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You need to work on your porprtions (trust me so do i XD its hard). In most/ some of you pictures the eyes are way to small for the head. Your nose in the first pic seems its waayyy down on the face, like really long, makes it look weird. This will be easier if i do it this way, here. ^_^

1st Pic: - eyes are way to small for the head
- the ear is great ^^ right place for it to ^_^
- hair is great ^_^ well done

2nd Pic: - head has no shape at all, unless you meant her to have a round head.
- Again the eyes are waaayy to small. Nose is ok
- this time the ear looks off.
- Nice hair though ^_^
- neet clothing design, body porportions seem slightly off or tilted.... ^_^

3rd Pic: - Head shape jsut isn't there at all....
- Eyes are a little to small again
- like the nose and mouth, great job ^_^
- Hair is off due to head shape.

4th Pic: - Wow! great job i really like this one well done
- eyes are actually ok ^_^
- ear seems a tad to far back, but it still looks wonderful.
- Great job on the hair.

5th Pic: - well done ^_^
- Inuyasha's eyes need more detail.
- other then that wonderful job.

6th Pic: - work on the face shape ^_^ it looks undefined.
- arm looks strange, work on porportions ^_^
- legs are off to XD no feet? the legs to long compared to bod porportion.
- Great job on the clothes and backgrounds. You are really good at backgrounds it seems XD ^_^

7th Pic: - Face is off, no shape
- great job on the hair
- Neck is to thick ^_^;;
- arms need work, porportion, that is what it is all about ^_^
- same length from shoulder to elbow as elbow to wrist, remember. same goes for the legs.
- awsome job on the clothes again, and nice bow and quiver.
- good job on the background again ^_^

8th Pic: - head shape wrong, not there.
- hair will work out if head shape fixed.
- Great and awsome background again, awsome detail.
- porportions porportions porportions XD
- feet to small for body.

9th Pic: - head shape?
- neck to thick?
- shoulders are off
- clothing could use some detail or work ^_^
- guy? or girl? body build?
- great at the showing of emotion ^_^

Trust me you are doing actually really well for someone that has had no art lessons at all ^_^ Great job and there is some critique hope ya dont mind ^_^

here is another one i did a while back(sry its a pic and not scanned i was in a hurry and it takes forever to upload from my scanner) and also do not critique me on being a Christian this is about the drawing not my faith

here is a fat rabbit i drew(i had trouble with the ears so i know they look bad):

and a butterfly that i also did a while ago, like in January

and a wolf

and just a cute manga girl(i did the eyes on the comp cuz i messed them up very badly)

and a cool Japanese schoolgirl that i played with on the comp. and yes i know she looks like an alien you dont need to rub it in

here is the original of the above drawing

and here is a guy i drew with my awesome dream sword(i will show the full sword some other time) and yes i know the eyes are microscopic; i am still having huge eye problems, so bear with me. mostly the keypoint of this one is the sword...i almost worked harder on that then the dude