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Zucci__zookeenee

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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:58 pm

So, was a bit of a practice with a different pose, since
1. I dont' generally draw people from behind
2. Also don't draw people crouching.

Obviously it's a little late to fix things since it's already inked but... I'll make note of things for future reference.
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I feel like you should be able to see his butt crack ó_ò;
(say no to crack, kids)

Also, large hand is large.

Sketched it up at work this morning since it's usually dead at 6:00am.

I was perhaps going to colour it digitally, but that takes way more effort than by hand =w=;

(side note about the image itself: he's reapplying make up after sex... since it wasn't gay enough already razz )

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I'm a dolt and started to colour them anyway 9_9;

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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:52 pm

I thought the dude facing us was a chick with unnoticable breasts, shows how much I know.

That's actually really good....if I were to nitpick, I'd say that you might have wanted to map out his shoulder blades in his back, if nothing else it would be more realistic or would make him look more masculine (as in more like a man, not necessarily more macho). Also, is that a blanket, or some sand? Then again, you didn't shade much if at all, so that's not really something to pick on.

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Zucci__zookeenee

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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 6:29 pm

haha, I tend to draw extremely girly men razz
It's how I like 'em!

I had drawn out the shoulder blades in the sketch but decided not to ink them and would work on them while colouring. Somehow, I didn't like the bold lines... I can always go back and add them atleast.

And yeah, a blankie. I was going to also emphasize the folds and whatnot during colouring, haha ^^;

Thank you!

Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:16 pm

when i saw this all i could do was laugh. its soo damn cute.it does seem like you should be able to see his butt.O.o

Kiri Hayabusa

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Hayashi Kiko

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Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 1:56 am

It kinda like yoai. I mean since it's boy-boy. Haha. I feel that it's sooo sweet! 3nodding

Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 4:03 pm

Hi! This picture is really cool. And yaoi! mrgreen We don't get too many yaoi pics on here I've noticed. Anyway, I think you did a really good job, especially since you don't usually do that pose and stuff. But, there was one thing that bothered me. Well, the guy with the back turned (will be referred to as Seme), his head bugs me. I think it's just the angle he's turned or something 'cause I hate it when I draw that angle as well. I think it probably won't bother me so much when it's colored. But what really got me was Seme's hair. It just didn't seem to flow as well as the other guy's hair. Perhaps you're going to clean that up with coloring also? confused That was just the thing that bothered me. And I'm not talking about how it clumps at the bottom. I just meant the flow. If that makes any sense. But the picture's really pretty and I hope you update this post too! 4laugh

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Count Chocolat

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Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 10:18 pm

OMG, I'm going to die.
I really like this pic--I started laughing the second I saw it. This was really good and I praise you for what you've done with this, but I do agree, his shoulders should be more defined. Good job anyway! *Thumbs up*

Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:47 am

only thing I can think of that I noticed right off the bat.. is.. he is too thin (the lipstick boy) you can see his ribs surprised does he not eat? he needs a burger and fries.. like right now!.. XD

anyway besides that I have no qualms about it.. they are cute and I think you should start your own comic User Image

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Zucci__zookeenee

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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 8:33 pm

Tarff

Hi! This picture is really cool. And yaoi! mrgreen We don't get too many yaoi pics on here I've noticed. Anyway, I think you did a really good job, especially since you don't usually do that pose and stuff. But, there was one thing that bothered me. Well, the guy with the back turned (will be referred to as Seme), his head bugs me. I think it's just the angle he's turned or something 'cause I hate it when I draw that angle as well. I think it probably won't bother me so much when it's colored. But what really got me was Seme's hair. It just didn't seem to flow as well as the other guy's hair. Perhaps you're going to clean that up with coloring also? confused That was just the thing that bothered me. And I'm not talking about how it clumps at the bottom. I just meant the flow. If that makes any sense. But the picture's really pretty and I hope you update this post too! 4laugh

His hair definitely annoyed me (along with skinny legs, large hand and bad feet, but... xD).
I'm going to try my best to make it look decently presentable when I colour. But yeah, the way it's falling doesn't look right, the more I look at it ó_ò;
Maybe I'll just try to erase his mullet entirely and give him a short cut >>;

But, thank you! biggrin *always loves your input*
(here's hoping I actually finish them >_<; )

Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 9:20 pm

ho'snap! this is awesomee >D
i see what you mean about the crack, but i'm not sure if it would be visible or not either D:

other than large hand is large, i don't see anything big wrong
i think the makeupman's belly button should be bit higher, like at the smallest point in his waist.
but omg i love the expression.
its like "sex was good. what time tomorrow?" (omg could not keep my self from laughing when i typed that xD)
and the fabric looks great all piled on the floor and such :]

*swanky-hooray* : D

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