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 Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:18 pm
G.I.R.L.
Original story by PositiveChaos
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Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:25 pm
Table of Contents G.I.R.L.
ToC
Story
Plot
Rules
Character Skeleton
Profiles
Questions and answers
Plot twists
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Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:36 pm
Story Ren stared, confused, at the computer in front of him. He sighed and shook his head at himself. He was 13 years old, and he couldn't operate a computer, sadly enough. Which meant that typing took forever. And of course, he was being spammed left and right with pop ups. Grumbling, he began to delete them, but stopped when he saw one that said, 'Can't get a girl? Visit G.I.R.L.com and order one now!' With some consideration, he clicked on it, and searched until he found a design he liked: A G.I.R.L. with double ponytails and Neko ears. Ren found no need to worry about money. He got that much money in a month's worth of allowance, and he had been saving just for something like this.
~!~
Ryo was blasting The Hell Song out of all the speakers in his room. How he wasn't completely deaf yet made him shrug, then turn back to staring at the sheet music he had composed online. A pop up stopped him from started the music writing again. 'Can't get a girl? Visit G.I.R.L.com and order one now!' It didn't take long for him to snatch up the offer and browse. He ended up with one that had long carrot hair and hidden ears. He seriously couldn't wait till it arrived. Then, he looped his song, pulled the sheet music back up, and completely forgot about it until the day the box appeared.
~!~
Keith was surfing for porn sites online and complaining about the pop ups. "Why do they ask if you're 18 and over? All you have to do is click yes. Even a 17 year old could figure that out." He smiled at his own joke, and went back to surfing for the sites. Then a pop up appeared. 'Can't get a girl? Visit G.I.R.L.com and order one now!' The thing was, Keith couldn't get a girl. They all called him a nasty perv, which he probably was. So he clicked on it, and ordered a G.I.R.L. with short white hair and doll ears.
~!~
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:04 pm
Plot
OK, so here's the scoop.
3 best friends who happen to be completely different have all decided they're going to buy a G.I.R.L., since they can't get real ones. The G.I.R.L.s will come in boxes one page after your first post. The G.I.R.L.s will be played by other characters. The guys all have something wrong with them that they don't want to admit. Something that isn't obvious. They think that a robotic girl would accept them even with their fault. THEY DO NOT KNOW EACH OTHER'S FAULTS. They have an obvious problem and the not obvious one. The characters are pre-made.
The RP starts on the first day of summer vacation. They don't know about each other's G.I.R.L.s until they go back to school together.
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:13 pm
Rules
1--No goddmodding, Mary Sue-ing, or any of that. I will go Mary Sue hunting once a week and picking out the characters that are overly perfect.
2--Each character has a distinct personality. Please, follow it.
3--PM me with your RP sample and the profile finished.
4--Name the PM 'shoot down'
5--Most of the character profiles will be already made, so just fill in what hasn't.
6--Keep it PG 17, please.
7--If you're going to swear(which you should, knowing the character ages), don't be a sailor with it. And don't censor the whole thing out, if you do at all. You're on the internet. I don't think your mom is going to read it over your shoulder.
8--No cybering. Not everyone is a sex obsessed freak like you, and we really don't want to read that stuff. If you MUST do it, do it in a PM, please.
9--Follow the Gaia Terms of Service, please and thank you.
10--If I have offended anyone, I am deeply apologetic.
11--Forget that 'shoot down' thing from before, call the PM 'Hate Mail' Instead.
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:27 pm
Profile Skeletons
Depending on the character you want to be, most of these will be filled out. It's up to you to fill in whatever is still empty. [b][color=red][size=18]Username:[/size][/color]
[color=orange][size=12]((Username info here))[/size][/color]
[color=red][size=18]RPC name:[/size][/color]
[color=orange][size=12]((RPC name here))[/size][/color]
[color=red][size=18]Age:[/size][/color]
[color=orange][size=12]((Age here))[/size][/color]
[color=red][size=18]Likes:[/size][/color]
[color=orange][size=12]((Likes here))[/size][/color]
[color=red][size=18]Dislikes:[/size][/color]
[color=orange][size=12]((Dislikes here))[/size][/color]
[color=red][size=18]Personality:[/size][/color]
[color=orange][size=12]((Personality here))[/size][/color]
[color=red][size=18]Biography:[/size][/color]
[color=orange][size=12]((Bio here))[/size][/color]
[color=red][size=18]Appearance:[/size][/color]
[color=orange][size=12]((Appearance here))[/size][/color]
[color=red][size=18]Other:[/size][/color]
[color=orange][size=12]((Other here))[/size][/color][/b]
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:11 pm
ProfilesAs I said before, the characters are mostly filled out already. The shells are here, so just work off of them.Username:
x--X--Star-ferns--X--x
RPC name:
Ren Cheng
Age:
17
Likes:
Fighting, action movies, collecting odd rings, and working out.
