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bish diIIigaf

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Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2005 7:55 pm

This was just a sketch, not a serious piece/polished work xD So I left it in my artbook, exactly how it was scanned. For some reason I liked the roughness.

I'm not allowed say your not allowed critique it >.> But yah. Just know that was like a bored in legal studies class : ) Hence why it's done in ballpoint pen.

Ink'n pen

And she doesn't have a face : ( And she is REALLY uneven and her panties are obscure in a bad way D : Hehe.

Sorry if I stretched you page : (

But just looking for some tips to improve. Umm you can say whutever and I will appreciate it, just don't say " look at a book on anatomy " because that bothers me alot, but I wont go into why it does. I just have reasons for not liking people making a one lined attempt that only suggests I look at a book : )

That's all : ) THANKYEW ALL.

Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 7:30 am

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This was just a sketch, not a serious piece/polished work xD So I left it in my artbook, exactly how it was scanned. For some reason I liked the roughness.

I'm not allowed say your not allowed critique it >.> But yah. Just know that was like a bored in legal studies class : ) Hence why it's done in ballpoint pen.

Okay, the first thing I thought when I saw this pic is that something isn't right with the proportions.
Um.. I've tried to draw a "map" for the face. Did it in ms paint with the mouse so plz forgive me for the uglyness sweatdrop
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The eyes are in the middle of the head. From the eyes and down the nose is right in the middle of the eyes and the chin. The mouth is placed inbetween the nose and chin. The ears are placed paralel with the eyes and the nose. Hope the illustraion gives you an idea of what I mean.

I really like the eye though 3nodding
Like the style on the other pics as well.

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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 7:49 am

The first picture bothers me a lot. D:

I know you're trying to go for your own abstract-ish style, but it looks more like a very unexperienced artist drawing a face for the first time.

I do like the colours in the second two, though. And they do have an abstract feel to them, which is nice. The feet on the second picture look a bit too flat, though.

Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 2:46 pm

Tawney

but it looks more like a very unexperienced artist drawing a face for the first time.

Oh -_-

bish diIIigaf

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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 3:21 pm

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Tawney

but it looks more like a very unexperienced artist drawing a face for the first time.

Oh -_-

I didn't mean to sound harsh there. ninja

I know you probably hate to hear this, but try making it a bit more realistic, then adding some abstract features to it. If that makes sense.

I'm not really all that.. knowledgable about abstract art, but yeah. biggrin

Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:22 pm

Tawney

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Tawney

but it looks more like a very unexperienced artist drawing a face for the first time.

Oh -_-

I didn't mean to sound harsh there. ninja

I know you probably hate to hear this, but try making it a bit more realistic, then adding some abstract features to it. If that makes sense.

I'm not really all that.. knowledgable about abstract art, but yeah. biggrin

No it's okay, I should be more open to suggestions and be less sensitive anyways : )

Yah well you don't need to be knowledgable about abstract art to hava opinion or to give me tips : )

Thankyew for your help at any rates.

And elr0hir : Thanks for the diagram, I shall try keep that in mind when I am doing a drawing next : )

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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:57 pm

Np, glad you find it usefull :3

Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 1:14 pm

Tawney

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Tawney

but it looks more like a very unexperienced artist drawing a face for the first time.

Oh -_-

I didn't mean to sound harsh there. ninja

I know you probably hate to hear this, but try making it a bit more realistic, then adding some abstract features to it. If that makes sense.

I'm not really all that.. knowledgable about abstract art, but yeah. biggrin

I have nothing to add with the exception that I agree with Tawney here.

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