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Yami! (Yea, I'm not too great at coloring.)

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Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 1:18 am

HIII~! This is my character, I just felt like drawing a cool picture and coloring it ....and scanning it. I know my coloring isn't so good but I try and I keep practicing!! <3 Here she is, Yami.

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<3 Thankies for looking~!

Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:24 am

This is actually very good whee

All I would really say is keep working on your style I would suggest adding more muscle tone to your character. Also work on detail (but I guess that fits into style) and work a tad on folding cloths...

just keep practicing you're doing very well. smile

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Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:34 pm

i like the coloring though nd i agree with gungirl in her comment on muscle tone
what bothers me is that yami's hip bone is to low and close to the belly button nd the line needs to be longer the line would go pretty close to where the pockets are on some pants - but higher, yea?
nd then the sunglasses the midlle part is too long, if you extend the shade that's on the left more to the right it'd look much better
one more thing i tihnk her left forearm is a bit too short, it should be about the same length as the upperarm .. sorry if that was too much critique sweatdrop

but overall i really like your character nd your style 3nodding

Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 7:37 pm

haha ur alot better at coloring then me thats for sure mrgreen and u detail it more then i ever can. like what the other people said just work on the muscle tone. other then that the picture is awsome :]