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Kaito's Love Themed poems [C+C]

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Kaito_7420

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:05 pm


I've turned this thread into a place for me to add my love themed poems dedicated to a certain friend. Please continue to C+C. I would like to continue to improve as I write more of these.

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Winter Paradise with You
Written on June 15, 2008

In the snowy dream world of ours,
you're the one for me.
You're my one and only love,
my nightly passion, my day by day obsession,
the crystal key to our beautiful winter paradise.
You've been pulled away, away from me, but
Just the thought of seeing you again someday
is enough to make that sadness go away.

Though we live our lives in seperate worlds,
working, sleeping, twenty-four seven,
In my heart I see you next to me, so I'm
thinking of you, loving you, twenty-five seven.

I love you, nya~!


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Missing You
Written on July 25, 2008

It's midnight, blue moon's kiss.
I stare at the ceiling, trying to sleep.
Forget all else, it's you I miss.
You moved away, you've got a promise to keep.

You promised me I could see you again,
And though every minute drags into hours,
I'd wait an eternity just to hold your hand,
And I promise to kiss your heart's tender flower.

As the night drags on, I finally doze.
Am I dreaming? Who's at my bedroom door.
It must be an illusion, my mind knows,
But my heart truly believes it's the girl I adore.

She slowly walks in, not making a sound.
I can read everything from her eyes and her face.
Her heart yearns for me, and it's me that she's found.
She climbs on the bed and she's in my embrace.

She slowly moves closer, a kiss she intends
Her soft, perfect lips touch onto mines
I wish this moment would never end.
I open my eyes. Through my window, the sunlight shines.


So how are they? My poems are few and far between, but I hope I can learn to write poems faster and write more poems. It usually takes me about a week or two to finish writing a poem. o.O
PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 8:39 am


Winter Paradise with you: I love it! its so sweet. so full of feeling. and its a very beautiful poem. it makes me remember all the good times I've had with my various boyfriends.

Missing You: its the most beeutiful poem, ive read in a long time. a few months ago my best friend moved to arizona. i miss him terribly and I wish we got farther through our relationship than just good friends. but I know I won't be able to see him again until next summer maybe. if I can get the money. but anywhoo! your a wonderful poet and I hope to see many more of your poems in the guild forums

Fluffy Pankakes


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 2:13 pm


Wow... you're in the same situation as me. My best friend moved to Florida, and I'm stuck here in Cali. I really miss her, and I gotta wait another year or two. I wrote both of 'em with her in my mind, if you know what I mean.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:36 am


Summer Morning
Written on July 31, 2008

It's still early morning
but the sun is shining
cause it's the beginning of summer

I wake up to see
your cute smiling face
illuminated by the warm, golden sun.

I reach out and stroke
your long, soft, flowing hair.
I get lost in your glowing beauty.

I pull back my hand
and, taking the chance,
I gently touch your irresistably pretty face.

Sleeping like that,
your curled up figure,
you look so absolutely adorable.

It's so hard to resist,
so I finally give in.
I hold your hands and my lips lightly touch yours.

I realized too late that
you were awake all along.
You pounce on top quickly and then hold me down.

Euphoric embrace and
a breathtaking kiss.
No time to react. I've no choice. I give in.

Utterly powerless,
I'm under your control.
I'm weakly squirming in ecstasy.

Things finally calm down,
but you're still laying on me.
I dreamily look at you and see true love in your eyes.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 7:02 am


i like the second one best, i can relate to it... my girlfriend left to the phillipines to visit family for a month, and as the poem said minutes drag in to hours, hours drag into days, and even days drag on, they drag on into eternity... i really do like that one... keep up the good work...
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