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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:18 am


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:45 am


I like your 1st picture. heart The 2nd pic- it would be better if the girl's eyes were bigger^^

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Tarff

PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:15 pm


The chibi is absolutely adorable and I don't see much wrong with it (if anything). 4laugh The hair's a little odd but it works for the chibi I think. The second, her face is a little slanted or something. The eyes don't really line up with the mouth. The mouth looks sorta off but then you see that it's actually where it's supposed to be so the eyes are too much to the left. Also, her mouth looks very comical for that picture. I don't know if that's a bad or a good thing. Also, the arm looks kinda like Harry Potter's did when Gilderoy Lockhart removed all his bones from it. I think that her elbow should go higher ( above head even; stand in her pose, your elbow will naturally go higher than your head), and have her arm going at a downward angle (straight) that will connect to that hand. The armpit area for that arm will then have to be adjusted because when you lift your arm like that the armpit area stretches (like your chibi!). rofl The knees are also a bit low on the second picture. If you just moved them up a little then the lower legs would match a little better and the legs won't look as strange(?). Other than that, I really like them. Even with the mistakes, I really like them. They're cute. And I like how you had more detail in the second one. 3nodding
PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:29 am


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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 3:34 pm


umm.....the pictures are very nice, but I have a suggestion:

the smaller character is nice, but she could use a mouth if you want her to have one

the larger character: I think that maybe you should lengthen the arm a bit (the one that is raised) and the shin portion of the legs should be lentghened also. The shin area is really small compared to the thigh portion of the leg.........and you can basically follow what the other guy before me suggested.............so happy drawing. mrgreen
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