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(I have decided to write a newer story in reality my Paladin story is already very long. Also dont ask about the title I was desprate for a name so thats what I came up with)
So here is my new story. This story is about a boy named Null Amay. He is an little Antisocial. and like any manga charater wears weird cloths. He lives in an area like L.A. The story takes place on a monday when Null is walking down an ally he accadently hits this man and thinks hes a bum. The man and him have a quick arugement. The man then ask what null values most. Null Answers in a low tone and then the snapes hi fingers and say's. "Play a game with me and ill give you back what you value." Null starts to laugh at the man. But then notices he has disapered. He then recives a cell phone call. The man from before say's You will find a PDA on the floor pick it up with the equipment belt. There is an image of the Mark you will be hunting to day. Since I like you if you complete this hunt you can go free no other games. Null dose what He is told but then decides that the man is crazy and dosent do what the man said. At midnight Null returns home but before He turns the door nob He is transported to a Black area. The man that he hit and sevral other people are standing there and say. "So we take it you want to paly the game long term. Good sign your name in blood to leave this place and start. This time Null dose as he was told and signs. The next thing He knows, he wakes up in an ally. He recives a text message saying welcome to the world of GRIM.
Ill start the story later after i get some things down

(Okay heres chapter 1)



"Null? NULL!!!! Wake up NULL!!!" Nulls little brother Mat said as he hit Null in the head. Null opend his eyes slighly and then pushed his little brother in his face back. Mat tumbled back, then stood up and shouted "Hey what was that for!"
"For being annoying." Null said in a low voice.
"Now go away."
"Hey listen mom told me to wake you up for school. So get up and get ready."Mat said as he walked over to him.
"Since when do I goto school?" Null asked.
"Thats what I said, but she said I dosent matter your going today." Mat answred.
"You either wake up now so she can take you, or your walkin the 10 blocks." Mat said as he left. Null rolled over and went back to sleep.

The alarm went off it read 8:05am. Null rolled over and looked at the time.
"Ah s**t. Now I only got 25mins to get ready and going." Null said as he sat up. In 10 Mins null had changed brushed his teeth and hair and was almost ready. He got his backpack and headed down stairs. The stairs creaked as he waked down. He entred the Kitchen. Sitting there on the table was a bag that read "Null". He took it and read the note attached to it.
"Dear Null I know that you went back to sleep and if your reading this it means your gona be late. I know that you dident make luch and the smallest bill I had was a 50 sorry. So I made you these sandwiches. One is for lunch the other for now since you dident eat breakfest. Now get moving you got school!" Null looked at it for a seconed and said. "How did she know i was going to be late?" Null took the note and crumbled it and stuck it in one of his pockets. He opened the bag and took one of the sandwiches out and took a bite. He held it in his mouth as he headed for the door. He put on his shoes and steped out.

He was surprized it was cloudy. He srugged and ate his sandwitch. He had been walking for a few minutes till He saw a group of people blocking the road and sidewalks. He walked up to the crowd and asked one of them. "Hey what happened? Why are you all standing here?" The landy answred "Oh well there was an accident with two cars and a young boy. Im afraid the road is closed." Null started to push his way through the crowd until He saw the caution tape. A LAPD cop Told him
"Hey you you cant go by Were investiagting."
"Yea but thats the way to my school and this is the shortest path." Null replied.
"Sorry kid your just gona have to find anthor way around."
"Damn it I dont have time." Null said as he turned around.
"Hey you shouldent talk to a cop like that." The cop said
"Ah bite me." Null said as he took off.
"You little punk, hey come back here." the cop said as Null took off.

Null contiuned to run, Her turned down an ally the only thing in his mind was get to school like mom asked. Just then he was sent flying. "Ow what the hell triped me?" Null asked.
"Well that would have been my leg if you dident notice said a calm but deep voice. I think you should say your sorry." The voice said Null looked around and finaly saw the origin of the voice. It was a man dressed in a hooded cloak.
"Well maybe if you wernt a lazy bum and get your a** off the ground I would have triped over you." Null said in reply.
The man laughed and said. "I can see that you have no respect for your elders. So heres a tip kid. Respect evrey one theres no tellin how they can effect your life."
"Well the only way a bum like you can effect my life is by makeing me even later." Null said as he stood up. He looked around the man was gone. Null took a step forword and then jumped back in surprize the hodded man was infront of him.
"SO let me get this straight I am nothing but a waist of time. Huh what do you value most Null?" The man asked.
"How did you....how do you know my name?" Null asked a little shocked.
"Thats not important whats important is what do you value most?" The man asked again. Null looked up at him and said.
"What I value most is. That is what I value most." Null answered.
"Wow that is so unlike you Null well anyway that Is now gone you will never see --- again. --- Is gone forever unless you play this game with me. Ill give you one chance to win if you win You wont have to play the long verson." The man said
Although Null couldent see his face he knew he was smiling.
"Alright Ill play, whats this game of yours?" Null asked.
"Well thats good, The game is called GRIM its simple really all you have to do is find your mark and beat it." The man said as he turned around.
"Thats your game? Uh fine how do I find my mark?"
"Simple you wear this." The man pulled out an equipment belt.
"This is known as your GRIM belt. It holds evrey thing you need, it holds your GPDU(Grim player Device Updater), MS(Mark Sensor), and your MSDS (Mark System Data Sensor's). Oh yea and Your Karta weapon."
The hooded man said as he handed Null the belt.
"Alright I got it now I have to go." Null said as he ran out of the Ally.
"Null you have til 10:00Pm to finish your mark." The man shouted after him.
"Ah whats the matter Seth getting attached to your targets." The voice said.
"You can come out Anubis I know your there." Seth said with his arms crossed. The walls seemed to warp as anthor hooded person steped out.
"So do you think he'll find his mark." Anubis asked.
"Are you kiding me its Null he wont even bother to try to play." Seth said.
"Dont forget we pick people like him for a reason. They dont expect the game to be real." Seth the turned and said.
"All we got to do is wait til 10 and there a new member to the game."
"You truly are heartless arnt you Seth Anubis said as she followed.

Null arived at his 3rd period late and was sent to the office. "Listen Im late because there was a road block and I had to take the long way." Null said to the dean.
"Listen Nick, or would you rather me call you Null like all the other kids call ypu? You havent been to school or your classes for day's. You get detention for a month. although I dont know what that will do you dont even come to regular class." The dean said as he sat back in his chair.


Nulls attention was focused on the clock it read 5:25. "Detention is almost over." Null said to hime self.
"Null, what is the element CU?"
"Copper." Null answered not even bothering to look.
"No its.....copper? Okay whats AU, and AG ?" The teacher asked
"Gold and silver" Null answred as He stood up and headed for the door.
"Where are you going?" The teacher asked. right as the bell rang.


(Will contiune later mrgreen )

Yea Ive kinda hit a Snag for the next chapter So if you have any advice Id lik to hear it

Thanks for the advices I know thats how you make a converstaion but it would make the part to long sweatdrop
I did it I came up with how He answers but im not sure how to write the rest

Okay I got that part down I just need to add more any one got some advise some pointers.

I know but I like to hear what people have to say. It sometimes gives Ideas on how to write mrgreen

Cool thanks I know sevral things are wrong annd Thank you for pointing them out mrgreen
fro spelling and speacking ill edit it later mrgreen

Thanks you kow whats funny I origanly started to draw it then i wrote it