle. Marcus has few followers who do not wish to stand up. Marcus is the one werewolf who is not afraid to stand up and say that he is the rightful ruler. Shalkonon was supposively the strongest so he was elected. Marcus is stronger than Shalkonon and he knows this. Now the war has been taken full circle. The whole world of Xamento is in conflict and Marcus will go through twists and turns meeting friends and foes at every turn. Some friends are enemies now and some enemies are now friends. Will Marcus speak out and win or will Shalkonon crush this rebellion?
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:16 pm
The story line looks great, theres just one problem
The Guild is called Medieval Fantasy and as much as I would love a story line like this posted in the thread, you are going to have to change the time line to keep it medieval, which I love how much fantasy work you put in it. But you still need to change the time period
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:26 pm
I never said what the era was. Just because the year doesn't mean that it wasn't medieval. It took Xamento about a century to get were Earth is.
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Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:27 pm
In the world of Xamento in the year 2000 .....kind of throws me off a little bit
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:08 am
Well that puts a little bit larger age limit. No one is 2000 in this rp. I want to have some restraint on it.
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