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Crew

PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:31 pm


"cherries on the sidewalk"

was walking down the street today

have you ever noticed, anne,

how many cherry trees there are?

although maybe trees is the wrong word

because I didn't see the trees

I only saw

cherries

small

red

circles

on the pavement by my feet

squish, squish, little cherries,

darker than wine

purpler than blood

bursting open with a little yellow heart and slick juice against the world

I wanted to eat them

but imagining the expression currently on your face, anne

made me walk on, smiling.

cherries!
PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 9:22 pm


Hungry.

I liked the imagery.

KirbyVictorious


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Crew

PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:59 am


xd Cherries are awesome.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 4:16 pm


True that. They're not an aphrodesiac though, like chocolate-covered strawberries. Definite flaw.

KirbyVictorious

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