Dislikes:
Family love, Mushy stuff, Being fused over, and missing his work out sessions.
Personality:
Ren's pretty violent. He wants someone to protect, because otherwise all his practice is for nothing.
Biography:
Ren has always lived his life as an only child, and never wished for anything more. He got hooked on training when he was around 14, and has been training during every bit of availible free time he has. The truth is, he could never get a girl because he scared most of them. He has trouble saying how he feels about others, and always has. He never really had much of a backstory to himself.
Appearance:
Other:
Ren doesn't take easily to emotions, and relationships. it takes him a while to say what he wants to say, and mean it.Username
Dae Dae
RPC name:
Ryo Etchi
Age:
16
Likes:
Music, playing his instruments, composing music, girls with orange hair.
Dislikes:
Silence, being lonely, fights/arguments
Personality:
Ryo is laid back, the kind of 'we'll get there when we get there' person who doesn't care about much. This is good, because it means he never panics.
Biography:
Ryo is the oldest of three children and has a younger sister and brother. Lately he gets along with his sister, only a year younger, but has fallen out with his three years younger brother. Their parents divorced when Ryo was ten and now all three live with their mother. Ryo doesn't trust his mother's latest boyfriends and regrets having almost no time with his father. However, remembering how much his parents used to fight, he pretends to take the changes in stride.
Appearance:
Other:
((Other here))Username:
Smorgasmorgan
RPC name:
Keith Terrin
Age:
18
Likes:
Porn, girls with large breasts, making your mom jokes, being a pervert in general.
Dislikes:
Prudes, not having a date, veggies.
Personality:
Keith is...well, he's a pervert. Obviously. He spends his free time on the computer looking for porn sites, for god's sake. It's a wonder he still manages to be Christan.
Biography:
Keith's birth was a 'surprise' as his mother puts it, an 'accident' according to his father. Either way, he was unplanned. His parents had already raised three other children when Keith came along. He has two older brothers and one older sister. His siter, the youngest of the trio is fifteen years older than him. As a result, he's never been particularly close to his siblings. His parents have given him everything he could need. He isn't rich, exactly, but he is comfortable. He does wish he had a girlfriend, though.
Appearance:
Other:
He's still a virgin. Don't tell any of the other guys.
G.I.R.L.s:Username:
clara33
RPC name:
Unit #1760 'Mari'
Age:
6 weeks
Likes:
None yet. (Will be developed as the RP progresses.)
Dislikes:
See likes.
Personality:
Pretty mean, actually. 'Mari' is programmed to give tough love, but kinder when you really need her.
Biography:
Other then being built, nothing much. She is the doll sent to Ren.
Appearance:
Other:
Mari has cat ears not shown in the picture.Username:
Sora Kitten
RPC name:
Unit #2574 'Kara'
Age:
2 years
Likes:
None yet.
Dislikes:
See likes.
Personality:
A gentle G.I.R.L., 'Kara' gives boys that fuzzy feeling inside that makes them want the G.I.R.L. badly. Sadly, since she's such an old model, Kara has plenty of loses of memory.
Biography:
Kara, being one of the older models, does have a past. Even if she doesn't remember it. Kara was first purchased a year and a half ago. She had a master who loved her dearly. But, her old memory chip couldn't sustain everything from a year, and was sent back to the company, her mind erased. Half a year later, she was purchased again, by Ryo.
Appearance:
Other:
While most of the tasks she can perform fairly well, cooking is her absolute worst one; don’t ask her to cook unless it‘s absolutely necessary. She‘s managed to set water on fire, as well as nearly burn down a kitchen……….well, virtual simulation on during practice during training. This is all according to records, though, but Kara doesn‘t remember either one. She also has a very sweet yet charming smile, and is good with kids. Again, according to records, since she remembers not.Username:
Pickle relish
RPC name:
Unit #7628 'Lea'
Age:
6 months
Likes:
none yet.
Dislikes:
None yet.
Personality:
the 'older sister' like act is one to let boys know that she's ready to accept their crap.
Biography:
None yet. She is the doll sent to Keith.
Appearance:
Other:
Lea may seem friendly, but if she believes she isn’t being treated with respect, that friendliness will vanish instantly.
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 4:44 pm
Questions and Answers
Nothing yet.
...you might as well send me some.
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 4:47 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:31 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:20 pm
~!~Bump! We need more guys.~!~
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 7:26 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 5:37 pm
Ryo's alarm clock blared loud music into his room at the bright and early hour of, ah... eleven o' clock in the morning. Well, it was summer vacation. There was no point in waking up early. He laid there, face in his pillow for a few minutes before he finally decided to reach out and fumble the alarm clock switch to off. He really liked the song he woke up to, but the one after was way too bland for his tastes.
