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 Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 2:25 pm
Have you ever looked up
in the sea of blue
to see the sad face
of the man in the moon
Looking down, staring
on me and you.
If you stare too long
into his sad face
his mood will change
expressions erased
looking down from
outer space.
Listen to the night
and hear him scream
as tears from eyes
down cheek do stream
this emotional nightmare
fading to dream....
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:50 am
Wow. I really liked this one. Simple and yet deep and quite easy to read! Makes me want to rush outside to look at the night sky tonight! smile
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Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 5:33 pm
 
this is pretty cool..... excelent personification. *thumbsup*
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 3:12 am
A simple yet meaningful poem, I like it a lot.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 9:01 am
wow!!
its wonderful!! smile
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