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 Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 1:10 am
Like I said in the other Hitori thread, I was going to draw her to try and reflect the fact that she is going to have twins. does it look like I have captured that idea?
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Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 10:15 am
Well, you definitely got the idea down that she was having twins. I just have a couple notes of critique (don't worry, I'll post some stuff soon too so everybody can critique my stuff too! rofl ):
Her right eye is on the far side of her face so it should be a tad bit smaller, with maybe and increased angle of it ( maybe, I wouldn't know until the eye was a little smaller, and a little more to the right), and the part where her butt is on the seat, if you look at it she's at a weird angle or something. Like, her body doesn't coincide with the angle of that seat right there. Maybe try making that side of her a little more parallel to the lines of the seat like you did with the other leg (but it doesn't have to totally be parallel, she still needs her womanly curves down there rofl ). Yup. 3nodding But your picture is very good. Are you going to color it? confused
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Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 7:41 pm
lol thats good ^.^
hm you might be right on that eye thing ... hmmm
yea the perspective is thrown out on either the seat of Hitori herself. but I wanted her to not be seated completely against the back of the seat, sort of at an angle, but I see the weird in the angle now o,o hmmm.
I may color it I dunno yet XP;
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Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 7:58 pm
She's cute...I love her blushing face. Great shading on her belly too, it looks crowded in there!
The crit: The inner hand looks a but odd, I think it is the thumb that looks off. Also, the angle she is seated at looked really uncomfortable for a lady that pregnant. I feel like she needs a pillow or something there to make her look less awkward...otherwise I don't know why she sit that way, it would be rather painful to her back.
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Profitable Conversationalist
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Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 8:59 pm
hehe thanks I really enjoyed doing the shading ^,^
sure is crowded, lol,
a boy and a girl is what was decided for the gender ^.^
hm, yea, you are rigt that hand foes look funny and I think you are right on the reason as well XD that thumb is positioned funny O,o
3 reasons for the couch thing being wrong
1.(the excuse) she's just getting ready to complain and ask for help up off the comfy futon bed thing.
2. I am AWFUL at perspective especially on inanimate objects.
3. the futon thing was sorta slapped on as an after thought to make her posture not seem so uhm, uncomfortable... xD
maybe when I fix her hand I will look at changing the angle of the futon to the correct angle. I'm thinking maybe rotate it clockwise a few degrees
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 11:46 pm
Nice, it really looks like a mother pregnant with twins. Bid, round belly(LOL) xD
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:14 pm
that's perfect! she definatley looks pregnant!
*agrees with couch nd thumb critique*
oh nd yay that's exactly the kinda outfit i pictured for her - looks very flowy 3nodding great job!
nd how rude who said no in the poll without an explanation?
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 11:38 pm
o,o
thanks Hayashi >W< hehe
yay Mangaoverdose >w< thanks I love this picture of her >W<
yea I figured I would leave that more flowy outfit for her when she ismore pregnant like in that pic ^.^
X_X
I need help figuring out the thumb. I've been fussing with it, in my free time... though with the couch I think I got it figured out.
yea I know sheesh, if you're gonna say no tell me why ~.~;
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 12:23 pm
joo welcome biggrin
well i think if you keep the rest of the hand the same nd make the thumb in like a thumbs up position it'd look better? .. if that makes sense lol
yeah i really like how the whole thing came out its so cute nd pretty!
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 8:32 pm
Thats a really great idea Manga O.O
I will go try that >W<
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:45 pm
darklord_avalon Thats a really great idea Manga O.O I will go try that >W<
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