Sitting up on the edge of his bed and humming to himself, Ryo snatched up a pen and pad of paper from his bedside stand. He'd had this dream that he was sure he could make into a kick-a** song if he just wrote it down before he forgot it all. As he scribbled down notes, he suddenly thought of his G.I.R.L.com purchase. She should probably be arriving soon. He just hoped she looked like the pictures; finding hair just the right shade... well, it was easier than finding a real girl like that, but still.
Ryo climbed out of bed and grabbed his bathrobe to wear over the blue plaid boxers that made up last night's sleepwear. He'd just have a shower to really wake up, then he'd hammer out his song idea until he felt like breakfast.
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 6:38 pm
((I guess I'll go ahead and post. Oh, and in case we get uber far ahead before Clara gets back, I had actually given Kara some "other" information. I figured the cooking part would be especially important. xd Quote: While most of the tasks she can perform fairly well, cooking is her absolute worst one; don’t ask her to cook unless it‘s absolutely necessary. She‘s managed to set water on fire, as well as nearly burn down a kitchen……….well, virtual simulation on during practice during training. This is all according to records, though, but Kara doesn‘t remember either one. She also has a very sweet yet charming smile, and is good with kids. Again, according to records, since she remembers not. And again, if I post too early, let me know and I'll delete it.)) The early morning shifted a tad later, the sun slowly making it's normal journey higher in the sky. This was round the wonderful hour of around 11 o'clock, a delivery truck was making it's way to the Etchi house. In the back of the truck were mostly letters, maybe some small packages, packages wrapped up in bubblewrap, the normal mail works. But among all these get birthday cards and wishing well gifts, lay a rather large box in the corner of the van.
This box was human-sized, and looked a bit fancier than the rest of the boxes. It's color was a pretty dark blue, little gold swirls all around the box for decoration. A letter of some form was tapped to the front of said box. It was very pretty, but it was also protected tightly as to not spill the thing inside. Or should we say..........the girl. Well, alright, the robot G.I.R.L..
Inside the box lay a beautiful young lady, arms over herself in a thin X form as she lay peacefully with her eyes shut. She was off, of course, and a robot. Her hair was of a beautiful orange, her skin smooth as a newborn's, her shape thin and fragile as if she were a china doll, her dress a gorgeous snow white lined with the color of raven black, with sleeves that reached all the way to her hands in a pointed shape, as if they were separate from the dress. She wore tiny ballarina-looking shoes underneath her long dress.
Up front, the driver bore a slightly tired expression, the rather heavy figure slumped in his seat. His short hair was good for the heat, but his uniform was otherwise; it seemed to stick to him like butter to bread. He was blasting some overdone countrysong on his radio with a stick in his mouth, humming to it, but horribly and completely out of key.
"Ah, here's the stop." he murmured to himself, as he pulled into the driveway and parked. Getting out of the truck, he went around back and, once realizing which package he'd have to get, he groaned.
"Ah, dangit! The heavy fancy one. Sheesh, it's super fancy........there better be a fine woman in that box-HAHA! Oooh, who am I kidding? Nice while it lasted, though. Heh heh, women in boxes. That'll never happen...." he chuckled to himself as he picked up the box carefully and made it to the front door. Sitting the box on it's side and ringing the doorbell, he waited with impatience, careful not to let the box tip. Not like he cared, but best to avoid any lawsuits.
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Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:19 pm
"Mmmhmm...Oh yeah, baby! Mmm, yeah!" The usual low hum of perverted coments was streaming from Keith's mouth as he lurked on yet another porn site. After all, his parents had agreed to the "it's my business how I spend my money" stipulation he'd attached to the idea that he get a summer job. That's how he could afford the G.I.R.L. he'd ordered. Now she was worth a summer of "Do you want fries with that?"
Oh. Crap. His job!
His eyes flicked to the clock. 11:15 a.m.! He'd been surfing all night, and his shift started in half an hour. Gawd, he was screwed. He could call in sick today. He'd been working for all of one month now. He hadn't been sick, or ven late. Yeah, that's what he'd do. He grabbed his cellphone, and muted his computer. His boss answered on the first ring.
"Thank you for calling Burger World, how can I help you?"
"Pete?"
"Keith? What is it?"
"I-uh-I'm sick today."
"Oh. Sure, take the day off. Tomorrow too. The health inspector's supposed to be here, and I can't let him see anyone sick."
"Thanks, Pete."
"Get some sleep, Keith."
Pete hung up. Keith grinned. It had worked like a charm. And he had tomorrow off too. He crawled into bed, wondering when his G.I.R.L. would arrive.
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