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[WIP] Critique teh anatomy please?

Ming Chen

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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 9:23 am

Okay...I drew this in the morning today, and I was pretty happy with the face (minus a few details). But then, when I started working on the torso, I realized that I have a problem. xP I have no idea how to draw torsos. >.<

I've been drawing for around a year and a half, since December of 06. The only thing is that I kind of stopped drawing during the last school year, because I was trying to focus on school work. And now...my anatomy suffers the consequences. <.<;

For this particular piece, I think that I made the waist and torso too small compared to the head. >.< I also think that the chest looks...odd. I'd love some critique/opinions on this image. Red lines for proportioning would be amazing.

<.<; And I also have absolutely no idea how to draw the arms. xD; Help please?

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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 11:01 am

It is not bad C: but it is a lot easier to draw when you have the proportions and pose planned out already C:
her boobs look a bit flat and square...
I made a redline for you so I hope that it helps you a bit looking at it because I'm not good at explaning xD

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Ming Chen

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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 11:11 am

^^ Thank you! The redline helps alot. I've never been that good at planning out proportions beforehand. xD;

Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:21 am

For only drawing for a year and a half your advancement is quite admirable. eek
I applaud you on that. 3nodding
Since benedikte covered most of it, there is only one thing for me to say.
It could just be me, but I think he eyes are kinda big and go out to the side a bit far. sweatdrop
Please keep up the good work.

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Hayashi Kiko

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Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 2:39 am

Nice! Ganbatte kudasai! Keep it up! 3nodding

Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 4:22 pm

I love it...It does need some boob work, but I am not expert...I draw guys mainly because I usually draw the boobs too small or too big and I cannot get the hair down...LOL

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