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 Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:36 pm
I sleep to wake another day.
Alive I will stay.
But just one more day I will play.
For 12:00 tomorrow I will start to decay
They sit without nothing to say.
Why should they care were my body lay
I wonder if I could of waited till May.
But hey
It's Good Friday
We party and I pretend
Pretend that I'm happy in front of my friends and friend
But my heart has descend
To a darkness that will not let it mend
So when I'm home later
I will attack myself like a hungry alligator
I doubt they will cry
Stop me they will try
But in the end I will die
Our hies will be but our last byes
In the silents there will be no sighs
For no one cares that Death got me between it's thighs.
Anyway... In the end I will Die.
Die
Die
Die
Date of death: July 31st, 2008.
Time of death: 12:00p.m.
Cause of death: Sorrow and lonliness.
Note: This was written last year and the times are off. even though I tried to edit this thing millions of times.
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:29 pm
why all the sorrow and loneliness
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:37 pm
vampiregirl178 why all the sorrow and loneliness 2 massacring relationships and 6 months of loneliness and everyone having someone. Tired of living with a year stolen from my youth by 2 idiotic women. And thats about it.
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:48 pm
Lord_Von_Revenants vampiregirl178 why all the sorrow and loneliness 2 massacring relationships and 6 months of loneliness and everyone having someone. Tired of living with a year stolen from my youth by 2 idiotic women. And thats about it. wow...that's quite a bit
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vampiregirl26 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:58 pm
Lord_Von_Revenants I sleep to wake another day. Alive I will stay. But just one more day I will play. For 12:00 tomorrow I will start to decay They sit without nothing to say. Why should they care were my body lay I wonder if I could of waited till May. But hey It's Good Friday We party and I pretend Pretend that I'm happy in front of my friends and friend But my heart has descend To a darkness that will not let it mend So when I'm home later I will attack myself like a hungry alligator I doubt they will cry Stop me they will try But in the end I will die Our hies will be but our last byes In the silents there will be no sighs For no one cares that Death got me between it's thighs. Anyway... In the end I will Die. Die Die Die Date of death: July 31st, 2008. Time of death: 12:00p.m. Cause of death: Sorrow and lonliness. Note: This was written last year and the times are off. even though I tried to edit this thing millions of times. wow ur a really good writter
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:04 pm
Thanks. I try. My other stuff is less ... wait I think its more depressing.. I wrote these after 2 horrible relationships... sooo alot of anger and depression.
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vampiregirl26 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:06 pm
Lord_Von_Revenants Thanks. I try. My other stuff is less ... wait I think its more depressing.. I wrote these after 2 horrible relationships... sooo alot of anger and depression. i write too and most of wat i write is depression and hate and anger so i kno wat u mean
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 7:48 pm
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Rozen Black Chronicles Crew
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 8:07 pm
I actually try to guess when is my next attempt on my life. So that date in the end of my poem is basically me saying I will be depress and alone enough to kill my self by july 31st. Which I'm usually right and at the last moment someone shows up and makes me feel happy again till I guess another date. I'm already feeling depressed and alone. Lets see if I can make it this time.
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 8:09 pm
Wow, sad to hear this in words. Why so depressed?
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 8:12 pm
Talidestra Wolf Wow, sad to hear this in words. Why so depressed? the nothingness.
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 8:13 pm
Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Wow, sad to hear this in words. Why so depressed? the nothingness. Mind to explain it to me?
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 8:17 pm
Talidestra Wolf Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Wow, sad to hear this in words. Why so depressed? the nothingness. Mind to explain it to me? life is supposed to have things in it... My life doesn't. No more family, barely any brother visits, no friends, no nothing. I got a job, but it makes me feel more like nothing.
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 8:19 pm
Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Wow, sad to hear this in words. Why so depressed? the nothingness. Mind to explain it to me? life is supposed to have things in it... My life doesn't. No more family, barely any brother visits, no friends, no nothing. I got a job, but it makes me feel more like nothing. I pity you for that. Look at my new poem I put up here "Looped In Grey"
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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 8:23 pm
Talidestra Wolf Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Lord_Von_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Wow, sad to hear this in words. Why so depressed? the nothingness. Mind to explain it to me? life is supposed to have things in it... My life doesn't. No more family, barely any brother visits, no friends, no nothing. I got a job, but it makes me feel more like nothing. I pity you for that. Look at my new poem I put up here "Looped In Grey" I voted it as good. You are talented.
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