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Jese Miyal

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Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:26 am

This is to show of some sketches of mine, I would never upload in a real art page, but since i'm a little~ proud of my work, i'd like to share.
Hope you like it ^~^
If not, say so.
I love critic that helps me get better mrgreen

This one is a character of mine. His name is Ate and he's the guardian of the south in my story. The ghost beside him is his servent and a 'thingsoul'.
It's lazily coloured in photoshop to define his looks >°>

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This is Miyal, a dead boy x3 another character of the same story ^^

Shinai Lucifer Morgenstern, same story. He's one of the 7 children of the devil. (i did this in school and i'm really proud of it ^~^")

That's it for a first
hope you like it ^°^ö

AND REMEMBER: It's all junk anyway XD

Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:45 pm

Interesting style. I like it!

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Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:52 pm

I'd like to give a bit of critique, if you don't mind. The bodies are a bit...I'm not sure how to describe it. They look almost girlish. My suggestion would be to flip through some anime drawing books or anatomy books to get an idea of differences between the genders.

Now for the good news. You have good head-to-body ratios. When I draw guys, the head tends to be a bit big, but your proportions are excellent. Also, I like the eyes and the detail you put into the horns in the third picture.

Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 12:09 am

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Interesting style. I like it!

Thank you ^^

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I'd like to give a bit of critique, if you don't mind. The bodies are a bit...I'm not sure how to describe it. They look almost girlish. My suggestion would be to flip through some anime drawing books or anatomy books to get an idea of differences between the genders.

Yeah you're right. For some reason i always have problems drawing male characters manly XD" as for the devil kid: he's only 12, so the girlish think was done on purpose, tought ^^
Thanks for your critique and the praise.
I worked hard on the porportion thing XD (my heads tend to be too big from time to time aswell)

Jese Miyal

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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:19 pm

it doesn't matter what people think, art is about showing your emotion. i like your first one 3nodding

Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 8:00 am

XxBlaze_dragonxX

it doesn't matter what people think, art is about showing your emotion. i like your first one 3nodding

thank u ^~^

Jese Miyal

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Jese Miyal

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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 8:08 am

sth i did for my school. Took some time @__@

Me from behind with wings x3

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i thought posting some more 'finished things' wouldn't hurt
hope you like it ^~^

Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:00 am

"We're born alone...

U have a very interesting drawing style and i like the thrid drawing[ nice horns] and i also like ur fifth drawing [the details in the wings amaze me]

...and we die alone." ~Me

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Jese Miyal

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:37 pm

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"We're born alone...

U have a very interesting drawing style and i like the thrid drawing[ nice horns] and i also like ur fifth drawing [the details in the wings amaze me]

...and we die alone." ~Me

Thank you ^°^v
your the second one, who calls my drawing style 'interesting'.
is it that unusual? >,>

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