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 Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 1:34 am
Seated Members:
1st Seat(Captain)- Xeion Kuchiki (bengervasquez)
2nd Seat(Vice-Captain)- Mizu Botsuraku (Mizu Botsuraku)
3rd Seat- Unaharu Galewind Shihouin (-ShihouiN WOLF-)
4th Seat- Chiu (Chiu Nanako)
5th Seat- Genji (Genjinuva)
6th Seat- Oath Izuka Galewind (iOath)
7th Seat- Saiko (SaikoZenjin)
8th Seat- Yoh Zala (iDa-Kid)
9th Seat-
10th Seat-
Honorary Members:
> Drift Galewind
> Yomiko Shihouin
-Unseated-
If there are any errors, DO NOT POST HERE ABOUT THEM. Send me, Fighting Fefnir, a PM and we'll work out whether there was a mistake or not.
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Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 5:29 pm
Evaluations. Highlight your own only, please!
Unaharu: I really like how you illustrated the sample. I also liked how you included other known characters in a way that fit them well. A few more written details would be nice, but very good overall.
Oath: Well written, but It felt almost disjointed. Try to make your sentences flow together more. Otherwise, it showed planning, but the execution wasn't as good as I'd hoped. Still, I liked it a lot. It really showed Oath's personality well.
Genji: I liked it. I feel you need to work a little on the flow of your writing. Add in some conjoining words, like 'but' 'although' and 'also'. Also, try to expand your adjectives, since you repeat them a lot.
Asukai: There's a lot of work to be done here. Firstly, your basic grammar isn't terrible, but isn't quite passable either. You need to vary your adjectives and action verbs to spice up the writing, secondly. Overall, you can work on it and you'll be fine.
Shera: I don't even believe you wrote this. Your character's name isn't Shawna, it's Shera. Shawna is your sister, Death God Killer, and I suspect she wrote it and you took it. It doesn't even match your writing style. Come back when you aren't lying to me.
PM me if you want any clarification.
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:07 pm
can i get a seat. i am welling 2 challenge any one 4 a seat
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:12 pm
Well, since our captain, Kamashiro-taicho, is away on band camp right now, I, Xeion Kuchiki, and Unaharu-hime, the young lady who greeted you on the profiles page, are in charge. So you want a seat? Very well, here's what we're gonna do.
Go to the "TOURNAMENT" thread and post your RP sample there. I'll evaluate it, since Unaharu-hime just logged out, and decide on what seat you'll have based on your level.
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 8:58 am
ok thank you for litting me know
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 3:32 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 6:40 am
Isn't Shera gone? (PLEASE say yes.>.> She scares me.)
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:07 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:41 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:32 am
. . .In this squad? Because you've never even posted. Actually your first and only post was in the tournament thread.
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:39 am
so ioath can you teach me a couple of moves
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:17 pm
Hey! I thought I was your master? crying
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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:21 am
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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:07 pm
iOath . . .In this squad? Because you've never even posted. Actually your first and only post was in the tournament thread. It wasn't my only post,next time please check your info.This is my 4th post,I'm busy getting ready for school
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