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 Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 7:39 pm
Why did love touch us?
I don't understand.....
Why would a thing so beautiful...
Touch something like us?
When we became what we are...
That feeling should have disappeared....
Why didn't it?
My Darling....
You promised you wouldn't leave me....
Along in the dark.....
I shouldn't be afraid....
Our kind shouldn't be afraid of the one thing that was there for us...
Yet Why am I?
My Darling
My Dark Darling
My Fallen Angel
I miss you so....
I look out the window waiting for you to return…
Waiting to see your beautiful face…
My Darling…
I promised you I would wait until your return…
Now, many years later I still wait…
Why am I crying for the first time?
After Many years……Alone
My Darling…
When will the day come?
When will the day you return to me…
I remember the last words you told me…
Never give up…
I will return to you…
My Angel of the Night….
My Light in the Dark….
My Vampire Queen…
My Bella…
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Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:57 am
Nice poem, I like how you embed your feelings with the words, keep it up
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:01 pm
You did a wonderful job of conveying the message. The added "...." to continue a strangled thought was well done.
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