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 Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 2:48 pm
Pretty much all of my girls are going through a tough time, and I couldn't quite explain my feelings in regular words like I wanted to, so I decided to do it in verse:
If I could only reach my arms to you
I would gather you up and hold you close.
It doesn’t matter what was said or done –
That’s the past, love, and it doesn’t matter.
We’re here now, love, and you need me.
If I could only reach my arms to you
I would gather you up and hold you close.
It doesn’t matter if it’s a single mile or a thousand –
I will be there, love, and it won’t matter.
I will be strong, love, and you can be weak.
If I could only reach my arms to you
I would gather you up and hold you close.
It doesn’t matter if I am welcomed or turned away –
I will stay, love, and it doesn’t matter.
I will love you, love, and nothing else will matter.
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 3:33 pm
This poem uses words repeatedly to strengthen them to a point where the theme seems almost...Obsessive. I don't think this is really what you meant to say, but still, it's a good poem.
But don't listen to me, I'm just a regular cranky mod. xd
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Le Duke of Undertaker Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:42 pm
Le Duke of Undertaker This poem uses words repeatedly to strengthen them to a point where the theme seems almost...Obsessive. I don't think this is really what you meant to say, but still, it's a good poem. But don't listen to me, I'm just a regular cranky mod. xd Well, I can kind of see what you're saying. But my girls got the point, so it got the job done =D
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