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Spastic waffles
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 6:11 pm


Well this one doesn't have anything to do with the 333 theme but...oh well.

Just write a story...the creation of you. Your gaia username, to be exact. How did your gaia self come to be?

Don't be real, be creative. ^_^
And don't make it too exceptionally long, or your ADD captain will have trouble focusing. Haha.

The Judge: Me!
The Prize: to be determined.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:09 pm


I'm all over it!!!

Serenity Reed
Crew


KelpMonger

Friendly Friend

PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:08 pm


th-th-thinking it up!
Shouldn't take too long, the name already has a somewhat detailed history.
And that's why I chose it.
Wait that sounded misleading. Durrahn was a creation of mine  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:31 pm


Zahmen is a cannibalistic cave-demon, and when the moon is half-full he leaves the sanctity of his cave to track down his prey: the walrus.
You see, Zahmen is actually a walrus turned bad.

Once upon a time a young male walrus was basking in the cool night air when I figure came upon him, dark and foreboding, but smelling of fish (the most enticing sent to a young male walrus); when Zahmen went to investigate this figure reared its ugly head back and revealed several rows of sharp teeth, hissing loudly like the great gods of old.

Well Zahmen tried to run, but as he had no feet he didn't make it very far before the monstrosity clamped it's lamprey-like jaws onto his fatty wlarus back. The pain was intense but the strong young walrus managed to shake free and swim away.

The next night he realized he thirsted for walrus flesh, and in a fit of horror ate his entire family.

Now he sits in a cave, starving himself for an entire month before going out to satiate his grotesque hunger.

He also managed to to get bitten by a human vampire, which gave him the ability to be bipedal (and some VERY interesting genitalia). He passes the time by writing.

Xahmen
Vice Captain


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:17 pm


eek OMG rofl

I can't do mine emo I feel all shy. BUt I shall enjoy all the other ones!
PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:00 am


Oh, Zahmen.......... rofl

Serenity Reed
Crew


KelpMonger

Friendly Friend

PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:55 am


Zahmen
Zahmen is a cannibalistic cave-demon, and when the moon is half-full he leaves the sanctity of his cave to track down his prey: the walrus.
You see, Zahmen is actually a walrus turned bad.

Once upon a time a young male walrus was basking in the cool night air when I figure came upon him, dark and foreboding, but smelling of fish (the most enticing sent to a young male walrus); when Zahmen went to investigate this figure reared its ugly head back and revealed several rows of sharp teeth, hissing loudly like the great gods of old.

Well Zahmen tried to run, but as he had no feet he didn't make it very far before the monstrosity clamped it's lamprey-like jaws onto his fatty wlarus back. The pain was intense but the strong young walrus managed to shake free and swim away.

The next night he realized he thirsted for walrus flesh, and in a fit of horror ate his entire family.

Now he sits in a cave, starving himself for an entire month before going out to satiate his grotesque hunger.

He also managed to to get bitten by a human vampire, which gave him the ability to be bipedal (and some VERY interesting genitalia). He passes the time by writing.
xd What in the World?
So , a Were-Walrus? rofl  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 4:42 pm


Durrahn
Zahmen
Zahmen is a cannibalistic cave-demon, and when the moon is half-full he leaves the sanctity of his cave to track down his prey: the walrus.
You see, Zahmen is actually a walrus turned bad.

Once upon a time a young male walrus was basking in the cool night air when I figure came upon him, dark and foreboding, but smelling of fish (the most enticing sent to a young male walrus); when Zahmen went to investigate this figure reared its ugly head back and revealed several rows of sharp teeth, hissing loudly like the great gods of old.

Well Zahmen tried to run, but as he had no feet he didn't make it very far before the monstrosity clamped it's lamprey-like jaws onto his fatty wlarus back. The pain was intense but the strong young walrus managed to shake free and swim away.

The next night he realized he thirsted for walrus flesh, and in a fit of horror ate his entire family.

Now he sits in a cave, starving himself for an entire month before going out to satiate his grotesque hunger.

He also managed to to get bitten by a human vampire, which gave him the ability to be bipedal (and some VERY interesting genitalia). He passes the time by writing.
xd What in the World?
So , a Were-Walrus? rofl


No... it's a walpire! ... or vamrus? blaugh

Chrysanthemum Moon


Chrysanthemum Moon

PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 7:12 pm


At the beginning, the sun, the moon, and the starts populated the world. One day, the sun said to the moon. “Let’s bring life to the planet called Earth! It’s a temperate place, and we can watch over it easily.” The moon agreed, and so the island Sujou was born, and a single sunflower was planted on the island. Soon, it matured and bore many seeds. Suddenly, one of its seeds falls out, and a son of sun is born. Many others soon followed and the island became populated. They worked in harmony, making the island into a paradise full of sweet-smelling flowers and luscious plants. Every six days, everyone have a festival celebrating the sun, because he gave them life and the plants they eat.

However, no one praised the moon for her part in their creations, so she became sad and lonely. A chrysanthemum flower heard the moon’s forlorn sighs, and pitied her. So, one night, the chrysanthemum unfurled its petals at night, allowing the moonlight to shine on its seed. Six weeks later, the people found a baby sleeping in the shadow of a tree. They thought it was another life the sun gave them and decided to bring her back. As they walked into the sunlight with the baby in tow, she started crying from pain. When the group arrived home after dusk and gave her to the healer’s care. A little time passed, the healer tiredly summoned everyone.

“There is nothing wrong with the babe…yet everything is wrong with her.” Waiting for the murmurings to die down, the healer continued. “The blisters are from exposure to the sun, and it’s healing uncommonly fast. Her skin, instead of the healthy golden brown we wear, is as pale as a corpse. Her preternatural intelligence is those near white eyes. I do not pretend to understand these things, but she is not from the sun. She's a daughter of the moon.”

A gasp from a person lured all eyes toward the healer’s hut. The baby is crawling towards them, causing fear to ripple through the crowd. Unexpectedly, she sat down and contemplated them with curiosity. Nervously clearing the throat, the healer spoke. “Where did you come from, child?”

She blinked, but didn’t do anything. The crowd shared a sigh with the healer. “What did I expect? A babe cannot—”

The baby suddenly pulled out a just-picked flower.“Chrysanthemum.” She then pointed upward. “Moon.”

That is my history…our history…
PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 8:48 pm


I would not want to be that poor kid.

Xahmen
Vice Captain


KelpMonger

Friendly Friend

PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:54 pm


So, how long do I have to create a summary of Durrahn's story?
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:03 am


Neeeevermind.

Voxxx


Xahmen
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:20 pm


Fail for being nonfiction.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 4:54 pm


Zahmen
I would not want to be that poor kid.


... I guess, because there's really only three endings. One, she's sacrificed as a gift to the sun. Two, she's revered as a goddess and a prophet and is forced into seclusion to remain 'pure'. Three, she's deemed as a curse and chased out into the wilderness. ninja ninja ninja None of the options look promising....

Chrysanthemum Moon


Voxxx

PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 10:15 pm


s**t, forgot.
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