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Depression/dark poetry [C+C=Slam them hard]

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Kaito_7420

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 12:23 pm


Eh... I wrote this at a time after my first crush. And yeah. I was heavily contemplating suicide. I knew I would never have the guts to actually kill myself, so I just kept trying just for the pain and the knowledge of how bad I wanted to. But that phase is past me already. I think it's finally safe to admit that I wrote this.

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Depression

A world of darkness fills the screen.
Deadly depression taints the scene.

I dont see the world - I'm locked away
within the dark vortex, a spiraling display.

Haunting thoughts scream through my mind.
Hinted terror is all that I find.

The wounds in my heart are all gaping wide.
I'm now only wanting to go run and hide.

I'm drifting in a sea of pain as my hopes and desires depart.
I'm drowning under all my sorrow while I'm being torn apart.

I'm always on the verge of tears,
trying to hold back all of my fears.

My crystal tears are all turning red
from all of the horrible blood thats been shed.

The pain is deepening every day,
never ever going away.

I'm falling more deeper down the hole called insanity,
slipping farther and farther from reality.

I see a bright figure amidst all the darkness,
but from my point of view she was like a pretty goddess.

She took hold of my hand, she pulled me up near,
and it was at that moment that she looked familiar.

She seriously looked like a friend that I knew,
but I saw right then a misfortune was due.

The girl lost balance and was about to tip,
so in desperation I broke free of her grip.

Minutes later as I started to cry,
I realized that I was going to die.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 12:29 pm


This one I wrote after my first crush... Yes, I was still obsessed about that girl. This was written about two years after the previous poem. I never attemted suicide or anything from this one, but I did actually cry myself to sleep for the next week or two, just thinking about the girl and my poem.

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My End

Inside, I've been crushed and stabbed
The End Draws Near...
And every breath you take...
Every time your name is whispered...
Every time I see your smiling face...
Princess, you know who you are...

My End Creeps Closer Another Day......
But not like you'd care anyways. you're probably smiling... laughing at my misery, suffering, demise, and eventually my death...

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 12:33 pm


Ok... Need I say it? I wrote this one, a year after the second one, still obsessed over that one girl. I admit, that I obsessed over that girl for like... years... end of 7th grade, 8th grade, 9th, 10th, and even the beginning of 11th grade.

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dEAtH

Death
Striking fear

Being hunted
But wanting to live

Girl to love
Doing anything for her

Heart soon crushed
Not giving up

Trying for years
Shedding blood and tears

Life of love
But living for what?

A year before
Trying once more

Thinking it over
Building up hope

Out on a date
Cursed by dark fate

Blade in my heart
Stained in deep red

Nothing to hope for
No reason to try

Shadowy void
Final breath

Death
Welcomed relief
PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 11:37 am


I like your poetry pretty well, it's very expressive. ^.^ Makes you seem sad though crying I look forward to more!

Scazarith
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 11:54 am


Thanks! It was pretty hard to write these. I wrote the base of the poem off of pure emotions, constantly pressuring myself to think of those heartbreaking moments and thoughts, and then tidied it up afterwards. whee The first and second one sometimes still make my eyes go watery when I read them.

I'll see when I can cram in more time to write more poetry along this topic. I'll probably just post it in here when I do. Meanwhile, I've got poems with other themes I was thinking of posting too. I'm really busy with SAT classes and stuff, so only time will tell how much I do get done and how quick.
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